ना जाने कब तकदीर चले.. ऋषि

by Rishi Agarwal on July 24, 2013, 07:32:11 PM
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तेरी तस्वीर जब भी देखू तो आँखों से नीर बह चले,
याद आये वो गुजरे पल, तो दिल पे शमशीर चले,
किस - किस को सुनाऊ अब मेरे दर्दो की दास्तान,
रुक गई हाथो की लकीरे ना जाने कब तकदीर चले..
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2013, 07:43:24 PM »
Waah.. Good one.
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2013, 07:58:43 PM »
Quote from: Saavan on July 24, 2013, 07:43:24 PM
Waah.. Good one.

धन्यवाद सावन जी
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2013, 08:13:00 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2013, 08:15:03 PM »
धन्यवाद नंद्बहू जी
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2013, 09:45:45 PM »
rishi ji zaraa vartnee (spellings) par control karen jaise daanstaan---------------daastaaN   khyaal to achhe hain hee nisandeh
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2013, 10:06:19 PM »
nice lines....
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2013, 10:13:13 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob...
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2013, 11:24:36 PM »
बहुत खूब
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on July 24, 2013, 07:32:11 PM
तेरी तस्वीर जब भी देखू तो आँखों से नीर बह चले,
याद आये वो गुजरे पल, तो दिल पे शमशीर चले,
किस - किस को सुनाऊ अब मेरे दर्दो की दान्स्तान,
रुक गई हाथो की लकीरे ना जाने कब तकदीर चले..
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2013, 11:26:27 PM »
bahut khub janab...
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2013, 01:06:35 AM »
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on July 24, 2013, 07:32:11 PM
तेरी तस्वीर जब भी देखू तो आँखों से नीर बह चले,
याद आये वो गुजरे पल, तो दिल पे शमशीर चले,
किस - किस को सुनाऊ अब मेरे दर्दो की दान्स्तान,
रुक गई हाथो की लकीरे ना जाने कब तकदीर चले..

good one,sir
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2013, 01:49:54 AM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2013, 10:39:38 AM »
nice
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2013, 01:27:46 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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