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«Reply #510 on: December 05, 2009, 10:05:08 AM » |
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Wo Janta Hai Ke Mujh Se Sabar Nahi Hoga !!
Wo Mere Dard Se To Be Khabar Nahi Ho Ga !!
Main Do Qadam Jo Chalu Dil Pukarta Hai Yehi !!
Ke Us Ka Sath Na Ho To Safar Nahi Ho Ga !!  Good one Khusi Ji |
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #511 on: December 05, 2009, 10:08:00 AM » |
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Thxxx ji
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #513 on: December 05, 2009, 03:13:14 PM » |
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riyaz106
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«Reply #514 on: December 05, 2009, 04:03:36 PM » |
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Wo Janta Hai Ke Mujh Se Sabar Nahi Hoga !!
Wo Mere Dard Se To Be Khabar Nahi Ho Ga !!
Main Do Qadam Jo Chalu Dil Pukarta Hai Yehi !!
Ke Us Ka Sath Na Ho To Safar Nahi Ho Ga !! Behad shandar sharing bilkul alag tarah ki. Thanks a lot for such shared ghazal. |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #515 on: December 05, 2009, 04:24:13 PM » |
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Thanks dear.....khushi....  ye not worthy kyu likha....pasand nahi aaya...mera likha... |
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #516 on: December 06, 2009, 02:59:44 PM » |
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Arey nahi ji aap ne to bohat hi acha likha hai mujhe bohat ziyada pasand aaya isliye to maine NOT WORTHY likha..bohat hi acha aap ne jawab diya hai meri shayeri ka isliye ji jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai  |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #517 on: December 06, 2009, 03:53:45 PM » |
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Ab main kahu kya... of this itni saari tariff.......khushi dear Dard se ab kar lo tum kinaara
Khushi hai sakhi naam tumhaara
Dard ko bahut din hai tumne paala
Ab de do use sakhi tum desh nikaalaArey nahi ji aap ne to bohat hi acha likha hai mujhe bohat ziyada pasand aaya isliye to maine NOT WORTHY likha..bohat hi acha aap ne jawab diya hai meri shayeri ka isliye ji jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai |
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #518 on: December 06, 2009, 11:52:32 PM » |
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #519 on: December 06, 2009, 11:53:26 PM » |
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its my pleasure and thxxxxx alott |
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«Reply #521 on: December 07, 2009, 06:26:26 AM » |
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You are always welcome.....Khushi ji aap likhti he hain itna pyara ki jawaab apne aap lajawaab ho jaata hai.....  |
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«Reply #522 on: December 07, 2009, 06:42:05 AM » |
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riyaz106
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«Reply #523 on: December 07, 2009, 10:05:06 AM » |
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Bahut shandaar creation hai Khushi Ji aapki. Thanks for sharing. Koyal ji aap bhi bahut hazir jawab hain. Do sher arz karta hun :
Jee bahut chahta hai khat likhna
Lekin usne likha hai mat likhna
Zindagi chaahe jis tarah likh jaye
Tum na lekin hamein ghalat likhna.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #524 on: December 07, 2009, 10:09:56 AM » |
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Lafzo aur Logo ki na tu kar parwah sakhi
Kar wahi pyari sakhi jo mann tera kare
Yaado mai base hain teri jo gujre pal
Lauta la ab aur jee bhar jee le wo pal
Koyal Ji aapki haazir jawaabi,wo bhi shayri mein hi, tareef ke qabil hai. Congrat for constructive mind. Nice creation and sharing. Thanks. |
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