Aaj Eid Hai, Kal Diwali Aayegi (Pardesiyon Ka Dard) "Khwaish"

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Yeh Kalaam Mere Dil Ke bahut Kareeb Rahega,Isliye Kyonki Yeh Kalaam Main
Kisi Ki Guzaarish Par Likh Raha Hoon, Uss Shakhs Ne Mujhse yeh kahaa
Tha Ke Kabhi Pardesiyon Ke Dard par Zaroor Kuch Likhiyega,Unke Mutaabik Main
Inn JazboN Se Insaaf Shayad kar Paau..Kuch Unn Logon par Likh Raha Hoon Jo
Duniyavi Majbooriyon Ki Wajeh Se Apno Se Bichadkar Pardes Mein Rehne Jaate Hai..
Do Roti Ki Bhook Insaan Ko Insaan Yaa Yeh Kahoon Apno Ko Apno se Juuda Kar Deti Hai
Bin Apno ke Naa Diwali-Diwali Lagti Hai, Naa Eid-Eid...Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Sab Ke Dil Ko Chuu sakoon
Aur uss Dost Ki Iss Guzaarish Ko Sahee Lafz De Sakoon..Shukriya




Woh Pardes Jaa Kar Puchte Hain,Kya-Kya Lekar Aau "Faraaz"
Aur Hum Gore Kaagaz Par Uskaa Naam...
Likhte Gaye..Likhte Gaye..Likhte Gaye...!!!!



Aaj Kisi Baat par Sach Kehta Hoon Muskuraaya Naa Gaya
Kya Kahun, Bin Tere Ek Pal Bhi Sukoon Se Bitaaya Naa Gaya

Mujhe Yaad Hai Tera Darwaaze Tak Aakar Mujhe Vida Karna..!!!
Yaadon Ke Uss Kaafile Ko Zehan Se Mitaaya Naa Gaya

Tanha Raaton MeiN Apni Hi Parchai Ko Dhundhta Raha Main
Kisi Bhi Bahaane Se Apne Mann Ko Aaj Behlaaya Naa Gaya

Maa Ke Banne Haathon Ke Rotiyon Ki Bahut Yaad Aayi..!!!!
Sab Kuch Tha Paas Mere Par Pet Bhar Khaaya Naa Gaya

Naa Jane Kitni Umeedein Baandhi Hai Ghar Par Sabne Mujhse
Zimmedariyon Ka Bhoj Mujh se Iss Kadar Uthaaya Naa Gaya

Duniya Ki Iss Bheed MeN Khud Ko Kho Naa Doon,Darr Lagta Hai
Par Iss Chaar Deewari Makaan meN Khud Ko Chupaaya Naa Gaya

Aaj Eid Hai, Kal Diwali Aayegi,Dher Saari Khushiyan Layegi
Bin Apno Ke Pardes mein Yeh Tyohaar Mujhse Manaaya Naa Gaya

Sochta Raha Tujhse Haal-e-Dil Keh Doon To Kuch Tassali Mile..!!
Par Tujhe Ruula Naa Doon isliye Mujh se Kuch Bataaya Naa Gaya

Kuch Yuh Ho "Mere Khuda" Ke Mera Pariwaar Mere Saath Rahe..!!!!
Tanha Hoon Isliye Ashq AankhoN meN Mujh se Laaya Naa Gaya


             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2012, 01:30:00 PM »
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Us dost ko hum shukriya kahenge kyu k hame itna badiya kavita padne ko mila.

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Waah waah waah waah....Bahut khoobsurat.
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2012, 02:12:12 PM »
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Waah bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2012, 02:59:37 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2012, 05:01:09 PM »
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Us dost ko hum shukriya kahenge kyu k hame itna badiya kavita padne ko mila.

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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2012, 05:07:45 PM »
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Aankhon Mein Nami Aa Gayi,.

Hum To Hain Pardes Mein, Des Mein Nikla Hoga Chand,.n
Too Good Bhai,.
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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2012, 06:23:41 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 26, 2012, 02:02:39 PM
Waah waah waah waah....Bahut khoobsurat.


