दर्द

by sapana on May 19, 2009, 05:12:42 PM

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sapana

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दर्द
गूंगे रहना ,बेहरे हो जाना,
एक मुर्देकी तरह जीना,
बस यहीं अपनी किस्मत है,
बस यहीं है अपना जीना।
सपना


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Talat

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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2009, 06:33:54 PM »

Nice lines Sapana Ji...short but deep !!


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sapana

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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2009, 07:01:53 PM »

thanks Talatji


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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2009, 07:09:40 PM »

Quote from: sapana on May 19, 2009, 05:12:42 PM

wah bahut hi kamaal ka likha hai aap ney SAPANA

DARD SEY APNOH KI PEHCHAAN HO JATI HAI
RANGEEN DUNIYA BHI BERANG NAZAR AATI HAI
GOONGA BEHRA HAI DARD TOH KYA HUA
DARD SEY JINDAGI KI PEHCHAN HO JATI HAI

JASBIR SINGH
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sapana

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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2009, 09:40:14 PM »

thanks Jasbirsinghji,

Shukriya. aapne sahi farmaaya. jawab savalse zyada khubsurat hai.
Sapana hello


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Pooja

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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2009, 09:43:25 PM »

wah kaya baat hai sapana !!!

Jas ji good one!!

socho ne behra bana diya
jakhmo ne gunga bana diya
Jeena hai agar sansein lena
to sanso ka zindagi bana diya


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sapana

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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 12:22:07 AM »

Very nice Pooja!!very very good lines. Usual Smile


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pandit

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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 12:38:18 AM »

Quote from: sapana on May 19, 2009, 05:12:42 PM

bahut dard bhara hai issme sapna jee..


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sapana

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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 12:58:13 AM »

thanks Panditji sad11


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pandit

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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 01:06:30 AM »

Quote from: sapana on May 20, 2009, 12:58:13 AM

thanks Panditji sad11

U WELCOME SAPNA JEE..


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Roja

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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2009, 03:29:31 AM »

Quote from: sapana on May 19, 2009, 05:12:42 PM

Wah... bahut acche.... Very good and touching lines Sapana...


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madhuwesh

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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2009, 03:59:55 AM »

bahut khoob sapana ji and jashbir ji.


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sapana

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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2009, 04:21:17 AM »

sukriya Madhuveshji Usual Smile


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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2009, 10:19:46 AM »

Quote from: sapana on May 19, 2009, 09:40:14 PM

thanks Jasbirsinghji,

Shukriya. aapne sahi farmaaya. jawab savalse zyada khubsurat hai.
Sapana hello

Thanks Sapana Ji

Jasbir Singh


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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #14 on: May 21, 2009, 10:25:31 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 19, 2009, 09:43:25 PM

wah kaya baat hai sapana !!!

Jas ji good one!!

socho ne behra bana diya
jakhmo ne gunga bana diya
Jeena hai agar sansein lena
to sanso ka zindagi bana diya

Thanks Pooja Ji

DARD MEH NA SAKOON HAI KOI
DARD SEY NA BACHA HAI KOI
SOCH TAB KAHA KAAM AAYEGI
DARD MEH JAB GHIRA HO KOI

JASBIR SINGH
Hira_company@yahoo.com