kala jadu.

by akashsharma1990 on May 15, 2012, 08:11:14 AM
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ek aur rap song written by me obviously,
agar koi aur improvement isme ho sakti hai to please suggest kare.
Help will be appreciated..
and please koi accha sa title bhi decide kar dena.
Thank you.

so here it is...
Akash Sharma pesh karde ne rap song...
................................................. ....................
Tera kala yeh suit
Aur tere dashing boot
Surat ne teri lia dil mera loot
Tune kala jadu chalaya
Main tere pichhe pichhe aaya
Teri zulfon ne Mujhe diwana pagal bnaya
Teri annkhein samander
Duba main jiske andar
Bachane aaye mere dost
Sare ke sare lafandar

You are with your friends...
To sun...

Tere doston ko kahun sorry unme
Bas pasand tu aayi chori
Tu hai itni kitni gori
Teri awaz lage lori
Tirchi nigahon teri kare
Mere dil me mori..

Inspirations meri shady honey kid cudi grewal
Aage gana sunae mera dost Aggarwal
Ohhh isse yeh gana nahi ata
Yeh to synth bajata
Mere lie music bnata
Mujhse ulte kam karvata
main befikar karein jata
Apne jhande fehrata
Yeh Mera sath die jata
Islie yeh mera dost kehlata

Ab Dekh Sunn...
Jo bhi hui ho khata
Maaf kar de mujhe
Aur ab kar de haan
Wait hoti kahan
Bnaye swarg yahan
Likhe nayi dastan
Lut lun ye jahan
Tujhe kehni sirf haan

Main likhun gaane spontaneous
Mera genre miscellaneous
Main hun hilarious
Girl,tu badi mysterious..
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2012, 09:37:15 AM »
waah waah kyaa modern song hai good
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2012, 05:26:56 PM »
waaaaaah waaaaaahhh
:!
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rapchikk rap hai tune banaya
chori ne tujhko hoga seene se lagaya
kare tu hai naadani bada jhatpatt
likha hai gaana bada chatpatt
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2012, 05:49:50 PM »
Sarfira sir ji bas mauka hi nhi mila ladki ko suna ne ka:-(
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2012, 06:30:49 PM »
ek aur rap song written by me obviously,
agar koi aur improvement isme ho sakti hai to please suggest kare.
Help will be appreciated..
and please koi accha sa title bhi decide kar dena.
Thank you.

so here it is...
Akash Sharma pesh karde ne rap song...
................................................. ....................
Tera kala yeh suit
Aur tere dashing boot
Surat ne teri lia dil mera loot
Tune kala jadu chalaya
Main tere pichhe pichhe aaya
Teri zulfon ne Mujhe diwana pagal bnaya
Teri annkhein samander
Duba main jiske andar
Bachane aaye mere dost
Sare ke sare lafandar

You are with your friends...
To sun...

Tere doston ko kahun sorry unme
Bas pasand tu aayi chori
Tu hai itni kitni gori
Teri awaz lage lori
Tirchi nigahon teri kare
Mere dil me mori..

Inspirations meri shady honey kid cudi grewal
Aage gana sunae mera dost Aggarwal
Ohhh isse yeh gana nahi ata
Yeh to synth bajata
Mere lie music bnata
Mujhse ulte kam karvata
main befikar karein jata
Apne jhande fehrata
Yeh Mera sath die jata
Islie yeh mera dost kehlata

Ab Dekh Sunn...
Jo bhi hui ho khata
Maaf kar de mujhe
Aur ab kar de haan
Wait hoti kahan
Bnaye swarg yahan
Likhe nayi dastan
Lut lun ye jahan
Tujhe kehni sirf haan

Main likhun gaane spontaneous
Mera genre miscellaneous
Main hun hilarious
Girl,tu badi mysterious..

very funny. achchcha hai
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2012, 06:35:39 PM »
good one  kala jaadoo chal gaya
ghansham das ahuja
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