Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel):Shayri-E-Dard

sajid_ghayel

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Kab aayee jane subah, kab sham ho gayee
Kuch is tarah tere bina, zindagi tamam ho gayee

Waris tha main akayla, na batee gayee virasat
Barbadiyaan shehar ki, mere nam ho gayee

Woh ghabraker mohabbat se, kar bhaithe bewafaiee
Aur meri wafa yaro, badnaam ho gayee

Mera raaz_daar mujhse, aakhe laga churane
Jo kahi na thi humne, batein woh bhi aam ho gayee

Mere haq me kaun kehta, kaun deta meri safaiee
Duniya jab yeh sari, husn ki ghulam ho gayee

Nahi guftugu ka salika, jise kehta tha zamana
Usi GHAYEL se ab GHAZLE, hum_kalam ho gayee

Kab aayee jane subah, kab sham ho gayee
Kuch is tarah tere bina, zindagi tamam ho gayee

-Sajid Ghayel-


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deepika_divya

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 07:03:36 AM »

Wah kya baat hai sajid ji.. Very nice lines...


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karndhar

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 07:20:32 AM »

Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji, Excellent !!!!!!!


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chitralsony

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2009, 07:42:38 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 09, 2009, 06:53:56 AM

subhanallah ghayel ji bhot khoob ,
dori ka yay tilasam oskay liayy karger raha
kon kehta hay kay wo bicher kai tum say mutabr raha
jo tum say bichernay kay malal kay sath safr may raha
wohi wafa ka mara tairi nazer may elzam ki zad may raha
tu to na kr ghayel duniya kay ghulami ki yay batain janaa
taira mehboob tuj say dur hokay qaid tairay badan may raha
kon kehta hay kay ata nahi tuj ko guftogu ka saliqa
jo tuj say hamkalam raha pholon say bharay chaman may raha


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Talat

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2009, 11:28:38 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 09, 2009, 06:53:56 AM

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji .. Very nice creation !


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Talat

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 11:29:23 AM »

Quote from: chitralsony on April 09, 2009, 07:42:38 AM

subhanallah ghayel ji bhot khoob ,
   dori ka yay tilasam oskay liayy karger raha
   kon kehta hay kay wo bicher kai tum say mutabr raha
   jo tum say bichernay kay malal kay sath safr may raha
   wohi wafa ka mara tairi nazer may elzam ki zad may raha
   tu to na kr ghayel duniya kay ghulami ki yay batain janaa
   taira mehboob tuj say dur hokay qaid tairay badan may raha
   kon kehta hay kay ata nahi tuj ko guftogu ka saliqa
   jo tuj say hamkalam raha pholon say bharay chaman may raha

Very nice reply Taiba Ji


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 12:26:32 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 09, 2009, 07:03:36 AM

Wah kya baat hai sajid ji.. Very nice lines...

Nawazish Karam hain Dost...


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2009, 05:48:36 PM »

Quote from: karndhar on April 09, 2009, 07:20:32 AM

Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji, Excellent !!!!!!!

Bohat bohat shukriyaa Karndhar....


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2009, 07:36:25 AM »

Quote from: chitralsony on April 09, 2009, 07:42:38 AM

subhanallah ghayel ji bhot khoob ,
   dori ka yay tilasam oskay liayy karger raha
   kon kehta hay kay wo bicher kai tum say mutabr raha
   jo tum say bichernay kay malal kay sath safr may raha
   wohi wafa ka mara tairi nazer may elzam ki zad may raha
   tu to na kr ghayel duniya kay ghulami ki yay batain janaa
   taira mehboob tuj say dur hokay qaid tairay badan may raha
   kon kehta hay kay ata nahi tuj ko guftogu ka saliqa
   jo tuj say hamkalam raha pholon say bharay chaman may raha

Tujhse bichad ke nikla, main dhoondne khudhi ko

Lekin jaha bhi pohcha, main tera hi raha....

-SG-


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2009, 09:22:48 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on April 09, 2009, 11:28:38 AM

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji .. Very nice creation !

Bohat shukriyaan Talat...


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