Zindagi Se Baat..........

by poppoetry on July 23, 2009, 05:53:19 PM
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«Reply #45 on: August 14, 2009, 04:45:27 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on August 14, 2009, 11:46:55 AM
NICE ..POPP JI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Sheba ji
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«Reply #46 on: August 14, 2009, 05:59:38 PM »
Quote from: Mann on August 14, 2009, 08:04:04 AM
Wah wah Kya Baat hai Pooja.. Bahut acchi baaten Likhi hain aapne aur samjhaane ki koshish bhi ki hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


Berukhi Ke Sath Suni, Meri Dard-e-Daastan Usne,
Mera Dil Qadmo Tale Rakh Diya Sitamgiri Se Usne.....

Mere Ashqon Ko Usne, Fareb Ka Samandar Samjha,
Aur Muskura Ke Kisi Aur Ka Daaman Thaam Liya Usne.....

Maaf Karna Sahyad Uski Fitrat Me Nahi Hai Shaamil,
Zulm-o-Sitam Dhaane Ki Mujhpe, Aadat Daal Li Usne...

Ab Nazar Milaate Bhi Ek, Dar Sa Lagta hai Usse,
Kuch Aise Lamha Lamha Maanra Mujhe, Seekh Liya Usne..!!


**~** Mann **~**
bahut acche Mann ji....dard hai in alfaazon mein


Na jaane kyu teri kahaani khuch apni si lagati hai
Lagta hai jaise ye shabd mujhse hi sarokaar rakhte hai

Mai khud gujari hu in raahon se,isliye tujhse kehti hu
Wo aaj bhi apne dil mein tere liye satkaar rakhti hai

Teri galtiyon k kaaran hi thaamaa hoga usne daaman kisi aur ka
Gum hai use bhi iska,isliye khud ko tujhse dur karti hai

Aankho se dekha har pal sach nahi hota dost....
Jaakar dekh use sirf ek baar
Tujhe takleef dekar khud bhi wo lamha lamha marti hai
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«Reply #47 on: August 14, 2009, 06:03:34 PM »
Quote from: poppoetry on August 14, 2009, 05:59:38 PM
bahut acche Mann ji....dard hai in alfaazon mein


Na jaane kyu teri kahaani khuch apni si lagati hai
Lagta hai jaise ye shabd mujhse hi sarokaar rakhte hai

Mai khud gujari hu in raahon se,isliye tujhse kehti hu
Wo aaj bhi apne dil mein tere liye satkaar rakhti hai

Teri galtiyon k kaaran hi thaamaa hoga usne daaman kisi aur ka
Gum hai use bhi iska,isliye khud ko tujhse dur karti hai

Aankho se dekha har pal sach nahi hota dost....
Jaakar dekh use sirf ek baar
Tujhe takleef dekar khud bhi wo lamha lamha marti hai

wah wah bahut hi khoob Poetry ji




SOCHKAR MAIN YEH GHABRA JATA HU
BICHADKAR USSEY MAIN PACHTATA HU
KUCH TOH RAHI HOGI MAJBOORI
KU NAHI MILNEY MAIN USSEY JATA HU



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #48 on: August 15, 2009, 03:41:59 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 14, 2009, 06:03:34 PM
wah wah bahut hi khoob Poetry ji




SOCHKAR MAIN YEH GHABRA JATA HU
BICHADKAR USSEY MAIN PACHTATA HU
KUCH TOH RAHI HOGI MAJBOORI
KU NAHI MILNEY MAIN USSEY JATA HU



JASBIR SINGH


bahut bahut shukriya jasbir ji........

Aapne bahut acchi baat kahi Applause Applause
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«Reply #49 on: August 15, 2009, 06:35:42 PM »
Quote from: poppoetry on August 15, 2009, 03:41:59 PM
bahut bahut shukriya jasbir ji........

Aapne bahut acchi baat kahi Applause Applause


thanks poetry ji...


jasbir singh
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«Reply #50 on: September 12, 2009, 05:17:28 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on August 14, 2009, 05:59:38 PM
bahut acche Mann ji....dard hai in alfaazon mein


Na jaane kyu teri kahaani khuch apni si lagati hai
Lagta hai jaise ye shabd mujhse hi sarokaar rakhte hai

Mai khud gujari hu in raahon se,isliye tujhse kehti hu
Wo aaj bhi apne dil mein tere liye satkaar rakhti hai

Teri galtiyon k kaaran hi thaamaa hoga usne daaman kisi aur ka
Gum hai use bhi iska,isliye khud ko tujhse dur karti hai

Aankho se dekha har pal sach nahi hota dost....
Jaakar dekh use sirf ek baar
Tujhe takleef dekar khud bhi wo lamha lamha marti hai

Pooja... Yeh Kya Likh diya aapne.. Such Me.. Aisa Laga Jaise Ek Succhaai Likh Di aapne.. Kai Baar Nahi Baar Baar Padh Maine aapke Likhe Likhe in Alfaazon Ko.. Aur Baar Dil Me Yehi Sawal aaya.. Kya Such Me wo bhi Yahi Sochti hogi..? Bahut Bahut khooooooooooo Pooja... Really Great & Very Touching Words..!! Applause Applause

Jane Subah Se Shaam Tak, Dil Ke Kitne Tukde Hote Hain,
Aur Bikhre Hue Un Tukdo Par, Mere Ashq Girte Hote Hain....

Isse Behtar Kya Jagah, Isse Behtar Kya Maut Hogi Meri,
Wo Khwaab Me aate Hain, To Kisi Aur Ki Baahon Me Hote Hain.....

Aalam-e-Sitam Ab to Kuch Is Hadd Tak Barpa Rahe Hain Wo,
Ke Aaj Apni Jaan Kaha Kar, Kisi Aur Se Wo Lipte Hote Hain....

