ZULM KI JO BHI INTAHA HO GEE ............... HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2012, 10:33:08 AM
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Zulm    ki  jo   bhi    intaha  ho  gee ,
Koi  naa   misl - e - Karbala   ho  gee


Aane wala   hai     daur - e - Dajjaali ,
Duniya   Aafat   mein   mubtila   hogee


Hans   ke  kab  tak  saheiN  sitam  tere ,
Sabr    ki    koi    intaha    ho   gee


Aap   kar   leiN    to    aapka    Andaaz ,
Hum   se   ho   jaaye    to   khata  hogee


Un  ki   HamdardiyaaN    urooj   pe   haiN,
Beti    Muflis    ki   be - rida   ho  gee


Jub  Woh  poochheiN  ge  Mudd'aa  kya  hai ,
Eik    chhoti   si    Ilteja     ho   gee


Aaye  ga   aisa   eik   din   bhi   'Hasan',
Poori   Be - bas   ki  jub   Dua   ho  gee
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2012, 10:38:41 AM »
meree to dua qubool ho gayee aapkaa kalaam padh kar varnaa aaj to badaa veeraan saa lag rahaa thaa badee sanjeedaa qism ke khyaalaat se labrez aapkee ye ghazal jis par bahut saaree daad
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2012, 11:48:59 AM »

HASAN SIR BAHUT HI BADHIYA LIKHA HAI.
DAAD AUR RAU KUBOOL KIJIYE.

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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2012, 11:52:10 AM »
sir sorry mujhe urdu itni achi nahi ati or apki to boht he umda hai ... notworthy icon_salut
in bhari bharam shabdon ka matlab btayenge please

take mujh jaisa nasamjhon ko bhi apke gyan k sagar mai nhane ka moka milee Usual Smile Usual Smile :p

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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2012, 11:54:05 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2012, 10:33:08 AM

Zulm    ki  jo   bhi    intaha  ho  gee ,
Koi  naa   misl - e - Karbala   ho  gee


Aane wala   hai     daur - e - Dajjaali ,
Duniya   Aafat   mein   mubtila   hogee


Hans   ke  kab  tak  saheiN  sitam  tere ,
Sabr    ki    koi    intaha    ho   gee


Aap   kar   leiN    to    aapka    Andaaz ,
Hum   se   ho   jaaye    to   khata  hogee


Un  ki   HamdardiyaaN    urooj   pe   haiN,
Beti    Muflis    ki   be - rida   ho  gee


Jub  Woh  poochheiN  ge  Mudd'aa  kya  hai ,
Eik    chhoti   si    Ilteja     ho   gee


Aaye  ga   aisa   eik   din   bhi   'Hasan',
Poori   Be - bas   ki  jub   Dua   ho  gee


Bahut Bahut Khooob Saheb...

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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2012, 11:54:36 AM »
waah waah hasan sahab bahut khub....

daaad daaad daad  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2012, 02:13:09 PM »
Quote from: roy on June 07, 2012, 11:52:10 AM
sir sorry mujhe urdu itni achi nahi ati or apki to boht he umda hai ... notworthy icon_salut
in bhari bharam shabdon ka matlab btayenge please

take mujh jaisa nasamjhon ko bhi apke gyan k sagar mai nhane ka moka milee Usual Smile Usual Smile :p

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Shukriya  Roy  saheb . Agar ghazlon  mein  mushkil  Urdu  words  hote  hain  to  main  meaning  bhi  footnote  mein  deta  hoon . Is  mein  bhool  gaya . Is ghazal  mein  kuchh  hi  unommon  words  hain  jo  main  explain  kar  rahaa hoon:
Misl- e- Karbala =  like  Karbala  (  Karbala  ka  hadsa  Muslim  history  mein sub  se  badi  zulm  ki  misaal  hai . Moharram  mein  hum  Muslims  isi  ko  yaad  kar  ke  gham  manaate  hain )
Daur - e - Dajjali = Era  or  time  of  'Dajjaal' .  Dajjaal  ,  Muslim  faith  ke  anusaar  eik  aisa  Devil shakhs  hai  jo  Duniya  pe  dominate  karega aur  apni taaqat , zulm  aur  evil  se  saari  Duniya  mein  aatank   phaila  dega . (  Shayed  Kalyug  ki  charamseema hogi ). Ye  qayamat  ke  qareeb  hone  ki  nishaani  hogi .  Lekin  qayamat  se pahle  ka  period  faith  and  truth  ki  victory   ka  hoga  ( shayed Satyug ). Yeh  sher  usi  taraf  ishara  karta  hai .
Urooj = Charamseema  ;  Be -  rida = without rida or chaadar ( akin to violating a woman's modesty) ;  Ilteja = request .
  In words ke alawa sabhi bahut common words hain.
  Ummeed  hai  ki  main  ne  aap  ki  query  ka  satisfactory  jawaab  diya  hai. Aapki  help  ke  liye  ye  bhi  bata  doon  ki  bahut  se  words  ke  meaning posts  per  ,  Forum  mein  ya  internet  per  bhi  Dictionaries  mein  available hain .
 Duaaon  ke  sath , Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2012, 03:41:05 PM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Hasan saheb. Kafi achhi rahi ye ghazal aapki. Dheron daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2012, 04:14:53 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2012, 10:33:08 AM

Zulm    ki  jo   bhi    intaha  ho  gee ,
Koi  naa   misl - e - Karbala   ho  gee   Applause Applause


Aane wala   hai     daur - e - Dajjaali ,
Duniya   Aafat   mein   mubtila   hogee  Applause Applause


