फासला

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ये जहन ये रंग ये तबियत का फासला,
दिखता है कभी कभी ये नीयत का फासला,
मगर,जो खाई है वो कब भरी है लफ़्ज़ों से,
ये खाई है तेरी मेरी तरबियत का फासला,

तुम कहते हो तुम से कुछ छुपाना नहीं होता,
मैं कहता हूँ मुझ से कुछ बताना नहीं होता,
कुछ शख्शियत, कुछ ख़याल पे ख़याल की आदत,
और कुछ है ये तेरी मेरी रवायत का फासला,
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2016, 06:19:38 AM »
Quote from: RAHULCHARAN0190 on May 05, 2016, 04:47:41 AM
ये जहन ये रंग ये तबियत का फासला,
दिखता है कभी कभी ये नीयत का फासला,
मगर,जो खाई है वो कब भरी है लफ़्ज़ों से,
ये खाई है तेरी मेरी तरबियत का फासला,

तुम कहते हो तुम से कुछ छुपाना नहीं होता,
मैं कहता हूँ मुझ से कुछ बताना नहीं होता,
कुछ शख्शियत, कुछ ख़याल पे ख़याल की आदत,
और कुछ है ये तेरी मेरी रवायत का फासला,



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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2016, 09:15:09 AM »
Shukriya ji !!
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2016, 10:23:46 PM »
bahut umdah waah.
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2016, 08:53:24 AM »
Bahot hi Romanchak...Mazedaar...aur unique alfaaz hai likhawat me...a very beautiful sharing Rahul ji...

Quote from: RAHULCHARAN0190 on May 05, 2016, 04:47:41 AM
ये जहन ये रंग ये तबियत का फासला,
दिखता है कभी कभी ये नीयत का फासला,
मगर,जो खाई है वो कब भरी है लफ़्ज़ों से,
ये खाई है तेरी मेरी तरबियत का फासला,

तुम कहते हो तुम से कुछ छुपाना नहीं होता,
मैं कहता हूँ मुझ से कुछ बताना नहीं होता,
कुछ शख्शियत, कुछ ख़याल पे ख़याल की आदत,
और कुछ है ये तेरी मेरी रवायत का फासला,
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2016, 09:36:37 AM »
Quote from: poojachakarvarti@gmail.co on May 06, 2016, 08:53:24 AM
Bahot hi Romanchak...Mazedaar...aur unique alfaaz hai likhawat me...a very beautiful sharing Rahul ji...


Behad Shukriya !!
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