क्षणिका

by ramspathak on August 17, 2013, 10:50:32 PM
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माँ
जब मै छोटा था
आप ही कहती थी
मरने के बाद लोग तारे बन जाते है

रात भर जागता हूँ
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खोजता रहता हूँ
एक हँसते तारे को
शायद!
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मेरी माँ हँसती हुई दिख जायॆ

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2013, 11:57:55 PM »
bahut hi achha likha hai sir ...khush rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2013, 11:59:10 PM »
nice........maa k likha gaya drd badhiya koshish nahi srahne yogya hai...
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2013, 12:03:03 AM »
sach kaha hai aapne ..... Gaytri ji...
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2013, 12:13:03 AM »
maaaaa s lagaav saaaf spasht hota hai...ek sachchi kavita wahi hai jo saamne wale ko khud se jod de ye unhi kavitaon m se ek hai....jisme shabd apni kahaani kh rahe hai bhaavon k zariye.........
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2013, 02:51:45 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: ramspathak on August 17, 2013, 10:50:32 PM
माँ
जब मै छोटा था
आप ही कहती थी
मरने के बाद लोग तारे बन जाते है

रात भर जागता हूँ
उदास तारों के बीच
खोजता रहता हूँ
एक हँसते तारे को
शायद!
किसी एक तारे में
मेरी माँ हँसती हुई दिख जायॆ

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2013, 09:04:12 AM »
nice
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2013, 12:56:13 PM »
bahut achhey
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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2013, 02:08:50 PM »
bahut bahut khooooob...
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«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2013, 04:29:51 PM »
bahut khoob bahut khoob... Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2013, 05:14:15 PM »
bahut khoob
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