Zindagi tujhko har ik daur meiN ahsan dekha.

by Dr. Naim Sahil on February 07, 2010, 11:53:01 AM
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Jab kabhi apni tamnnaoN ka gulshan dekha,
Maine dil-soz zamaane ko bhi dushman dekha,

Apne baare mein ghalat fahmi hui hai jab bhi,
maine har baar purana koi darpan dekha.

Is qadar khoya hua tha main tiri yaadoN meiN,
Sahra dekha na kabhi raah meiN gulshan dekha.

Kaifiyat dil ki byaN karti thi ankheN sab ki,
Maine har shakhs ka bheega hua daaman dekha.

Dushmani meiN bhi muhabbat se vo pesh aata hai,
Uske jaisa na koi dost na dushman dekha.

Ho gaya uski maiN azmat ka jahaN meiN qaail,
Jab kahiN bhi kisi daana ko fir-o-tan dekha.

Tera shaidaee hooN maiN roz-e-azal se 'Sahil'
Zindagi tujhko har ik daur meiN ahsan dekha.

 
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2010, 01:36:39 PM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Sahilji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Aur khoobsurat ghazal Likhe.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2010, 07:07:09 PM »
bahut khoob sahil ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2010, 10:24:55 AM »
Nice Sahil Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 10:39:31 AM »
Naim Sahab AOA. Bahot behtreen ghazal kahi hai aapne. Taghazzul se pur ye creation waqai tareef ke layaq hai. Shayari ka hunar kya cheezh hai ye is ghazal mein namoodar hota hai. Aapki agli ghazal ka intezaar rahega.
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2010, 07:43:35 AM »
Jab kabhi apni tamnnaoN ka gulshan dekha,
Maine dil-soz zamaane ko bhi dushman dekha,

Apne baare mein ghalat fahmi hui hai jab bhi,
maine har baar purana koi darpan dekha.

Is qadar khoya hua tha main tiri yaadoN meiN,
Sahra dekha na kabhi raah meiN gulshan dekha.

Kaifiyat dil ki byaN karti thi ankheN sab ki,
Maine har shakhs ka bheega hua daaman dekha.

Dushmani meiN bhi muhabbat se vo pesh aata hai,
Uske jaisa na koi dost na dushman dekha.

Ho gaya uski maiN azmat ka jahaN meiN qaail,
Jab kahiN bhi kisi daana ko fir-o-tan dekha.

Tera shaidaee hooN maiN roz-e-azal se 'Sahil'
Zindagi tujhko har ik daur meiN ahsan dekha.

 
Wah wah wah! Sahil Saheb! Ghazab ki shayari ka namoona hai ye ghazal. Aik pur-lutf, pur-weqaar, pur-maGhz aur sheriyat se sarabor ghazal hai ye aapki. BaDi beqaraari ke saath aapki ghazloN ka intezaar rahega. HazaaroN daad qulbul farmaayeN.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2010, 08:43:02 AM »
Bahut pasand aayee aapke kavita Dr.Sahil ji.very touching and mindblowing creation.excellent.
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2010, 06:28:57 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB SAHIL SAHAB BEHTREEEN PESHKASH..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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