zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain............

by SURESH SANGWAN on February 13, 2012, 09:48:42 AM
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yun hi nahin kubool kiya humne kisi baat ko
Hum zindagi se ladte- ladte haare hain...........

Daud bhi bahut lagai waqt bewaqt.
Zindagi ki daud mein girte-- uthate haare hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..................

Taqdeer the na saath kabhi bhi.
Hmne apne din apne haatho sanware hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..............

Kabhi zakhmi bhi hue kabhi dil pe chot khai
Phool to honge kisike,kaante hi humare hain
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..................

Aankhon ka noor hi jaata raha ya Rub.
Vo na samjha kisi tarha humen.
Ek baar to dekh lete apna samajh ke humen.
kaisi nazarein aur kahan ke nazaare hain.
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..............
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2012, 09:57:06 AM »
Suresh ji bahut achhee rachnaa pesh kee hai plz 6th line shaayas is tarah ho dekh leejiye "taqdeer thee n saath kabhee bhee." baaqee daad daad aur dher saaree daad
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2012, 10:00:28 AM »
Suresh Ji......Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khooob

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Dil Se Likha Hua mehsoos Hua..Jawab mein Kuch Hum Bhi Likhte Chale..


Jo Chamak Rahe Hai Aakash mein
Woh Bhi Toote Hue Sitaare Hai

Beech Bhawar Mein Sawaar Hai kashtee
 Aur Bahut Door Woh KinaareN Hai

Yehi Zindagi Hai Aur Yeh Naa Soch,
Ke Yahan Jeetne Waale  Saare Hai..!!!!!

Hum Sab Bhi Zindagi Se Aksar, 
Ladhte-Ladhte Hi Haare Hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2012, 10:03:10 AM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 13, 2012, 09:48:42 AM
yun hi nahin kubool kiya humne kisi baat ko
Hum zindagi se ladte- ladte haare hain...........

Daud bhi bahut lagai waqt bewaqt.
Zindagi ki daud mein girte-- uthate haare hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..................

Taqdeer ne na saath kabhi bhi.
Hmne apne din apne haatho sanware hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..............

Kabhi zakhmi bhi hue kabhi dil pe chot khai
Phool to honge kisike,kaante hi humare hain
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..................

Aankhon ka noor hi jaata raha ya Rub.
Vo na samjha kisi tarha humen.
Ek baar to dekh lete apna samajh ke humen.
kaisi nazarein aur kahan ke nazaare hain.
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..............
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed



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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2012, 11:51:05 AM »
 waah sureshji

Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2012, 11:52:15 AM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 13, 2012, 09:48:42 AM
yun hi nahin kubool kiya humne kisi baat ko
Hum zindagi se ladte- ladte haare hain...........

Daud bhi bahut lagai waqt bewaqt.
Zindagi ki daud mein girte-- uthate haare hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..................

Taqdeer ne na saath kabhi bhi.
Hmne apne din apne haatho sanware hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..............

Kabhi zakhmi bhi hue kabhi dil pe chot khai
Phool to honge kisike,kaante hi humare hain
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..................

Aankhon ka noor hi jaata raha ya Rub.
Vo na samjha kisi tarha humen.
Ek baar to dekh lete apna samajh ke humen.
kaisi nazarein aur kahan ke nazaare hain.
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..............
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed



bahut khoob suresh ji..........!
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2012, 05:04:30 PM »
Bahut khoob Suresh ji. Applause Applause Applause
6th line mein shayad type karte waqt kuch mistake ho gayi hai. Kuch adhura sa lagta hai.
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2012, 02:37:32 AM »
bahut khoob. really nicely written.
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2012, 07:52:34 AM »
sksaini ji daad dene ka aur apna keemati waqt dene ka bahut 2 shukriya.
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 13, 2012, 09:57:06 AM
Suresh ji bahut achhee rachnaa pesh kee hai plz 6th line shaayas is tarah ho dekh leejiye "taqdeer thee n saath kabhee bhee." baaqee daad daad aur dher saaree daad
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2012, 07:54:53 AM »
khwaishji aapka jawaab kya lajawaab hai.
bahut khoob hai jo ye aapka jawaab hai.
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daad dene aur hausla afzahi ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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Quote from: khwaish on February 13, 2012, 10:00:28 AM
Suresh Ji......Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khooob

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil Se Likha Hua mehsoos Hua..Jawab mein Kuch Hum Bhi Likhte Chale..


Jo Chamak Rahe Hai Aakash mein
Woh Bhi Toote Hue Sitaare Hai

Beech Bhawar Mein Sawaar Hai kashtee
 Aur Bahut Door Woh KinaareN Hai

Yehi Zindagi Hai Aur Yeh Naa Soch,
Ke Yahan Jeetne Waale  Saare Hai..!!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hum Sab Bhi Zindagi Se Aksar, 
Ladhte-Ladhte Hi Haare Hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2012, 07:55:38 AM »
qalb ji aapka tahe dil se bahut 2 shukriya.
Quote from: qalb on February 13, 2012, 10:03:10 AM

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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2012, 07:56:29 AM »
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mann ji aapka tahe dil se shukriya.
Quote from: mann.mann on February 13, 2012, 11:51:05 AM
waah sureshji

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«Reply #12 on: February 15, 2012, 07:58:06 AM »
usha ji aapka tahe dil se bahut 2 shukriya.
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aapne bilkul theek kaha.
6th line ab humne correct kar di hai.
soory.
Quote from: usha rajesh on February 13, 2012, 05:04:30 PM
Bahut khoob Suresh ji. Applause Applause Applause
6th line mein shayad type karte waqt kuch mistake ho gayi hai. Kuch adhura sa lagta hai.
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2012, 12:05:35 PM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 13, 2012, 09:48:42 AM
yun hi nahin kubool kiya humne kisi baat ko
Hum zindagi se ladte- ladte haare hain...........

Daud bhi bahut lagai waqt bewaqt.
Zindagi ki daud mein girte-- uthate haare hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..................

Taqdeer the na saath kabhi bhi.
Hmne apne din apne haatho sanware hain.
Hum zindgi se ladte ladte haare hain..............

Kabhi zakhmi bhi hue kabhi dil pe chot khai
Phool to honge kisike,kaante hi humare hain
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..................

Aankhon ka noor hi jaata raha ya Rub.
Vo na samjha kisi tarha humen.
Ek baar to dekh lete apna samajh ke humen.
kaisi nazarein aur kahan ke nazaare hain.
Hum zindagi se ladte ladte haare hain..............
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed


Baahut khoob saheb,

Nihayat hi khobsurat peshkash

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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2012, 03:49:29 PM »
shukriya asad ji.
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