Aadmi.............( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on April 22, 2010, 05:20:43 AM
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Apne is naye safar shuruaat is naye Tanziyaa kalam se kar raha hu, ummeed hai aapko pasand aaye......apni ray zarur dijiyega.


Khokhli bato sa, khokhla hai aadmi
Jaan pe ban aaye, to doghla hai aadmi

Busdil bana jo dekhe, mazloom zamane ko
Kehte hai sabhi usko, bhala hai aadmi

Tanhaieeyaa.N safar ki, maar deti hai
Sath kab kisi ke, chala hai aadmi

Kare parsaiee* sabki, huro ki tamanna
Rab janta hai kitna, manchala hai aadmi

Dhoondne jo nikle, usool ke mutabik
Kaha koi aisa, mila hai aadmi

Zulm nafratein bhookh muflisi
Sharmindgi ka ek, silsila hai aadmi

Sabne ne hai yaha bati, hisse ki aag apni
Apni hi aag me, jala hai aadmi

Q tajjub kare hai, Ghayel ki madhoshi par
Jo mukhtalif nasho me, mubtila hai aadmi

Sajid Ghayel

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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2010, 05:39:39 AM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai       Sajid_Ghayal ji.......


Kaheno ko toh zindagi jee raha hai har Aadmi
haqeekat mein zindagi sey haar chuka hai har Aadmi.....
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2010, 07:51:00 AM »
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Bahut hi uchkoti ki rachna se aap ne suruat kiya hai
Bas yun hi likte rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2010, 10:23:01 AM »
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Bahot achha likha hai Ghayel ji. Nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2010, 11:03:46 AM »
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Waah Waah waah...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2010, 02:32:03 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne Sajid ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2010, 05:57:04 AM »
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Quote from: cara on April 22, 2010, 05:39:39 AM
Wah wah kya baat hai       Sajid_Ghayal ji.......


Kaheno ko toh zindagi jee raha hai har Aadmi
haqeekat mein zindagi sey haar chuka hai har Aadmi.....

Thank u Cara Jee for your time and beautiful Addition.........
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2010, 05:03:26 PM »
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BEHTREEN.........SAJID SB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 09:28:22 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 22, 2010, 07:51:00 AM
Bahut hi uchkoti ki rachna se aap ne suruat kiya hai
Bas yun hi likte rahiye

Thanks for your time and comment Rajesh Bhai............
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2010, 09:38:57 PM »
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Subhan Allah Bohat Achcha Likha Hau Sajid Bhai,.

Allah Aur Nawaaze Aapko,.

Ahlan Wa Sahlan
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2010, 09:49:19 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Sajid ji,bahut sachai,aur khoobsurat kavita pesh kiya aapne.great creation.excellent,Beautiful lines by Cara ji,keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2010, 03:11:35 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 22, 2010, 10:23:01 AM
Bahot achha likha hai Ghayel ji. Nice creation.

Nawazish Karam Riyaz Saheb.......
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«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2010, 08:27:49 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 22, 2010, 11:03:46 AM
Waah Waah waah...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat bohat shukriyaa.N mere bhai............bas yuhi apni nazre inayat kayem rakhna hum par.
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«Reply #13 on: June 01, 2010, 08:38:29 AM »
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Sajidbhai,
bahut hi behtarin. Bhai Wah!
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«Reply #14 on: June 01, 2010, 08:48:13 AM »
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WAH GHAYEL JI... TOOOO GOOOD... VERY NCIE ...
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