ZULM KI JO BHI INTAHA HO GEE ............... HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2012, 10:33:08 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 08, 2012, 06:44:58 PM »
han zaroor hasan g kabhi mai bhi achi urdu zaroor likh or pad paunga... aap jaise bade kalam-bazo ki shayri padta rha to vo wakht jaldi he ayega....

or andar se mujhe urdu boht pyari hai.. ye mujhe meri dadi-ama ki yad dilati hai....

or apki dua k liye boht boht shukriya Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: June 08, 2012, 07:12:29 PM »
shriman hasan ji,
sarvpratham to late reply karne ke liye majrat chahta hoon,aapki yeh rachna mujhe bahut achhi lagee, baad mein achha laga aapka samjhane ka tareeka, sach baat hai bhaasha kisee bhi dharm ko nahin maanti.bas lagaav  aur maahol ki baat hai insaan chahe to sab kuchh kar sakta hai. kripya uncommon shabdon ke arth jo aapne reply mein diye hein unhen main post ke sath bhi chipka den to mujhe lagta hai urdu kam samjhane valon ko suvidha hogi.aapki agli rachna ki prateksha mein
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«Reply #17 on: June 09, 2012, 06:08:04 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2012, 10:33:08 AM

Zulm    ki  jo   bhi    intaha  ho  gee ,
Koi  naa   misl - e - Karbala   ho  gee


Aane wala   hai     daur - e - Dajjaali ,
Duniya   Aafat   mein   mubtila   hogee


Hans   ke  kab  tak  saheiN  sitam  tere ,
Sabr    ki    koi    intaha    ho   gee


Aap   kar   leiN    to    aapka    Andaaz ,
Hum   se   ho   jaaye    to   khata  hogee


Un  ki   HamdardiyaaN    urooj   pe   haiN,
Beti    Muflis    ki   be - rida   ho  gee


Jub  Woh  poochheiN  ge  Mudd'aa  kya  hai ,
Eik    chhoti   si    Ilteja     ho   gee


Aaye  ga   aisa   eik   din   bhi   'Hasan',
Poori   Be - bas   ki  jub   Dua   ho  gee

 noteworthy . deserves 1rau
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«Reply #18 on: June 09, 2012, 09:26:33 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on June 07, 2012, 10:38:41 AM
meree to dua qubool ho gayee aapkaa kalaam padh kar varnaa aaj to badaa veeraan saa lag rahaa thaa badee sanjeedaa qism ke khyaalaat se labrez aapkee ye ghazal jis par bahut saaree daad
Shukriya , Saini saheb ... Aaj hi kya , bhaisaheb ,  mujhe kaafi
dinon se veerani lag rahi hai . Bahut se achhe doston ki Yoindia
Shayariadab se absence bahut khal rahi hai . Main  khud  bhi kam
aur bahut half - heartedly  post kar raha hoon . Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #19 on: June 09, 2012, 10:41:51 AM »
Quote from: Anahita on June 07, 2012, 11:48:59 AM

HASAN SIR BAHUT HI BADHIYA LIKHA HAI.
DAAD AUR RAU KUBOOL KIJIYE.

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Shukriya ,Anahita ji . Khush rahiye.
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«Reply #20 on: June 09, 2012, 01:17:04 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on June 07, 2012, 11:54:05 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooob Saheb...

