Aag Maine Khud Laga-e- hai Jal jane do !!

by abdulqadeer on January 10, 2009, 06:06:35 AM
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Uski baten na karo mujhe bhool jane do !!
Raath gaheri ho gayi ab so jane do !!
Na karo hamdardi mere ashiyane se doosto !!
Aag maine khud laga-e- hai  jal jane do !!

Mujhe maar na  hi samandaron ki khuesh agar !!
To chin lo fatwar mujhe doob jane do !!

Na mai totonga kabhi na mere hausle !!
Karne do sitam usse hadh se guzar jane do !!

Ladengi fir meri tanha-e-yan uski yadoon se !!
Hone do sham zara suraj ko dhal jane do !!

Naye zakham dene ki khuesh rakhte ho  agar !!
To math khuredo mere purene zakhmo ko bhar jane do !!

tumhari har khushi se unhe narfath hai Qadeer !!
Apne armanoo ko toot ke bhikar jane do !!


Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 06:55:35 AM »
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YAAR KASAM SE KYA LIKHA HAI JITNI YARIF KARU KAM HAI
YUNHI LIKHATE RAHO
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2009, 07:06:56 AM »
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YAAR KASAM SE KYA LIKHA HAI JITNI YARIF KARU KAM HAI
YUNHI LIKHATE RAHO

Shukriya mere bhai apne izzath bakshi mere kalam ko ahesan mand hon janab apka !!

Qadeer toopchi
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2009, 07:10:11 AM »
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Uski baten na karo mujhe bhool jane do !!
Raath gaheri ho gayi ab so jane do !!
Na karo hamdardi mere ashiyane se doosto !!
Aag maine khud laga-e- hai  jal jane do !!

Mujhe maar na  hi samandaron ki khuesh agar !!
To chin lo fatwar mujhe doob jane do !!

Na mai totonga kabhi na mere hausle !!
Karne do sitam usse hadh se guzar jane do !!

Ladengi fir meri tanha-e-yan uski yadoon se !!
Hone do sham zara suraj ko dhal jane do !!

Naye zakham dene ki khuesh rakhte ho  agar !!
To math khuredo mere purene zakhmo ko bhar jane do !!

tumhari har khushi se unhe narfath hai Qadeer !!
Apne armanoo ko toot ke bhikar jane do !!


Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai


Bahut Bahut aur Bahut hi khoob kalaam Qadeer Ji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2009, 07:47:14 AM »
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Bahut Bahut aur Bahut hi khoob kalaam Qadeer Ji.. Applause Applause Applause

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya mahiya ji apne meri ghazal ko apna waqath diya !!

Qadeer toopchi
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2009, 07:51:37 AM »
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Wah Wah Qadeer Bhai Kya Baat Hai
Ek Ek Shabd Dard Mein Dooba Hua Hau Jaise
Khaskar Ye Lines To Dil Mein Utar Gayi
Bohat Khoob Keep It Up.... icon_thumleft

Shukriya Shihab bhai apne jo izzath di hai mere kalam ko usko ahesan rahega hum per bhai !! allah apko khush rakhe shihab!!

Qadeer toopchi
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2009, 07:56:32 AM »
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bahut achche qadeerbhai

kii dekho hai oonka ghar andhere main dooba hua
jala do mere ghar ko aur roshni kar jaane do
dekha hai maine jalte huye patango ko shama kii khatir
aaj na roko mujhe bhi jal jaane do...........
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2009, 07:58:47 AM »
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bahut achche qadeerbhai

kii dekho hai oonka ghar andhere main dooba hua
jala do mere ghar ko aur roshni kar jaane do
dekha hai maine jalte huye patango ko shama kii khatir
aaj na roko mujhe bhi jal jaane do...........

Shukriya bhai salil aur wah apne bhi qoob likha hai dost !!

Qadeer toopchi
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2009, 08:51:54 AM »
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Qadeer Saheb Waise Hum Aap Ustadon Ke Aage
Kich Bhi Nahi Hai Phir Bhi Ek Chhoti Si
Koshish Ki Hai Galti Maf Ho....


Hijar Ki Aag Mein, Mujhe Sulag Jaane Do
Uske Intazaar Mein Hi Mujhe Mar Jaane Do.

Ek Tamanna Hai Faqat Meharbaan Rahe Khuda
Baaki Duniyan Ko Mujhse Khafaa Ho Jaane Do.

Aarzoo Hai Ki Har Pal Usko Dekhta Rahun Me
Kuch Derr Mujhe Khwabon Mein Kho Jaane Do.

Mein Seh Lunga Haste Hue Saare Dard.o.Ghum Ko
Gar Woh Khush Hai To Usse Kissi Ka Ho Jaane Do.

Muddat Se Ghutan Si Ho Rahi Hai Dil Ko Seeney Me
Aaj Mujhe Har Baat Ko Lafzon Mein Keh Jaane Do




Bahot bahot qoob mere bhai acha likha kya kya kahene !! yunhi likhte raho !! umar mujhe itni izzath bakashne ka shukriya bhai.

Qadeer toopchi
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2009, 08:53:46 AM »
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Bohat Bohat Shukariya Qadeer Bhai

Shukriya ki kya bath hai yaar mere bhai bus likhte raha !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2009, 04:39:22 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Qadeer ji...

Good work Shihab ji!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2009, 05:28:57 PM »
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Wonderful creation Toopchi ji...and majid ji.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: January 14, 2009, 03:18:10 AM »
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Wonderful creation Toopchi ji...and majid ji.. Clapping Smiley


Thanks a lot roji ji !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #13 on: January 19, 2009, 01:13:24 PM »
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Bohat Badhiya Hai Bhaijaan,.
Nice Ome Again,.
Sorry Zara Dair Se Pardha Maine Ise,.
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2009, 03:54:45 AM »
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Bohat Badhiya Hai Bhaijaan,.
Nice Ome Again,.
Sorry Zara Dair Se Pardha Maine Ise,.


Koi bath nahi mere bhai shukriya jo tum padli !! aur ahesan mand hon apka jo apne isse pasand kiya mere bhai !! Allah hum sub kamiyabi ata kare Ameen !!

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