Aaj kal ka yeH dour hai...... " ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on December 25, 2010, 06:21:18 PM
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Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O Tasleem.......

YahaaN ka mousam hi itna shayarana hai ke hum shyari doo rahkar bhi
YahaaN aane ke bad kalam chalana sikh gaye.... Usual Smile

Aise hi baithe baithe kuch tanziyaa khayaal zahen meiN ban gaye..
SO aapki nazar kar raheN hai.... Ummid hai aapko pasnd aayeNge... Usual Smile          






Kalyug hi yeH ghor hai kis kis se boleN
Aaj kal ka yeH dour hai kis kis se boleN

Haath uthao unke dar wo de ya na deN
Ummid ki yehi bhor hai kis kis se boleN

Dil ke rishte haiN yeH ehtemad ki dor par
Badi nazuk yeH dor hai kis kis se boleN

Naa karo sitam ke dil ke tukde ho chale
Dil yeH bada kamzor hai kis kis se boleN

Mujhko na dekho youN hairat se aye logoN
Dilbar unka koi aur hai kis kis se boleN
         
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«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2010, 06:35:37 PM »
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Hahahahaha Maqta shaandaar raha, waise dilbar aapka bhi hota to humko hairat na hoti aap ho hi itne pyaare.
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«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2010, 06:45:19 PM »
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uffffffff parwz ji ek aur lajawab creation aagai aapki......

mast mast ekdum jaandaar..sply last stanza to bada hi mast laga humko ji......
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«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2010, 07:05:15 PM »
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Parwaaz ji--
bahut achha aur sachha kaha aapne.
""
ghor kaliyug hai kis kis ko bologe
     juba par sabhi ke hai jhooth ka taala
kis kis ke khologe
     mann ko apne maar lo
aur ab sachh ko sweekar lo
""
thanx
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«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2010, 07:27:47 PM »
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Akhri stanza toh dil legaya..
Bahaut khoob..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2010, 05:42:09 AM »
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Kalyug hi yeH ghor hai kis kis se boleN
Aaj kal ka yeH dour hai kis kis se boleN

Dil ke rishte haiN yeH ehtemad ki dor par
Badi nazuk yeH dor hai kis kis se boleN

Naa karo sitam ke dil ke tukde ho chale
Dil yeH bada kamzor hai kis kis se boleN

Very Impressive ... ! Parwaaz Ji !

aapne tamaam ghazal me radeef ko bahut khoobsurti se nibhaaya hai ...
very nice creation ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Applause Applause Applause Applause

aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2010, 05:58:32 AM »
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Waaaaaaaah jee waaaaaaaaah kamaal kar diyaa aap ne Parvez jee!bahut khoob! dheroN daad kabool kareN.
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2010, 08:25:04 AM »
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bahut badhiya Parwaaz ji.
reality se bharpoor..
daad hai ji daad .
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2010, 10:20:36 AM »
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Bahut Khub Parwaaz Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2010, 10:23:13 AM »
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mast mast poetry parwaaz ji.....ekdum lajawab.....superb
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2010, 06:27:03 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on December 25, 2010, 06:35:37 PM
Hahahahaha Maqta shaandaar raha, waise dilbar aapka bhi hota to humko hairat na hoti aap ho hi itne pyaare.



Janab Ghayal Sahab Aadaab!

Aakhri ashaar hi sahiN pasand karne ke liye hum dil se
mashoor o mamnoon hai.....

Jee janab ab baat hi aisi sahiN hai to hum kia kaheN..
Tanz bhi hai to khud ke liye... tongue3

Khair aate rahiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2010, 06:38:39 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 25, 2010, 06:45:19 PM
uffffffff parwz ji ek aur lajawab creation aagai aapki......

mast mast ekdum jaandaar..sply last stanza to bada hi mast laga humko ji......



Thanks Kasak jee ....

Thanks for your apprciation..
Aap humesha hi humari hounsla afzai karti hai..
Iske liye dil se shkriyaa... Usual Smile

Agar aap site par naa ho to yakeenan is site ki
Ronak kam ho jayeNgi ...

Khush o aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2010, 04:29:18 AM »
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Bahut khoob Parwaaz Ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2011, 08:17:44 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 25, 2010, 06:21:18 PM
Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O Tasleem.......

YahaaN ka mousam hi itna shayarana hai ke hum shyari doo rahkar bhi
YahaaN aane ke bad kalam chalana sikh gaye.... Usual Smile

Aise hi baithe baithe kuch tanziyaa khayaal zahen meiN ban gaye..
SO aapki nazar kar raheN hai.... Ummid hai aapko pasnd aayeNge... Usual Smile           






Kalyug hi yeH ghor hai kis kis se boleN
Aaj kal ka yeH dour hai kis kis se boleN

Haath uthao unke dar wo de ya na deN
Ummid ki yehi bhor hai kis kis se boleN

Dil ke rishte haiN yeH ehtemad ki dor par
Badi nazuk yeH dor hai kis kis se boleN

Naa karo sitam ke dil ke tukde ho chale
Dil yeH bada kamzor hai kis kis se boleN

Mujhko na dekho youN hairat se aye logoN
Dilbar unka koi aur hai kis kis se boleN
         



AAPKA YE TANZIA ANDAAZ DIL KO CHOO GAYA JANAB PARWAAZ SB
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«Reply #14 on: February 04, 2011, 10:05:37 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on December 25, 2010, 07:05:15 PM
Parwaaz ji--
bahut achha aur sachha kaha aapne.
""
ghor kaliyug hai kis kis ko bologe
     juba par sabhi ke hai jhooth ka taala
kis kis ke khologe
     mann ko apne maar lo
aur ab sachh ko sweekar lo
""
thanx
""

Thanks Nirala Jee...

Thanks for your appriciation and, also for you beautiful reply..
Keep visiting...

Keep smiling...
May God Bless You...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         
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