Hans   ke  kab  tak  saheiN  sitam  tere ,
Sabr    ki    koi    intaha    ho   gee  VAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH


Aap   kar   leiN    to    aapka    Andaaz ,
Hum   se   ho   jaaye    to   khata  hogee  BAHUT UMDAAAAAAAA


Un  ki   HamdardiyaaN    urooj   pe   haiN,
Beti    Muflis    ki   be - rida   ho  gee Applause Applause


Jub  Woh  poochheiN  ge  Mudd'aa  kya  hai ,
Eik    chhoti   si    Ilteja     ho   gee Applause Applause KYA BAAT HAI BAHUT KHOOB


Aaye  ga   aisa   eik   din   bhi   'Hasan',
Poori   Be - bas   ki  jub   Dua   ho  gee bAHUT KHOOB

bAHUT HI uMDA KALAAM sIR
KHOOB BHAAI MUJHE,, kUCH SANJEEDA KHAYAAL DIL KO CHOO GAYE..
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2012, 06:35:27 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2012, 10:33:08 AM

Zulm    ki  jo   bhi    intaha  ho  gee ,
Koi  naa   misl - e - Karbala   ho  gee


Aane wala   hai     daur - e - Dajjaali ,
Duniya   Aafat   mein   mubtila   hogee  
dajjal e daur mein fitna zayada hoga. iss liye agar ye likhein ki duniya fitne mein mubtala hogi to satik hoga


Hans   ke  kab  tak  saheiN  sitam  tere ,
Sabr    ki    koi    intaha    ho   gee


Aap   kar   leiN    to    aapka    Andaaz ,
Hum   se   ho   jaaye    to   khata  hogee


Un  ki   HamdardiyaaN    urooj   pe   haiN,
Beti    Muflis    ki   be - rida   ho  gee


Jub  Woh  poochheiN  ge  Mudd'aa  kya  hai ,
Eik    chhoti   si    Ilteja     ho   gee


Aaye  ga   aisa   eik   din   bhi   'Hasan',
Poori   Be - bas   ki  jub   Dua   ho  gee


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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2012, 08:18:17 PM »
4 aur 5 no. ke sher behad behad pasand aai hume

iss behtareen post ko hazaaron daad Hasan sahab

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2012, 08:18:54 PM »
4 aur 5 no. ke sher behad behad pasand aai hume

iss behtareen post ko hazaaron daad Hasan sahab

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2012, 05:30:14 AM »
hasan sahab aadab......kaise hai aap ? kya kahu is ghazal par....top class poetry.......behtreen andaaz e bayaan .......khyaal ki unchi parwaaz.......bahut -2 achchhi ghazal bani hai.........
 aap kar le to aapka andaaz
hum se ho jaaye to khataa hogi
        is sher ko haasil e ghazal maaniye meri taraf se..........bahut-2 umda....
          khuda aapke hunar men din duna raat chaugna ijaafa kare.......aameen.
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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2012, 07:02:20 AM »
BAhut BAhut BAhut Khub Hasan g
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2012, 12:19:39 PM »
Quote from: roy on June 08, 2012, 07:42:47 AM
boht boht shukriya hasan g ....

aab apki azal padna maza dugna ho gya.....boht umda khayal hain aapke Usual Smile lajwab

maf kijiyega mujhe urdu boht kam ati hai kunki mai hindu hun
bs jitni apni dadi-amma se sikh paya utni he ati hai

or aap jaise digaaj shayron ki shayri pad ke or bhi sikh jaunga
shukriya

keep posting Usual Smile
Bahut  shukriya  Roy  saheb .  Meri  baat  aap  tak  pahunchi , achcha  laga  .  Magar  bhai ,  yeh  ghalat  fahmi  na  paaliye  ki  aap  Hindu hain  is  liye   achchi  Urdu  nahi  aati  .  
    Zubaan   kisi  firqe  ki  jageer nahin  hoti .  Dr.Radhakrishnan  ,  hamaare ex-President , jinhon  ne  Hindu philosophy  per  bahut  mashhoor  kitaab  'The Hindu View of Life '  likhi  hai , ko  Angrez  bhi  Englih  language  aur  is  ke  usage  mein  angrezon  se  better authirity  maante  thhe  jubki  woh  Hindustani  aur  eik  Hindu  thhe .
   Urdu  ke behtareen  poets  aur  writers  mein  Munshi  Prem  Chandra  ,  Krishna  Chandra , Daya  Shankar  Naseem , Tilok  Chand  Mahroom  , Braj  Narain  Chakbast ,Furaq , justice  Anand  Narain  Mulla  waghaira  guzre  hain  .  Aaj  bhi  Gulzar  Dehlvi  jaise  Hindu  shayer  hain  jin  per  Urdu  ko  fakhr  hai . Isi  Yoindia Shayariadab  per  achhe  Hindu  shaair  aur  zyadatar  members  bhi  mere  khayal  mein  Hindus  hi  hain . Maine  khud  bhi  Dr.Saini  aur  Raqeeb  sb.  se  kuchh  Urdu alfaaz  seekhe  hain . Aur  apni  baat  ko  thora  aur  clear  yeh  kah  ke  kar doon  ( sorry  to  be  a  little  boastful  )  ki  main  Muslim  hoon  lekin mujhe  yaqeen  hai  ki  main  khud  90%  Hindus  se  better  Hindi  likh , parh aur  samajh  sakta  hoon . Mujhe  yaqeen  hai  ki  kal  aap  bhi  bahuton  se behtar  Urdu  samajhne  aur  likhne  waale  honge . Duaaon  ke  sath , HASAN[/b]
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