~~Zindgi se mukti~~

by Tosha on August 16, 2006, 01:17:30 PM
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Tosha
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Naya to har pel hona hai
ek baar jo aaya ek baar jo gaya
dobara dershan nahi deta hai

per zindgi ke yeh pal
ek hi rang ki lagte hai
kab aate hhain kab jate hain
ahesas bhi nahi dilate hain

hum to uub gaye hai
kuch der aab sona hum chate hai
ki khubabon main hi dekh le rangeen zindgi
is zindgi se hum aab maukti chate hai
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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2006, 04:21:18 PM »
sirf kehne se mukati mil jaati toh hum  kab ke yeh jahaan chhor gaye hote
apne dard ke dariya mein kab ke dub ke so gaye hote  Usual Smile

per likha tumne bahut accha hai tosha dear ...per kyu likha hai? Puzzled !



kabhi kabhi yun bhi aksar ho jaata hai
zindagi ka koi suhaana sa manzar apna rang badal jaata hai

dil bethe bethe yun hi  ghabraane lag jaata hai
kahan milegi ab mukati yehi soch dil mein aane lagta hai

per yun sochne se kab insaan mukat ho payaa hai
jitna gehra dard ka sagar utna hi yeh sanasaar ajab sa nazar aaya hai
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2006, 04:37:58 PM »
SubhaanAlaaah......Tosha and Ranju Usual Smile


Beasar Parwana tha.....
Toh Shama kyu use Jala na saki.....

Pyar kia tha dono ne kabhi......
ISliye unke Pyar ki Aatish aaj bhi na bhujj saki.........!!!!!!!!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2006, 09:48:29 AM »
bahot  khoob   Toshu......  itne  din  baad  kuch  likhi  ho.....  very  nice  Ranjana....  BS........:lol:
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Tosha
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2006, 02:51:13 PM »
Likha q ... Puzzled ! hhmmm... Ranjna ji!! pata nahi.

Ek saksh ne pooche haal hamare
to hum apna haal-e-dastan unhe suna na sake

gum gaye khamoshiyon main kahi
hum dil ke yah uljhen suljha na sake

yuh to koi shikhwa nahi kise se
bas khud se shikayet kerne lage

gum hi to ahesas dilata hai kushi ka
to hum gum ko gale lagane chale
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Tosha
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2006, 02:53:48 PM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
SubhaanAlaaah......Tosha and Ranju Usual Smile


Beasar Parwana tha.....
Toh Shama kyu use Jala na saki.....

Pyar kia tha dono ne kabhi......
ISliye unke Pyar ki Aatish aaj bhi na bhujj saki.........!!!!!!!!!!!!


hum to aaj tak jal rahe hain
aab to khuda ka hi intezar hai
aatank hai daad hai zamane main
koi chamatkar ka intezzat hai
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Tosha
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2006, 02:54:14 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
bahot  khoob   Toshu......  itne  din  baad  kuch  likhi  ho.....  very  nice  Ranjana....  BS........:lol:


Thanx Ji :d
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2006, 03:08:14 PM »
Quote from: "Tosha"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
bahot  khoob   Toshu......  itne  din  baad  kuch  likhi  ho.....  very  nice  Ranjana....  BS........:lol:


Thanx Ji :d


ur  welcome  jee.........  bahot  der  baad  thanxxxx   boli   :lol:  :lol:  :lol:
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Tosha
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2006, 06:40:20 AM »
phool ne kaaton se mohabbat ko ki
umeed mamta ek us sparsh ke ki
mile zakham aur daard ke nishan
phoolo ne kaaton se mohabbat jo ki

kalpnayen hai madhur milan ki
maine zamane se chahat jo ki
daya main bhi chal bhara hai
mujhe zindgi main yeh seekh mili
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ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2006, 07:07:09 AM »
Quote from: "Tosha"
phool ne kaaton se mohabbat ko ki
umeed mamta ek us sparsh ke ki
mile zakham aur daard ke nishan
phoolo ne kaaton se mohabbat jo ki

kalpnayen hai madhur milan ki
maine zamane se chahat jo ki
daya main bhi chal bhara hai
mujhe zindgi main yeh seekh mili


is zindag ka yeh ajab sa chalan hai
har apana hi yahan kyu hamse apana daaman bachata hai
karte hain hum jin se pyaar ki aarzoo
wahi shakash hame dhoka kyu de jaata hai

karta hai kyu baar baar mera masoom dil yun etebaar kisi ka
jab yeh yun har aise hi thukarya jaata hai
kyu jaga leta hai dil mein ek umeed ka deepak
jab ki har baar koi naya zakaham apana hi de jaata hai!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2006, 07:21:19 AM »
chand ne poocha ek roz suraj se
tu kyo pal pal jalta hai?
jalta hai pal pal phir bhi jeeta hai?
teri aach ke angare bujha de doosri zindgi
phir bhi tu kyo nahi thamta hai?

suraj ke dia kuch iskadar jawab
jalna hi hai mera jeevan.
mere jalne se koi kushi kushi jeeta hai.
teri sheetalta mere hi doosra roop hai
kya mere bina tu iskadar chaman mai chamak sakta hai?
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2006, 07:51:31 AM »
Quote from: "Tosha"
chand ne poocha ek roz suraj se
tu kyo pal pal jalta hai?
jalta hai pal pal phir bhi jeeta hai?
teri aach ke angare bujha de doosri zindgi
phir bhi tu kyo nahi thamta hai?

suraj ke dia kuch iskadar jawab
jalna hi hai mera jeevan.
mere jalne se koi kushi kushi jeeta hai.
teri sheetalta mere hi doosra roop hai
kya mere bina tu iskadar chaman mai chamak sakta hai?


wow tosha ..bahut accha likha hai ...too good... =D>
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Tosha
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2006, 08:01:01 AM »
Thanx !! :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2006, 12:37:52 PM »
Bohat khoob Tosha & Ranjana...
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Tosha
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2006, 03:22:14 PM »
Thanx Aryaan!!
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