दर्दो को कागजो पर लिखता रहा ---रस्तोगी

by Ram Krishan Rastogi on February 12, 2018, 06:42:44 PM
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जिन्दगी के दर्दो को,कागजो पर लिखता रहा
मै बेचैन था इसलिए सारी रात जगता रहा

जिन्दगी के दर्दो को,सबसे छिपाता रहा
कोई  पढ़ न ले,लिख कर मिटाता रहा

मेरे दामन में खुशिया कम् थी,दर्द बेसुमार थे
खुशियों को बाँट कर,अपने दर्दो को मिटाता रहा 

मै खुशियों को ढूढता रहा,गमो के बीच रहकर
वे खुशियों को छीनते रहे,मै गमो में तडफता रहा

जिनको जल्दी थी,वो बढ़ चले मंजिल की ओर
मै समंदर से राज, गहराई के सीखता रहा

बदले रंग सभी ने यहाँ,गिरगिट की तरह
रंग मेरा निखरा पर मेहँदी की तरह पिसता रहा

आर के रस्तोगी  
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2018, 09:49:33 PM »
waah waah achhaa ehsaas hai.
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Aapko har sher mein aakhir se doosraa harf kee sound milaane kee zaroorat hai.
sikhtaa, jagtaa, taraftaa, pistaa yeh ek awaaz mein hain
chipaataa, faarhtaa, baanttaa yeh doosri awaaz mein hain
Aap achhe shaayar hain bas thorhi koshish karne kee zaroorat hai.
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2018, 07:40:52 AM »
Shri Surindran ji nek slaah ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
 aage se in baato ka dhyaan rakhuga. Dhanyabad.
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