खोयी-खोईसी थी:Songs & Lyrics

jyuthika

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खोयी-खोईसी थी ज़िन्दगी,
तू मिली तो मिली जिंदगी,
ये कैसा खुमार है छाया?
जबसे यारा तू दिलमे समाया,
मिला मुझे प्यारका नज़राना …
रबका है शुकराना…
होगा तय तेरा मिलना
तभी तो रास आया हमें जीना,
आये हो ज़िन्दगीमें फिर ना जाना,
इतना करम फरमाना,
सीखे है अभी तो जीना
मंज़ूर नहीं अब एक पलभी तेरे बिना....खोयी
है खिले देखो फूल दिलमे,
जबसे हम है लगे मिलने,
ना कभी तरसाना, प्यार सदा बरसाना,
यूँही प्यार जताना,दिलमे अपने बसाना ....खोयी
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ज्युथिका
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Re: खोयी-खोईसी थी

«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2015, 06:22:22 PM »

Very nice


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Re: खोयी-खोईसी थी

«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2015, 07:04:59 PM »

Bahut khoob jyuthika ji... aapne ek jagah राज़ word use kiya hai jahan tak main samajhta hun रास hona chahiye.


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Re: खोयी-खोईसी थी

«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2015, 08:50:39 PM »

bahut khoob Jyuthikha Jee, the word raj should be raaz aap issey theek kar leejiye.
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jyuthika

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Re: खोयी-खोईसी थी

«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2015, 10:03:00 AM »

thanks a lot to all of u, n ys its my mistake, i improve it by wrote raas k. thanks for advice..


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Re: खोयी-खोईसी थी

«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2015, 03:17:41 PM »

Quote from: jyuthika on September 30, 2015, 09:57:16 AM


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Re: खोयी-खोईसी थी

«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2015, 10:21:57 AM »

thanks again....


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Re: खोयी-खोईसी थी

«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2015, 05:12:53 PM »

bohat khubsurat waaaahhhh


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Re: खोयी-खोईसी थी

«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2015, 10:54:36 AM »

thanks again...


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