गिर पड़ा हूँ राहे इश्क़ में - By "Betaab".

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Gir pada hoon raahe ishq mein chakkar Khakar,
Jism ke saath saath mera dil bhi to bismil hai.

Maiqada beeran hai botlen bhi padi hain aundhe munh,
Talab to mukho lafgi hai magar tu kyon vyakul hai.

Mera dil to kab se hai Bechain "Betaab",
Tere man mein kyon samander jaisi hulchal hai.

Bujhe hue dil ke saath kab main jee Paoonga,
Chhod de saath mera itni tu kyon Bojhal hai.

So gaya hoon chir nidra mein aaj tere dar pe,
Aaj mere hathon mein na jaam hai na koi botal hai
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गिर पड़ा हूँ राहे इश्क़ में चक्कर खाकर,
जिस्म के साथ साथ मेरा दिल भी तो बिस्मिल है.

मयकदा बीरान है बोतलें भी पड़ी हैं औंधेमुंह,
तलब तो मुझको लगी है मगर तू क्यों व्याकुल है.

दिल तो मेरा कब से है बेचैन "बेताब",
तेरे मन में क्यों समंदर जैसी हलचल है.

बुझे हुए दिल के साथ कब तक मैं जी पाऊंगा,
छोड़ दे साथ मेरा इतनी तू क्यों बोझल है.

सो गया हूँ चिर निद्रा में आज तेरे दर पे,
आज मेरे हाथों में न जाम है न कोई बोतल है


  Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2014, 03:32:55 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2014, 03:46:42 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob

So many Thanks to Dr. Saini for your precious comment.
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2014, 04:45:02 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2014, 11:00:21 PM »
bahut khoobsurat Betaab Sahib, dheron daaaaaaaad.
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2014, 07:27:15 AM »
bahut khoobsurat Betaab Sahib, dheron daaaaaaaad.
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2014, 01:28:14 PM »
Kaya baat hai Betaab ji. Bahut Sunder.  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2014, 01:53:06 PM »
Kaya baat hai Betaab ji. Bahut Sunder.  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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