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sksaini4
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2012, 09:57:06 AM » |
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Suresh ji bahut achhee rachnaa pesh kee hai plz 6th line shaayas is tarah ho dekh leejiye "taqdeer thee n saath kabhee bhee." baaqee daad daad aur dher saaree daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2012, 11:51:05 AM » |
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usha rajesh
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2012, 05:04:30 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Suresh ji.  6th line mein shayad type karte waqt kuch mistake ho gayi hai. Kuch adhura sa lagta hai. |
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2012, 02:37:32 AM » |
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bahut khoob. really nicely written.
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2012, 07:52:34 AM » |
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2012, 07:55:38 AM » |
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qalb ji aapka tahe dil se bahut 2 shukriya. |
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2012, 07:56:29 AM » |
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #12 on: February 15, 2012, 07:58:06 AM » |
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2012, 12:05:35 PM » |
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yun hi nahin kubool kiya humne kisi baat ko
Hum zindagi se ladte- ladte haare hain...........
Daud bhi bahut lagai waqt bewaqt.
Zindagi ki daud mein girte-- uthate haare hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..................
Taqdeer the na saath kabhi bhi.
Hmne apne din apne haatho sanware hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..............
Kabhi zakhmi bhi hue kabhi dil pe chot khai
Phool to honge kisike,kaante hi humare hain
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..................
Aankhon ka noor hi jaata raha ya Rub.
Vo na samjha kisi tarha humen.
Ek baar to dekh lete apna samajh ke humen.
kaisi nazarein aur kahan ke nazaare hain.
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..............
Baahut khoob saheb, Nihayat hi khobsurat peshkash Abul Asad |
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2012, 03:49:29 PM » |
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