उम्र तमाम हो गयी

by RAHULCHARAN0190 on February 18, 2010, 05:04:28 PM
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कट गया ये दौर भी, कि शाम हो गयी,
बढती ही गयी मुद्दतें , उम्र तमाम हो गयी;
डूबे रहे हमेशा अपनी ही शह में,
और उबरे तो खुदगर्जी निजाम हो गयी;
हर चोट से मिलना हुआ कुछ इस तरह,
गम हुआ हमराह, बदनसीबी मकाम हो गयी;
इस सफ़र में खुद से मिलने का वक़्त न मिला,
अब साया भी हुआ गैर , हस्ती गुमनाम हो गयी;
बढती ही गयी मुद्दतें , उम्र तमाम हो गयी.............
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2010, 06:49:23 PM »
WAH KAYA BAAT HAI...
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2010, 11:03:34 PM »
Maan gye ........ 1 baat to apne proof kar hi diya..ki koi kisi k emotion ko chhu b nhi sakta..
maan gye
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2010, 11:39:30 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Rahulji
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2010, 05:32:18 AM »
वाह वाह राहुल जी बहुत ही अच्छी ग़ज़ल लिखी है आपने. बेहद ख़ूबसूरत, शायरी की ऊँची सोच का मुज़ाहेरा किया आपने.
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2010, 06:29:28 AM »
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rahul ji..fir se ek baar aapki kalam ka loha maan gaye hum....aapko dheron daad.likhte rahen
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