Main aur merra dard...NOT MINE...

by brokenbyluv on August 16, 2009, 06:06:34 PM
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #525 on: December 07, 2009, 01:24:14 PM »
Zarraa-nawaajee ka shukriya....Riyaz-bhai
Kafia milate milate ab aadat se pad gayee hai...
Aapke sher bhi subhaanalla bade achhe hain...


Koyal Ji aapki haazir jawaabi,wo bhi shayri mein hi, tareef ke qabil hai. Congrat for constructive mind. Nice creation and sharing. Thanks.

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KOYAL46
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«Reply #526 on: December 07, 2009, 01:41:54 PM »
Riyaz-bhai...agar sher aapne likhe hain tou mujhe last word "samajhna" uchit lagta hai...waise achhe sher hain... Applause Applause Applause

Ladkiyen tou laajo-haya ki murat hain
Unke maan-sammaan ka tum khayal rakhna
Khat agar kisi aur k haath lag jaaye
Uski tou zindgi rushwah-badnaam ho jaaye

ESILIYE LIKHTI HAI KHAT MAT LIKHNA


Bahut shandaar creation hai Khushi Ji aapki. Thanks for sharing. Koyal ji aap bhi bahut hazir jawab hain. Do sher arz karta hun :
Jee bahut chahta hai khat likhna
Lekin usne likha hai mat likhna
Zindagi chaahe jis tarah likh jaye
Tum na lekin hamein galat samajhna
(likhna.)
(----NS----)

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riyaz106
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«Reply #527 on: December 07, 2009, 02:15:35 PM »
Thanks and welcome Koyal ji. Sachmuch aap bahut zaheen aur active  hain. Aapke mind ki hard disc aur RAM bahut high capacity ki hai. Khuda aapko aur taraqqi de. Avashya hi aap ek budhijeevi banengi. Thanks.
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #528 on: December 07, 2009, 03:05:44 PM »
shukriya Riyaz-bhai...aapne bahut badi baat kehdi...aapki duaa kabool ho esee aasha k saath.....koyal

Thanks and welcome Koyal ji. Sachmuch aap bahut zaheen aur active  hain. Aapke mind ki hard disc aur RAM bahut high capacity ki hai. Khuda aapko aur taraqqi de. Avashya hi aap ek budhijeevi banengi. Thanks.
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #529 on: December 08, 2009, 03:05:55 PM »
Khushiji...wah fir ek pyari se chowpayee.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Applause Applause Applause


Lafzo aur Logo ki na tu kar parwah sakhi
Kar wahi pyari sakhi jo mann tera kare
Yaado mai base hain teri jo gujre pal
Lauta la ab aur jee bhar jee le wo pal
icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower  Its mine


Wah koyal ji aap ki hazir jawabi ki jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai bohat khoob likha hai aap ne very nice...thxxx  notworthy Applause Applause
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #530 on: December 08, 2009, 03:09:25 PM »
Bahut shandaar creation hai Khushi Ji aapki. Thanks for sharing. Koyal ji aap bhi bahut hazir jawab hain. Do sher arz karta hun :

Jee bahut chahta hai khat likhna
Lekin usne likha hai mat likhna
Zindagi chaahe jis tarah likh jaye
Tum na lekin hamein ghalat likhna.
(----NM----)


Thx alotttt...aap ki sharing bhi bohat khoob hai its really nice thxx for sharing... Applause Applause Applause
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #531 on: December 08, 2009, 03:11:21 PM »
Kasti Bhi Nahi Badli Darya Bhi Nahi Badla !!
Hum Dubne Walo Ka Jazba Bhi Nahi Badla !!
Hai Shoq-e-Safar Aisa Ek Umar Se Hume !!
Manzil Bhi Nahi Payi Aur Rasta Bhi Nahi Badla !! tearyeyed tearyeyed

-------------NOT MINE-------------
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #532 on: December 08, 2009, 06:42:45 PM »
Khushiji tareeff karna tou koi aapse seekhe...
Zarre ko aasmaan mai bitha deti hain aap...
Ye tou aapki pesh ki huyee lines likhwa jaati hain hum se....
Fir Khushi ki khushi ke liye tou kuchh bhi ho sakta hai... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower angel11 angel11 angel11

Ye tera bhatekane ka kya khoob andaaj hai
Chalte jaate hain aur Manzil ka patta nahi
Doobne ki thee jab teri puri-poori taiyari,
Fir tujh ko kya majhdhaar aur kya kinaara



Wah koyal ji aap ki hazir jawabi ki jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai bohat khoob likha hai aap ne very nice...thxxx  notworthy Applause Applause
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #533 on: December 08, 2009, 08:12:57 PM »
Thxxx ji lekin sach me aap jaise hazir jawaabi bohat kam dekhne ko milti hai tareef ke kabeel to aap hai hi isliye tareef karte hai ji... love4...ek baar phir aap ne bohat acha likha hai thxx... Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #534 on: December 08, 2009, 08:16:52 PM »
Kasti Bhi Nahi Badli Darya Bhi Nahi Badla !!
Hum Dubne Walo Ka Jazba Bhi Nahi Badla !!
Hai Shoq-e-Safar Aisa Ek Umar Se Hume !!
Manzil Bhi Nahi Payi Aur Rasta Bhi Nahi Badla !! tearyeyed tearyeyed

-------------NOT MINE-------------


Very nice sharing Khusi Ji
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #535 on: December 08, 2009, 08:19:05 PM »
Bhool Jane Ka Hosla Na Hai Na Hoga !!
Door Reh Kar Bhi Woh Juda Hai Na Hoga !!
Unse Mil Kar Kisi Or Se Kya Mile Koi !!
Unke Jaisa Dusra Na Koi Hai Na Hoga !!

--NOT MINE--
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #536 on: December 08, 2009, 08:20:23 PM »
Thxx rajesh ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #537 on: December 08, 2009, 08:26:11 PM »
Bhool Jane Ka Hosla Na Hai Na Hoga !!
Door Reh Kar Bhi Woh Juda Hai Na Hoga !!
Unse Mil Kar Kisi Or Se Kya Mile Koi !!
Unke Jaisa Dusra Na Koi Hai Na Hoga !!

--NOT MINE--


Yeh bhi khoob rahi, Nice sharing Khusi Ji
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #538 on: December 08, 2009, 08:31:28 PM »
once again thxxxxxxx alottttt
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #539 on: December 09, 2009, 01:29:41 PM »
kya baat hai koyal bahut hi acha likha hai..bahut hi khoob mehfil jami aap sab ki,verry nice sharing pariji,riyaz ji bahut khoob...
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