Zindagi

by EpicLover on February 06, 2012, 04:16:27 AM

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EpicLover

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My first shayari, but I would love to have some comments, so I can improve. Usual Smile

Yeh Suhana Mausaum Badal Jayega,
Lekin Woh Khushi Ka Pal Hamesha Yaad Ayega,
Milna Bicharna Toh Kudrat Ka Khel Hai,
Par Hamari Zindagi Mein Aap Jaisa Koi Aur Nahi Ayega!
- Gill


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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2012, 05:53:29 AM »

nice presented keep it up


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EpicLover

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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2012, 06:03:57 AM »

Thanks.


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khujli

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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2012, 06:06:06 AM »

Quote from: EpicLover on February 06, 2012, 04:16:27 AM

My first shayari, but I would love to have some comments, so I can improve. Usual Smile

Yeh Suhana Mausaum Badal Jayega,
Lekin Woh Khushi Ka Pal Hamesha Yaad Ayega,
Milna Bicharna Toh Kudrat Ka Khel Hai,
Par Hamari Zindagi Mein Aap Jaisa Koi Aur Nahi Ayega!
- Gill


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sksaini4

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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2012, 06:30:51 AM »


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Abul Asad

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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2012, 07:14:29 AM »

Quote from: EpicLover on February 06, 2012, 04:16:27 AM

My first shayari, but I would love to have some comments, so I can improve. Usual Smile

Yeh Suhana Mausaum Badal Jayega,
Lekin Woh Khushi Ka Pal Hamesha Yaad Ayega,
Milna Bicharna Toh Kudrat Ka Khel Hai,
Par Hamari Zindagi Mein Aap Jaisa Koi Aur Nahi Ayega!
- Gill

Nice

Abul Asad


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EpicLover

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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2012, 07:35:06 AM »

Thank you friends. Usual Smile


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saahill

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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2012, 07:43:52 AM »

boht khoob keep writing we can and wil with u


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mkv

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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2012, 05:29:34 PM »

good one


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M.ASGHAR MIRPURI

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Re: Zindagi

«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2012, 03:49:20 PM »

Quote from: EpicLover on February 06, 2012, 06:03:57 AM

Thanks.

Quote from: EpicLover on February 06, 2012, 04:16:27 AM

My first shayari, but I would love to have some comments, so I can improve. Usual Smile

Yeh Suhana Mausaum Badal Jayega,
Lekin Woh Khushi Ka Pal Hamesha Yaad Ayega,
Milna Bicharna Toh Kudrat Ka Khel Hai,
Par Hamari Zindagi Mein Aap Jaisa Koi Aur Nahi Ayega!
- Gill

BEAUTIFUL.........ASGHAR