मेरे हाथों से तेरा हाथ यूँ छूटता गया ,

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मेरे हाथों से तेरा हाथ यूँ छूटता गया ,
जैसे   सितारा  फलक से  टूटता गया ।

गम ये नही कि लुट गई हसरते - हयात
ग़म है जिसे नहीं लूटना था लूटता गया ।

बदकिस्मती कहूँ  इसे या और कुछ कहूँ
 जिसको भी दिल ने चाहा वही रूठता गया ।

मिलने थे जहाँ साये बिछुडे वहां पर हम
साहिल पे  बदनसीब  कोई डूबता गया ।

हंसती रही हयात मगर रोते रहे जज़्बात
अन्दर ही अन्दर दरख्त कोई सूखता गया

सारे जहाँ का "दीपक" इतना अफसाना है
गुल टूटता गया  और गुंचा  फूटता गया

@ Deepak Sharma
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2014, 09:15:14 PM »
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Awesome Deepak Ji...Awesome Lines...Full Of Feelungs And Heart Touching Lines...No Words
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2014, 02:17:24 AM »
मेरे हाथों से तेरा हाथ यूँ छूटता गया ,
जैसे   सितारा  फलक से  टूटता गया ।

गम ये नही कि लुट गई हसरते - हयात
ग़म है जिसे नहीं लूटना था लूटता गया ।

बदकिस्मती कहूँ  इसे या और कुछ कहूँ
 जिसको भी दिल ने चाहा वही रूठता गया ।

मिलने थे जहाँ साये बिछुडे वहां पर हम
साहिल पे  बदनसीब  कोई डूबता गया ।

हंसती रही हयात मगर रोते रहे जज़्बात
अन्दर ही अन्दर दरख्त कोई सूखता गया

सारे जहाँ का "दीपक" इतना अफसाना है
गुल टूटता गया  और गुंचा  फूटता गया

@ Deepak Sharma
wow......great
heart touching....
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2014, 07:34:29 AM »
Waaaaaaah bahut khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2014, 12:07:59 PM »
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waah waah behtreen peshkash deepak ji,,apka ye kalaam mene apke blog me padha tha,karib 2010 me apko teh dil se mubarak baad dherooooooo daaaaaaadddddddd or rau kabool kijiye,,
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2014, 02:37:51 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2014, 01:35:19 PM »
bahut khoob deepak ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2014, 03:22:01 AM »
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Awesome Deepak Ji...Awesome Lines...Full Of Feelings And Heart Touching Lines...No Words
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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2014, 05:55:07 AM »
shuria mere apno
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2014, 06:35:27 AM »
very touching lines... god bless dear
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2015, 07:09:49 AM »
shukria dosto
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2015, 03:53:14 PM »
awesome.
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