Bahut Hi Achi Peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khwaish  ji .  Bahut  bahut  shukriya   aur  duaaein.
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«Reply #21 on: June 09, 2012, 06:30:09 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on June 07, 2012, 11:54:36 AM
waah waah hasan sahab bahut khub....

daaad daaad daad  Applause Applause Applause
MANN JI , BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #22 on: June 09, 2012, 06:52:23 PM »
IFTAKHAR  SAHEB , BAHUT   BAHUT  SHUKRIYA .
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«Reply #23 on: June 09, 2012, 07:51:21 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2012, 10:33:08 AM

Zulm    ki  jo   bhi    intaha  ho  gee ,
Koi  naa   misl - e - Karbala   ho  gee


Aane wala   hai     daur - e - Dajjaali ,
Duniya   Aafat   mein   mubtila   hogee


Hans   ke  kab  tak  saheiN  sitam  tere ,
Sabr    ki    koi    intaha    ho   gee


Aap   kar   leiN    to    aapka    Andaaz ,
Hum   se   ho   jaaye    to   khata  hogee


Un  ki   HamdardiyaaN    urooj   pe   haiN,
Beti    Muflis    ki   be - rida   ho  gee


Jub  Woh  poochheiN  ge  Mudd'aa  kya  hai ,
Eik    chhoti   si    Ilteja     ho   gee


Aaye  ga   aisa   eik   din   bhi   'Hasan',
Poori   Be - bas   ki  jub   Dua   ho  gee
waah waah our waah.... maashallah bohat khubsurat sache khayalat ko ghazal meon piroya hai aap ne .... bohat bohat bohat daad....
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«Reply #24 on: June 10, 2012, 02:06:06 AM »
apki ghazal se mere din ka aaghaz hua hai. Hasan Sahab,meri anek shubhkamnayein.
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«Reply #25 on: June 10, 2012, 04:56:13 AM »
Quote from: mkv on June 07, 2012, 04:14:53 PM
bAHUT HI uMDA KALAAM sIR
KHOOB BHAAI MUJHE,, kUCH SANJEEDA KHAYAAL DIL KO CHOO GAYE..
MKV  ji ,  Aapko  pasand  aayi , jaankar khushi hui .
Hausla afzai ke liye shukriya . Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #26 on: June 10, 2012, 06:40:00 AM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 07, 2012, 06:35:27 PM

veriiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaice FHSplizz accept one rau
Shukriya  , Khamosh  Aawaaz ji . Aap  ki achhi  
salaah  ke  liye  bhi  mamnoon  hoon . Hasan
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«Reply #27 on: June 10, 2012, 06:45:25 AM »
"Un  ki   HamdardiyaaN    urooj   pe   haiN,
 Beti    Muflis    ki   be - rida   ho  gee"

*                *                 *

"Jub  Woh  poochheiN  ge  Mudd'aa  kya  hai,
 Eik    chhoti   si    Ilteja     ho   gee"

Bahut achchhi gazal. Mubarakbad.
Shubhkamnayen.
-arun mishra.
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«Reply #28 on: June 10, 2012, 10:33:42 AM »
Quote from: sarfira on June 07, 2012, 08:18:17 PM
4 aur 5 no. ke sher behad behad pasand aai hume

iss behtareen post ko hazaaron daad Hasan sahab

khus rahen
muskurate rahen

SARFIRA  JI , HAUSLA  AFZAI  KE  LIYE  BAHUT 
SHUKRGUZAAR  HOON . KHUSH  RAHIYE . HASAN
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«Reply #29 on: June 10, 2012, 01:20:24 PM »
Quote from: ufaq on June 08, 2012, 05:30:14 AM
hasan sahab aadab......kaise hai aap ? kya kahu is ghazal par....top class poetry.......behtreen andaaz e bayaan .......khyaal ki unchi parwaaz.......bahut -2 achchhi ghazal bani hai.........
 aap kar le to aapka andaaz
hum se ho jaaye to khataa hogi
        is sher ko haasil e ghazal maaniye meri taraf se..........bahut-2 umda....
          khuda aapke hunar men din duna raat chaugna ijaafa kare.......aameen.


Ufaq  saheb , Bahut  shukriya  hausla afzai ke liye . Aap sahi farma rahe hain . Yeh sher mujhe bhi pasand hai aur darasl isi sher se  is ghazal ki shuruaat  hui thhi . zarra nawaazi ke liye phir se shukriya. HASAN
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