मिट जाऊँ ____________बादल

by baadal102 on June 20, 2012, 06:29:04 AM
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मेरी खामोशीओ से अब मेरा वास्ता होगा,
कोई है मेरा ये मेरे जहन में अब ना होगा,

तुम चाहते हो मै मिट जाऊँ तुम्हारी हथेली से,
तुम्हारा ये सपना मेरी दुआ से जरूर पूरा होगा ..................बादल
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2012, 06:32:47 AM »
BOHOT KHOOB LIKHA JNAAB
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2012, 06:38:18 AM »
bahut hee khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2012, 10:05:06 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2012, 12:08:15 PM »
bahut khoob kaha Badal ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2012, 01:20:54 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2012, 04:02:54 PM »


baadal102 ji...bahut khoob..kahte rahiye....Raqeeb
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2012, 04:04:48 PM »
bahut khub .....specially last 2 line gazab....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2012, 05:18:13 PM »
Behat umda khayaalaat
yun hi kahte rahiye Baadal jee
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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2012, 03:12:34 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2012, 12:38:12 PM »
aap sabhi ka mai tahe dil se sukrgujar hu jo aap ne hume saraha....thanx a lot all of u
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2012, 12:45:24 PM »
मेरी खामोशीओ से अब मेरा वास्ता होगा,
कोई है मेरा ये मेरे जहन में अब ना होगा,

तुम चाहते हो मै मिट जाऊँ तुम्हारी हथेली से,
तुम्हारा ये सपना मेरी दुआ से जरूर पूरा होगा ..................बादल

Applause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2012, 04:22:15 AM »
सुक्रिया पंकज जी
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