आंसू

by sapana on June 11, 2009, 06:40:10 PM
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आंसू

अच्छा है आंसूओपे नाम नही लिखा होता,

वरना तुम्हारी रुस्वाई मै देख नही सकती.

अच्छा है गमका कोई नाम नही होता,

वरना तुझ पर  इल्जाम आए सेह नही सकती.

सपना
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2009, 07:26:51 PM »

आंसू

अच्छा है आंसूओपे नाम नही लिखा होता,

वरना तुम्हारी रुस्वाई मै देख नही सकती.

अच्छा है गमका कोई नाम नही होता,

वरना तुझ पर  इल्जाम आए सेह नही सकती.

सपना


sapana ji
bahut badhiya likha hai
dilke kareeb lage aapke ehsaas
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sapana
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2009, 10:03:12 PM »
Thanks Kaashji. Usual Smile
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sapana
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2009, 10:03:53 PM »
Thanks Niraji hello
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2009, 10:12:54 PM »
bahut khoob Sapana ji,very touching. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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sapana
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2009, 10:43:52 PM »
Thanks Madhuveshji Usual Smile
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Deepati
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2009, 01:39:28 AM »
Beautifuly written, Sapna Ji! Applause
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sapana
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2009, 04:26:28 AM »
Thanks Deeeptiji hello
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2009, 05:45:15 AM »

आंसू

अच्छा है आंसूओपे नाम नही लिखा होता,

वरना तुम्हारी रुस्वाई मै देख नही सकती.

अच्छा है गमका कोई नाम नही होता,

वरना तुझ पर  इल्जाम आए सेह नही सकती.

सपना


bahut laajwaab likha hai aapne

Netra....
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2009, 12:16:47 PM »
Thanks Netraji hello
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