बह चुके है बहुत आंसू -रस्तोगी

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बह चुके है बहुत आंसू इन आँखों से तुम्हारी याद में
रोका है बड़ी मुश्किल से इनको,अब ओर रुलाओ मत

बदल रहे है अरमान करवटे,जो दिल में जगाए थे तुमने
बड़ी मुश्किल से सुलाया है इनको अब इनको जगाओ मत

छोड़ कर क्यों चले गये तुम,क्या कसूर किया था मैने
सात समंदर जब चले गये तुम,अब मुझे बुलाओ मत

सताने की भी हद होती है,वो भी हद पार कर चुके तुम
काफी सहन कर चुकी हूँ,और अब मुझे न सताओ तुम    
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2015, 07:06:00 PM »
waah bahut khoob waah.
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2015, 02:48:53 AM »
बह चुके है बहुत आंसू इन आँखों से तुम्हारी याद में
रोका है बड़ी मुश्किल से इनको,अब ओर रुलाओ मत

बदल रहे है अरमान करवटे,जो दिल में जगाए थे तुमने
बड़ी मुश्किल से सुलाया है इनको अब इनको जगाओ मत

छोड़ कर क्यों चले गये तुम,क्या कसूर किया था मैने
सात समंदर जब चले गये तुम,अब मुझे बुलाओ मत

सताने की भी हद होती है,वो भी हद पार कर चुके तुम
काफी सहन कर चुकी हूँ,और अब मुझे  सताओ matt    

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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2015, 02:52:09 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2015, 05:29:39 AM »
shri surindran ji shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2015, 06:02:31 AM »


aap ke stripradhan kavita se mujhe ek vyakti BOBBY DARLING kee yaad aatee hai jiska asli naam keshav ya keval sharma hai vo sharirik to mard hai per ander se stri ki bhavna hai jaisa kee usne ek satchatkaar me.N kahaa thaa

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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2015, 06:03:23 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2015, 11:11:38 AM »
waah ... bahut sundar abhivyakti...
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2015, 12:15:54 PM »
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bahut khoob Rastogi ji.....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2015, 01:33:58 PM »
बह चुके है बहुत आंसू इन आँखों से तुम्हारी याद में
रोका है बड़ी मुश्किल से इनको,अब ओर रुलाओ मत

बदल रहे है अरमान करवटे,जो दिल में जगाए थे तुमने
बड़ी मुश्किल से सुलाया है इनको अब इनको जगाओ मत

छोड़ कर क्यों चले गये तुम,क्या कसूर किया था मैने
सात समंदर जब चले गये तुम,अब मुझे बुलाओ मत

सताने की भी हद होती है,वो भी हद पार कर चुके तुम
काफी सहन कर चुकी हूँ,और अब मुझे न सताओ तुम     



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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2015, 02:13:29 PM »
गायत्री जी हौशला अफजाई के लिए धन्यवाद
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2015, 02:16:50 PM »
श्री खामोश जी शुक्रिया
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2015, 06:13:56 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: June 29, 2015, 04:34:37 AM »
Shri Mohammad Tauhid ji shukiya
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