Aadmi.............( Ghayel ) -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

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«Reply #15 on: August 02, 2010, 10:46:56 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on April 22, 2010, 02:32:03 PM

bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne Sajid ji....!!!

Sab aapki zarra nawazi hai mere bhai........badi meharbani jo aapne apna waqt diya.


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Re: Aadmi.............( Ghayel )

«Reply #16 on: August 03, 2010, 04:31:46 AM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on April 22, 2010, 05:20:43 AM

Apne is naye safar shuruaat is naye Tanziyaa kalam se kar raha hu, ummeed hai aapko pasand aaye......apni ray zarur dijiyega.

Khokhli bato sa, khokhla hai aadmi
Jaan pe ban aaye, to doghla hai aadmi

Busdil bana jo dekhe, mazloom zamane ko
Kehte hai sabhi usko, bhala hai aadmi

Tanhaieeyaa.N safar ki, maar deti hai
Sath kab kisi ke, chala hai aadmi

Kare parsaiee* sabki, huro ki tamanna
Rab janta hai kitna, manchala hai aadmi

Dhoondne jo nikle, usool ke mutabik
Kaha koi aisa, mila hai aadmi

Zulm nafratein bhookh muflisi
Sharmindgi ka ek, silsila hai aadmi

Sabne ne hai yaha bati, hisse ki aag apni
Apni hi aag me, jala hai aadmi

Q tajjub kare hai, Ghayel ki madhoshi par
Jo mukhtalif nasho me, mubtila hai aadmi

Sajid Ghayel

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dil ki gehraai se ...likhi rachna hai ye ghayal ji....
har ek lafz apne aap me pura sa laga...
kitne kum lafzon me aap ek insaan ki fitrat samjha gaye.

bhttttt khubbbb.....


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Re: Aadmi.............( Ghayel )

«Reply #17 on: August 24, 2010, 07:53:30 PM »

Sajid Ghayal Sahab Aadaab O Salam

Aapki aur ek kalaam se rubaru ho liye...
Aur aadmi ki fitrat per aapki yeh kalam bhi umdaa lagi...

Dil se daad janab...

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on April 22, 2010, 05:20:43 AM

Apne is naye safar shuruaat is naye Tanziyaa kalam se kar raha hu, ummeed hai aapko pasand aaye......apni ray zarur dijiyega.

Khokhli bato sa, khokhla hai aadmi
Jaan pe ban aaye, to doghla hai aadmi

Kia Baat hai Janab, Bahut karaara tamacha mara hai insaani fitrat ko...

Buzdil bana jo dekhe, mazloom zamane ko
Kehte hai sabhi usko, bhala hai aadmi

Bahut sahiN lajawaab...

Tanhaieeyaa.N safar ki, maar deti hai
Sath kab kisi ke, chala hai aadmi

Achcha khayaal hai ... Kuch bayaani meiN kamzor lag raha hai.....
Abhi to koi surat humare zahen meiN nahi ban rahi hai..

Kare parsaiee* sabki, huro ki tamanna
Rab janta hai kitna, manchala hai aadmi

He heheheh he ... Kia janab aap bhi.. Bahut khoob.. Bahut umdaa

Dhoondne jo nikle, usool ke mutabik
Kaha koi aisa, mila hai aadmi

Khayaal achcha hai... Baat banti bhi nazar aa rahi hai per bayaani meiN kamzori rahi.

Zulm nafratein bhookh muflisi
Sharmindgi ka ek, silsila hai aadmi

YahaaN kuch kahna munaseeb hi nahi... Ek tarfa pahelu rakha hai aapne... So baat durust hai...

Sabne ne hai yaha bati, hisse ki aag apni
Apni hi aag me, jala hai aadmi

Sher behad kamzor hai... Khayaal khul nahi paya......

Q tajjub kare hai, Ghayel ki madhoshi par
Jo mukhtalif nasho me, mubtila hai aadmi

Baat pate ki kahi hai janab... Maqta achcha raha... Dil se daad Hazir hai..

Sajid Ghayel

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Umdaa Kalaam per dil se daad kabool kijiye....

Likhate rahiye...
khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez


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Re: Aadmi.............( Ghayel )

«Reply #18 on: August 24, 2010, 07:55:46 PM »

parwaz ji mujhe aapka ye style bada hi achch alagta hai kisi kalaam ko padhne ka
har sher ki jis tarah aap tareef karte hain wahhhhhhh


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Re: Aadmi.............( Ghayel )

«Reply #19 on: September 05, 2011, 08:50:15 AM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on April 22, 2010, 05:20:43 AM

Apne is naye safar shuruaat is naye Tanziyaa kalam se kar raha hu, ummeed hai aapko pasand aaye......apni ray zarur dijiyega.

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bahut bahut khoob...............!


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