अलविदा तुझे ऐ जिंदगी

by Aashiq pardesi on October 07, 2012, 11:23:14 PM
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Aashiq pardesi
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आज  मैं हूँ क्या ?
और क्या है ये मेरी जिंदगी!
ग़र यही जीना है तो
अलविदा तुझे ऐ जिंदगी!
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2012, 12:15:44 AM »
kam bigarna assan hota hai aur kam banana mushkil. Possitive rachna likhye.
Sheel didi
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2012, 12:56:14 AM »
naheen bhaai itnaa niraash mat ho keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2012, 01:49:46 AM »
sach main etani nirasha achi nahi .....

likhate rahiye...
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2012, 05:35:24 AM »
nice........
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2012, 06:23:26 AM »
आज  मैं हूँ क्या ?
और क्या है ये मेरी जिंदगी!
ग़र यही जीना है तो
अलविदा तुझे ऐ जिंदगी!

good Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2012, 12:59:02 PM »
दोस्तों माफ़ी चाहता हूँ  अगर किसी को ठेस पहुंचाई हो मैंने,
मैं पिछले चार सालों से अपने वतन अपने परिवार से दूर हूँ  

तन्हाई और यहाँ की मशीनी जिंदगी से कभी कभी परेशान हो जाता हूँ
यहाँ मैं अलविदा अपनी परदेस की जिंदगी को कर रहा हूँ
माफ़ी चाहता हूँ शायद मेरे शब्द कम पड़ गए
    
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