Zindagi

by EpicLover on February 06, 2012, 04:16:27 AM
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My first shayari, but I would love to have some comments, so I can improve. Usual Smile


Yeh Suhana Mausaum Badal Jayega,
Lekin Woh Khushi Ka Pal Hamesha Yaad Ayega,
Milna Bicharna Toh Kudrat Ka Khel Hai,
Par Hamari Zindagi Mein Aap Jaisa Koi Aur Nahi Ayega!
- Gill
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the soul shaker
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2012, 05:53:29 AM »
nice presented keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2012, 06:03:57 AM »
Thanks. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2012, 06:06:06 AM »
My first shayari, but I would love to have some comments, so I can improve. Usual Smile


Yeh Suhana Mausaum Badal Jayega,
Lekin Woh Khushi Ka Pal Hamesha Yaad Ayega,
Milna Bicharna Toh Kudrat Ka Khel Hai,
Par Hamari Zindagi Mein Aap Jaisa Koi Aur Nahi Ayega!
- Gill

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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2012, 06:30:51 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2012, 07:14:29 AM »
My first shayari, but I would love to have some comments, so I can improve. Usual Smile


Yeh Suhana Mausaum Badal Jayega,
Lekin Woh Khushi Ka Pal Hamesha Yaad Ayega,
Milna Bicharna Toh Kudrat Ka Khel Hai,
Par Hamari Zindagi Mein Aap Jaisa Koi Aur Nahi Ayega!
- Gill
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2012, 07:35:06 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2012, 07:43:52 AM »
boht khoob keep writing we can and wil with u
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2012, 05:29:34 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2012, 03:49:20 PM »
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My first shayari, but I would love to have some comments, so I can improve. Usual Smile


Yeh Suhana Mausaum Badal Jayega,
Lekin Woh Khushi Ka Pal Hamesha Yaad Ayega,
Milna Bicharna Toh Kudrat Ka Khel Hai,
Par Hamari Zindagi Mein Aap Jaisa Koi Aur Nahi Ayega!
- Gill
BEAUTIFUL.........ASGHAR
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