Kaise Yakin Karle Hum, Ki Use Ab Bhi Mohabbat Hain Humse,
Jo Gair-e-Mehfil Me Meri Barbaadi Ke Jashn Manaate Hote Hain...!!

Tumne Na Dekha Tadapna Mera, Na Mujhe Sisakta Dekh E-Dost,
Hum To Aaj Bhi Unki Yaad Me Har Lamha, Til-Til Marte Hote Hain...!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #51 on: September 12, 2009, 05:29:11 PM »
Dil ko phad ke rakh dia hai aapne Vikas bhaijan...Apka dusra shaer toh bas kamal kargaya...Applause Applause

Pooja jeeee...Apne bhi bahaut bahaut bahaut acha likha hai...Touching words...

Baki sabne bhi behad acha likha hai...Applause
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«Reply #52 on: September 12, 2009, 05:34:41 PM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rahim Bhai Hausla Afzaai Ke liye... Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #53 on: September 12, 2009, 05:50:53 PM »
4 lines likh raha hoon...umeed hai pasand ayengi

Tere dil ke tukdon ko subah shaam mera Rabb hi toh nikharta hai,
Jab hota hai tumhari zindagi main andhera tab mera Parvardigar hi toh tumhe raasta dikhata hai,
Ager karni hai mohobat sachi toh uss Khuda se karo jo bewaffa nahin,
Tum bhale usse bhula do par woh har baar tumhe apni rehmaton se nawazta hai...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #54 on: September 27, 2009, 03:38:31 PM »
Quote from: Mann on September 12, 2009, 05:17:28 PM
Pooja... Yeh Kya Likh diya aapne.. Such Me.. Aisa Laga Jaise Ek Succhaai Likh Di aapne.. Kai Baar Nahi Baar Baar Padh Maine aapke Likhe Likhe in Alfaazon Ko.. Aur Baar Dil Me Yehi Sawal aaya.. Kya Such Me wo bhi Yahi Sochti hogi..? Bahut Bahut khooooooooooo Pooja... Really Great & Very Touching Words..!! Applause Applause

Jane Subah Se Shaam Tak, Dil Ke Kitne Tukde Hote Hain,
Aur Bikhre Hue Un Tukdo Par, Mere Ashq Girte Hote Hain....

Isse Behtar Kya Jagah, Isse Behtar Kya Maut Hogi Meri,
Wo Khwaab Me aate Hain, To Kisi Aur Ki Baahon Me Hote Hain.....

Aalam-e-Sitam Ab to Kuch Is Hadd Tak Barpa Rahe Hain Wo,
Ke Aaj Apni Jaan Kaha Kar, Kisi Aur Se Wo Lipte Hote Hain....

Kaise Yakin Karle Hum, Ki Use Ab Bhi Mohabbat Hain Humse,
Jo Gair-e-Mehfil Me Meri Barbaadi Ke Jashn Manaate Hote Hain...!!

Tumne Na Dekha Tadapna Mera, Na Mujhe Sisakta Dekh E-Dost,
Hum To Aaj Bhi Unki Yaad Me Har Lamha, Til-Til Marte Hote Hain...!!


**~** Mann **~**

bahut dard bhare alfaaz likhe hai aapne mann ji....lekin inta dard kyu....ab tak dard bahre alfaaz mai hi likh rahi rhi aur aap samjha rahe the.....ab mujhe hi samjhaana padega...


Khuch kehna mushkil lagta hai,Sun kar teri baatein
Din to gujar bhi jaata hai,nahi gujarti gum ki ye kaali raatein

Dekh usse gair ki baahon mein dil ko kaise sambhalta hai tu
Ye toh na maangi thi tere liye pyaar ki saugaatein

Dost kha hai to dost ki ek baat aaj tu maan le
Khushiyon se tu bekhabar,khushiyon ka daaman thaam le

Bikhre lafjon ko samet k gar bna sakta hai tu ek nayi ghazal
Toh bikhari apni zindagi k palon ko tu samet le
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«Reply #55 on: September 27, 2009, 03:50:21 PM »
wah bahut khoob likha h apne nikhar ji
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«Reply #56 on: September 27, 2009, 06:35:23 PM »
 Applause  Applause Applause
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«Reply #57 on: September 28, 2009, 09:21:53 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Rahim ji , Rishi ji ,marhoom ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #58 on: September 28, 2009, 09:32:33 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on September 12, 2009, 05:50:53 PM
4 lines likh raha hoon...umeed hai pasand ayengi

Tere dil ke tukdon ko subah shaam mera Rabb hi toh nikharta hai,
Jab hota hai tumhari zindagi main andhera tab mera Parvardigar hi toh tumhe raasta dikhata hai,
Ager karni hai mohobat sachi toh uss Khuda se karo jo bewaffa nahin,
Tum bhale usse bhula do par woh har baar tumhe apni rehmaton se nawazta hai...

~Rahim~
bahut khoob kha aapne Rahim ji
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«Reply #59 on: October 03, 2009, 08:55:58 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on September 12, 2009, 05:50:53 PM
4 lines likh raha hoon...umeed hai pasand ayengi

Tere dil ke tukdon ko subah shaam mera Rabb hi toh nikharta hai,
Jab hota hai tumhari zindagi main andhera tab mera Parvardigar hi toh tumhe raasta dikhata hai,
Ager karni hai mohobat sachi toh uss Khuda se karo jo bewaffa nahin,
Tum bhale usse bhula do par woh har baar tumhe apni rehmaton se nawazta hai...

~Rahim~

Wah Rahim Bhai.. Kya Baat hai.. Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai Dost.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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