मुझे जानम दे दो माँ

by mistufer on June 28, 2009, 02:30:16 AM
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मुझे जानम दे दो माँ
 
कब से याकुल बैठा हून आस लगाए
कोई तो आए मुझे प्यार से गले लगाए

तेरा बीज हून, जानम लेना चाहता हून
माँ की बाहें मूज़े भी झूला झूलाए

तुम जिस खूबसूरत दुनिया में रहती हो
मैं वो दुनिया देखना चाहता हून

आजकल क्या हुआ है क्यूँ बचों से सब रूठे हैं
विज्ञान की तरक़ी से बचे भी अब चुनते हैं

बेटी अघर हो कोख में, सौदा कर लेते हैं
देकर मौत मासूम को कैसे चैन से रहते हैं

ओर अगर हुआ कोई नुक्स मुज में तो
क्या मेरा भी गला घोंट दोगि माँ

क्या मैं तरसता रह जायूंगा जानम लेने को
ममता भरे आँचल को माँ के दूद पीने को

माँ मूज़े खुद से जुड़ा ना करो
तेरा अंश बनके आना चाहता हून

बहुत बार मरा हून जानम से पहले ही
माँ मैं तुज़े माँ बुलाना चाहता हून

माँ अपने आँचल में छुपाले मुझको
तेरे सीने लगकर मैं हसना मुस्कुराना चाहता हून

आब ना सोचो,मुझे जानम दे दो माँ
आब तो मुझे जानम दे दो माँ

नीरा
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pandit
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2009, 02:33:24 AM »
BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI NIRA JEE..
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mistufer
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2009, 02:36:20 AM »
BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI NIRA JEE..

pandit ji
aapko pasand aayi rachna
shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2009, 02:39:00 AM »
NIRA JI..
AISI RACHANAYEIN BAHUT HI KAM LOG LIKHTE HAIN...
YE ZARA HAT K HAI NAA....
ISSKO BAHUT LOG PASAND KARENGEE..
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 07:45:18 AM »
Bahut bahut jazbaaton se likhi hui poem hia, har ek jazbaat saaf nazar aa raha hai. Sahi kaha, aisi poem bahut kam log likhte hia,Really no words to express the appreciation. But its very well written.

Keep writing Nira. Clapping Smiley
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 04:23:32 PM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Nira Ji
Achchha likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 04:38:11 PM »
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shabd nahi tareef ke liye...behad umda rachna neera ji.........apki rachnaon ka intzaar rahega
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 04:47:17 PM »
Mindblowing Bahoot bahoot Gehri Soch k saath bahoot hi kabile tareef rachna peh ki hai.. Bahoot Khoob Nira ji.
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2009, 08:01:35 PM »
NIRA JI..
AISI RACHANAYEIN BAHUT HI KAM LOG LIKHTE HAIN...
YE ZARA HAT K HAI NAA....
ISSKO BAHUT LOG PASAND KARENGEE..

pandit ji
kuch hadhse chhap chor jate hain
zaroor nahi ki hum apne dukh ko dekhain
ghar se niklo toh bahut se dard milte
har mod par.
aapko meri yeh koshish achi lagi
dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon.
nira
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2009, 08:02:46 PM »
Bahot hi dardnaak aur sachai se otproat kavita likhi aapne Neera ji,mashallah kya likha hai,yaadgaar poem likhi aapne,too nice

kaash ji
dhanyawaad aapki saharna ka.
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2009, 08:04:52 PM »
Bahut bahut jazbaaton se likhi hui poem hia, har ek jazbaat saaf nazar aa raha hai. Sahi kaha, aisi poem bahut kam log likhte hia,Really no words to express the appreciation. But its very well written.

Keep writing Nira. Clapping Smiley

angel ji
aapko pasand aayi meri koshish, dilse shukrguzaar hoon.
nira
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2009, 08:06:04 PM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Nira Ji
Achchha likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI

sarvesh ji
aapki saharna ka shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2009, 08:22:39 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
shabd nahi tareef ke liye...behad umda rachna neera ji.........apki rachnaon ka intzaar rahega

bekarar ji aadaab
aapko yahan dekhkar acha laga
aapko meri rachna pasand aayi
dilse shukrguzaar hoon
yunhi saath dete rahiyega yahan,
nira
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2009, 08:24:31 PM »
Mindblowing Bahoot bahoot Gehri Soch k saath bahoot hi kabile tareef rachna peh ki hai.. Bahoot Khoob Nira ji.

sophi ji
thank u so much aap sab ka saath yunhi milta rahe
yeh hi tamanna karti hoon
nira
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«Reply #14 on: June 29, 2009, 06:21:00 AM »
Nira Didiiiiiiii....... Aapki Qalam Ko Mera Salaam.. notworthy Behad Umda aur gahari soch ke sath Likha Hai Yeh dard Bhara Qalaam aapne.. Lajawab aur Behtreen Peshkash hai .. Bahut Bahut khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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