क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar:Shayri-E-Dard

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कुछ रातें क्यूँ आती है जीवन मे,
लंबी सी, उदास और वीरान सी...
क्या तुमने भी ये महसूस किया है?
सोचता हूँ, तुम्हारे पहलू मे बैठूं कभी,
तुम्हारे आँचल मे बहा दूं हर दुख,
हर परेशानी...
क्या तुम्हे कभी लगा ऐसा?
रोना तुम्हारा हथियार सही,
पर क्या तुम्हे पता है,
पुरुष के लिए ये किसी दवा से कम नही,
पुरुष भी रोते हैं अकेले मे,
इतने मजबूत नही होते,
जितने दिखते हैं वो,
क्या तुम्हे लगा ऐसा?
क्या तुम आज मुझे इसकी इज़ाज़त दोगी?
तुम इसे मजबूत पुरुष की
कमज़ोरी समझोगी,या फिर दवा?
पता नही पर आज मे रोना चाहता हूँ,
तुम्हारे आँचल को भिगोना चाहता हूँ


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2011, 05:03:56 AM »

wah bekararji...
aasan nahin hai ye kahana ki main rona chahta hun...

vahut bahut khub rachna hai ek dam imaandar...

Applause


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KOYAL46

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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2011, 11:26:22 AM »

mast poem hai aapki....Bekarar ji.... Applause


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 11:29:20 AM »

bahut khoob kavita sanjeev bhaii..

dhero sari daad~


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2011, 12:05:06 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on January 19, 2011, 04:49:32 AM

Dil Ko Cheeri Hui, Aapki Yeh kavita Mann Ko bhigo Deti Hai Sanjeev Bro...Koi Lafz Nahi mere Paas Jo iss kavita Ki Tareef Mein Kuch keh sake..Bahut gehre Aur Haqeeqat Ki Zindagi se Juude Hue Jazbe...Kya Baat hai Bro

Hats Off!!!


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2011, 12:39:46 PM »

very well percieved & expressed


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2011, 09:52:03 PM »

Bahut Khub Bekarar JI


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2011, 01:03:49 PM »

Quote from: manjum on January 19, 2011, 05:03:56 AM

wah bekararji...
aasan nahin hai ye kahana ki main rona chahta hun...

vahut bahut khub rachna hai ek dam imaandar...

Applause

manjum ji, bahoot abhar aapki housala-afzai ke liye

Quote from: Shihab on January 19, 2011, 11:11:07 AM

Bahut Khub Sajeev Bhaijan
Sab Khairiyat Na? Itna Udasi Kyon?

jab aap jaise bhai logon ki duayen saath hain to fir khairiyat se bhala kyun nahi honge.......do saal pahle likhi thi man hua ki post kar den so kar di....
shukriya bhai shihaab..


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 01:07:05 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 19, 2011, 11:26:22 AM

mast poem hai aapki....Bekarar ji.... Applause

shukriya koyal ji..... Usual Smile

Quote from: kalsun on January 19, 2011, 12:39:46 PM

very well percieved & expressed

thanks for appreciation kalsun ji


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2011, 01:09:35 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on January 19, 2011, 12:05:06 PM

khwaish bhai,
aapke comments padhkar dil ko lagta hai ki dil baat dil tak pahunch gai....dil se aabhar bro Usual Smile


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 01:11:12 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 19, 2011, 09:52:03 PM

Bahut Khub Bekarar JI

bahoot shukriya rishi ji Usual Smile


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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2011, 03:05:59 PM »

bht hi khubsurat aur dil me toofaan uthati kavita hai ye aapki bekaraar ji.....ise padhkar jawab diye bina raha nahin gaya....
chk kijiye shayad aapko pasand aaye...jo feel aai padhkar bas likhte chale gaye flow me....

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/nisaar-deti-hun-main-t61233.0.html;new#new


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: क्या तुम्हे पता है? bekarar

«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2011, 12:24:10 AM »

bahut khoob bekarar ji .


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