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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2012, 06:44:54 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


Janab aap waqai un ahsaasoN ko mehsus kar lete haiN jiska aapna kabhi samna
nahi kiya, aur usse badi baat yeH hai ke aap un khayaalaat ko khoob lafzoN
meiN bhi baNd dete hai... Usual Smile yeH behad qabil e tareef baat hai... Usual Smile

Aapne behad achchi kalaam kahi hai.. kafi hadh tak aapne apne khayaaloN se
unke ahsaas ko touch kiya hai jo yeH yaqeenan mehsus karne wale jaante haiN.. Usual Smile

Puri kalaam umdaa rahi par jo qouted ashaar hai, woH waqai dil ko chhute haiN.. Usual Smile
Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 




Quote from: khwaish on October 26, 2012, 01:22:06 PM


Woh Pardes Jaa Kar Puchte Hain,Kya-Kya Lekar Aau "Faraaz"
Aur Hum Gore Kaagaz Par Uskaa Naam...
Likhte Gaye..Likhte Gaye..Likhte Gaye...!!!!




Mujhe Yaad Hai Tera Darwaaze Tak Aakar Mujhe Vida Karna..!!!
Yaadon Ke Uss Kaafile Ko Zehan Se Mitaaya Naa Gaya

Tanha Raaton MeiN Apni Hi Parchai Ko Dhundhta Raha Main
Kisi Bhi Bahaane Se Apne Mann Ko Aaj Behlaaya Naa Gaya

Maa Ke Banne Haathon Ke Rotiyon Ki Bahut Yaad Aayi..!!!!
Sab Kuch Tha Paas Mere Par Pet Bhar Khaaya Naa Gaya

Aaj Eid Hai, Kal Diwali Aayegi,Dher Saari Khushiyan Layegi
Bin Apno Ke Pardes mein Yeh Tyohaar Mujhse Manaaya Naa Gaya

Sochta Raha Tujhse Haal-e-Dil Keh Doon To Kuch Tassali Mile..!!
Par Tujhe Ruula Naa Doon isliye Mujh se Kuch Bataaya Naa Gaya

Kuch Yuh Ho "Mere Khuda" Ke Mera Pariwaar Mere Saath Rahe..!!!!
Tanha Hoon Isliye Ashq AankhoN meN Mujh se Laaya Naa Gaya


             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2012, 07:20:14 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 26, 2012, 01:22:06 PM




Woh Pardes Jaa Kar Puchte Hain,Kya-Kya Lekar Aau "Faraaz"
Aur Hum Gore Kaagaz Par Uskaa Naam...
Likhte Gaye..Likhte Gaye..Likhte Gaye...!!!!



Aaj Kisi Baat par Sach Kehta Hoon Muskuraaya Naa Gaya
Kya Kahun, Bin Tere Ek Pal Bhi Sukoon Se Bitaaya Naa Gaya

 Applause Applause Applause

Mujhe Yaad Hai Tera Darwaaze Tak Aakar Mujhe Vida Karna..!!!
Yaadon Ke Uss Kaafile Ko Zehan Se Mitaaya Naa Gaya

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tanha Raaton MeiN Apni Hi Parchai Ko Dhundhta Raha Main
Kisi Bhi Bahaane Se Apne Mann Ko Aaj Behlaaya Naa Gaya

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Maa Ke Banne Haathon Ke Rotiyon Ki Bahut Yaad Aayi..!!!!
Sab Kuch Tha Paas Mere Par Pet Bhar Khaaya Naa Gaya

 Applause Applause Applause

Naa Jane Kitni Umeedein Baandhi Hai Ghar Par Sabne Mujhse
Zimmedariyon Ka Bhoj Mujh se Iss Kadar Uthaaya Naa Gaya

 Applause Applause Applause

Duniya Ki Iss Bheed MeN Khud Ko Kho Naa Doon,Darr Lagta Hai
Par Iss Chaar Deewari Makaan meN Khud Ko Chupaaya Naa Gaya
 
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Aaj Eid Hai, Kal Diwali Aayegi,Dher Saari Khushiyan Layegi
Bin Apno Ke Pardes mein Yeh Tyohaar Mujhse Manaaya Naa Gaya

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Sochta Raha Tujhse Haal-e-Dil Keh Doon To Kuch Tassali Mile..!!
Par Tujhe Ruula Naa Doon isliye Mujh se Kuch Bataaya Naa Gaya

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Kuch Yuh Ho "Mere Khuda" Ke Mera Pariwaar Mere Saath Rahe..!!!!
Tanha Hoon Isliye Ashq AankhoN meN Mujh se Laaya Naa Gaya

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bohat Khub Khwaish Jee!!! Jo bhi pardes mein hoga aur yeh kalaam padega yakeenan ro dega...Ghar Se Door Insaan ke ehsaason ko bohat aache se bataya hai aapne...

