payar

by noor mahal on October 06, 2008, 06:15:53 PM

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noor mahal

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hum khaak jameen ki ho kar ke..
us chaand ki hasrat kar bethe..
vo cheez khuda se unchi thi..
hum jis se mohbat kar bethe...


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sonalxoxo

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Re: payar

«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2008, 08:03:20 PM »

so sweet and touching, bravo!

jab hum yeh haseen galati kar bethe
na jaane khuda se kaun sa sauda kar bethe
jeete hai ab sirf tumhari yaadon mein
ke ab to hum tumhari nafrat se bhi mohabbat kar bethe


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abdbundeli

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Re: payar

«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2008, 06:31:14 AM »

Quote from: noor mahal on October 06, 2008, 06:15:53 PM

hum khaak jameen ki ho kar ke..
us chaand ki hasrat kar bethe..
vo cheez khuda se unchi thi..
hum jis se mohbat kar bethe...

noor mahal ji,
The heart-felt inner-most pain communicated through these four lines is doubtlessly peerless in its own area of existence. Congrats.
- abd bundeli


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noor mahal

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Re: payar

«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2008, 10:08:36 AM »

thanks ....mene first time send kra hai..thanks for appreaciating...


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noor mahal

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Re: payar

«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2008, 10:11:14 AM »

mere khat vi mere vangu...
anakh meri de maare ne...
tenu likh likh ke sajna..
pta nhi mai kine khat faare ne..


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abdbundeli

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Re: payar

«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2008, 10:41:37 AM »

Quote from: noor mahal on October 07, 2008, 10:11:14 AM

mere khat vi mere vangu...
anakh meri de maare ne...
tenu likh likh ke sajna..
pta nhi mai kine khat faare ne..

noor mahal ji,
Waah! Baddee sohnee-sohnee baataan kardeen hain aap to ji!! I know very little of Panjabi language, but what you said as above, pierced through the very heart. I dont think there are too many of the present Panjabi writers
who could compeer the height of your very sensitive emotional poetry. Please let me read more of them!
- abd bundeli