दर्दो को अपने शब्दों में दफ़न करते हैं.. ऋषि अग्रवाल

by Rishi Agarwal on January 26, 2013, 06:17:47 PM
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Rishi Agarwal
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ये दुनिया भी बड़ी अजीब होती हैं
कभी एक पल में दूर होते हैं तो
कभी एक पल में करीब होते हैं

ख़ुशी में सब पास रहते हैं
और दर्द में कोई करीब नहीं आता..

इसलिए हर पल खुश रहते हैं.
दर्दो को अपने शब्दों में दफ़न करते हैं..
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2013, 07:18:40 PM »
ये दुनिया भी बड़ी अजीब होती हैं
कभी एक पल में दूर होते हैं तो
कभी एक पल में करीब होते हैं

ख़ुशी में सब पास रहते हैं
और दर्द में कोई करीब नहीं आता..

इसलिए हर पल खुश रहते हैं.
दर्दो को अपने शब्दों में दफ़न करते हैं..

bht khoob chote---bht sateek baate kar rhe aaj to
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CIC
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2013, 06:10:47 AM »
Vichaar bohot acche hain per shayari bilkul bakwaas hai...
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suman59
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2013, 06:15:16 AM »
nice line... simple shbayari hai.. accha likha hai aapne Rishi jee
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CIC
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2013, 06:37:55 AM »
Suman sahiba, agar kisi ko uski kami nahi batayengi toh wahi yahi samjhega ki GHALAT bhi SAHI hai...
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2013, 08:38:04 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2013, 09:01:06 AM »
Sksaini ji, aaap hi batayiye, jo shayari ke naam par rishi ne post kiya hai,usse kis tarah ki poetry kahenge ? Rubai, ghazal, sher or kya hai ye ?
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2013, 09:03:57 AM »
Suman sahiba, agar kisi ko uski kami nahi batayengi toh wahi yahi samjhega ki GHALAT bhi SAHI hai...

CIC jee, kisi ka kami batlane ke liye hum yahan nahi. Jinhone koshish ki hai unhe aap prothsaah nahi karoge to aage accha likhne ki koshish kaise karenge?

aur kuch kehna hai to PM k zariye kahiye. kisi ki kami ko mehfil mein kehna teek nahi. waise yahan kuch ko alawa sab learners hi hai. mujhe b milake. plz kuch kehna hai to PM se unhe kahiye. it is just a requet
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2013, 09:31:51 AM »
I am not discouraging him, I am trying to help him so that he can improve and can get to know result between poetry and bakwaas.

I will not use PM.. why should I ? If he doesn't like my comment then improve it, I will be first one to appreciate.
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2013, 09:36:47 AM »
I am not discouraging him, I am trying to help him so that he can improve and can get to know result between poetry and bakwaas.

I will not use PM.. why should I ? If he doesn't like my comment then improve it, I will be first one to appreciate.

CIC sb.. mujhe hi shayad galat lag rahi hai aapka aisa kehna. tension nahi lijiyega. aapka dil jaisa kahe waise kahiyega. sorry
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2013, 09:50:43 AM »
nice
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2013, 12:11:11 PM »
CIC sb.. mujhe hi shayad galat lag rahi hai aapka aisa kehna. tension nahi lijiyega. aapka dil jaisa kahe waise kahiyega. sorry
Why you should be sorry, atleast you came forward and presented your view.
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«Reply #12 on: January 28, 2013, 10:05:28 AM »
nice
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aqsh
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«Reply #13 on: January 28, 2013, 12:30:43 PM »
good one..
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«Reply #14 on: August 20, 2013, 05:45:28 PM »
Vichaar bohot acche hain per shayari bilkul bakwaas hai...

CIS Ji Aapko Mere Se Problem Kya Hain.. Ap Koi Mahan Writer Hain To Jrur Apni Books Ke Naam Bataye.. Agar Nahi Hain To Mere Likhe Pe Aapko Befizul ka Bolne Ka Haq Nahi Hain.. Aapko Isme Kuchh Galti Lagi To Aap Mujhe PM Karte.. Mein Sudhar Karta Par Aap To Sabke Samen Khud KO Bahut Bada Writer Sabit Kar Rhe Hain.. I M Very Very Upset Ki Aap Jaise Logo Ki Wajah Se Hi Koi Likhne Ki Koshish Nahi Karta Kyuki Aap Kisi Ke Likhne Ka Hausla Nhi Bada Skte Par Hausla GIra Jrur Skte Ho.. Thnx.. Aap Ya To Yah Kah SKte Ho Aap Bahut Sari Post Copy Karte Ho Ya PHir Bed.. Jo Acchi Kavitaye Likhi Hain Uspe Aap Kabhi Nazar Nahi Aaye.. Mahanubhav
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