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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2012, 01:03:39 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2012, 01:44:59 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 26, 2012, 01:22:06 PM
Yeh Kalaam Mere Dil Ke bahut Kareeb Rahega,Isliye Kyonki Yeh Kalaam Main
Kisi Ki Guzaarish Par Likh Raha Hoon, Uss Shakhs Ne Mujhse yeh kahaa
Tha Ke Kabhi Pardesiyon Ke Dard par Zaroor Kuch Likhiyega,Unke Mutaabik Main
Inn JazboN Se Insaaf Shayad kar Paau..Kuch Unn Logon par Likh Raha Hoon Jo
Duniyavi Majbooriyon Ki Wajeh Se Apno Se Bichadkar Pardes Mein Rehne Jaate Hai..
Do Roti Ki Bhook Insaan Ko Insaan Yaa Yeh Kahoon Apno Ko Apno se Juuda Kar Deti Hai
Bin Apno ke Naa Diwali-Diwali Lagti Hai, Naa Eid-Eid...Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Sab Ke Dil Ko Chuu sakoon
Aur uss Dost Ki Iss Guzaarish Ko Sahee Lafz De Sakoon..Shukriya



Khwaish ji Aap ney to itnaye sahi shabdho mai hum parwasiyu kay dil ka haal sunnaya ki  mn bhar aaya.
sheel didi


Woh Pardes Jaa Kar Puchte Hain,Kya-Kya Lekar Aau "Faraaz"
Aur Hum Gore Kaagaz Par Uskaa Naam...
Likhte Gaye..Likhte Gaye..Likhte Gaye...!!!!



Aaj Kisi Baat par Sach Kehta Hoon Muskuraaya Naa Gaya
Kya Kahun, Bin Tere Ek Pal Bhi Sukoon Se Bitaaya Naa Gaya

Mujhe Yaad Hai Tera Darwaaze Tak Aakar Mujhe Vida Karna..!!!
Yaadon Ke Uss Kaafile Ko Zehan Se Mitaaya Naa Gaya

Tanha Raaton MeiN Apni Hi Parchai Ko Dhundhta Raha Main
Kisi Bhi Bahaane Se Apne Mann Ko Aaj Behlaaya Naa Gaya

Maa Ke Banne Haathon Ke Rotiyon Ki Bahut Yaad Aayi..!!!!
Sab Kuch Tha Paas Mere Par Pet Bhar Khaaya Naa Gaya

Naa Jane Kitni Umeedein Baandhi Hai Ghar Par Sabne Mujhse
Zimmedariyon Ka Bhoj Mujh se Iss Kadar Uthaaya Naa Gaya

Duniya Ki Iss Bheed MeN Khud Ko Kho Naa Doon,Darr Lagta Hai
Par Iss Chaar Deewari Makaan meN Khud Ko Chupaaya Naa Gaya

Aaj Eid Hai, Kal Diwali Aayegi,Dher Saari Khushiyan Layegi
Bin Apno Ke Pardes mein Yeh Tyohaar Mujhse Manaaya Naa Gaya

Sochta Raha Tujhse Haal-e-Dil Keh Doon To Kuch Tassali Mile..!!
Par Tujhe Ruula Naa Doon isliye Mujh se Kuch Bataaya Naa Gaya

Kuch Yuh Ho "Mere Khuda" Ke Mera Pariwaar Mere Saath Rahe..!!!!
Tanha Hoon Isliye Ashq AankhoN meN Mujh se Laaya Naa Gaya


             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on October 26, 2012, 02:12:12 PM
Waah bahut khoob  Applause Applause


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speechless...............ek incredible thought........... just awesome sir...... tareef ke liye shabd nahi hai aur is tarah ki qalam sirf aap hi likh sakte hain

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