Aaj kal ka yeH dour hai...... " ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on December 25, 2010, 06:21:18 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2011, 10:08:41 AM »
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bahut khoob Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: February 04, 2011, 10:17:07 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on December 25, 2010, 07:27:47 PM
Akhri stanza toh dil legaya..
Bahaut khoob..
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Shukiyaa janab... In khubsurat taliyoN ka.. Usual Smile
And also thanks for last stanza.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye.. Saath banaaye rakhiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile          
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«Reply #17 on: February 04, 2011, 10:27:58 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on December 26, 2010, 05:42:09 AM
Kalyug hi yeH ghor hai kis kis se boleN
Aaj kal ka yeH dour hai kis kis se boleN

Dil ke rishte haiN yeH ehtemad ki dor par
Badi nazuk yeH dor hai kis kis se boleN

Naa karo sitam ke dil ke tukde ho chale
Dil yeH bada kamzor hai kis kis se boleN

Very Impressive ... ! Parwaaz Ji !

aapne tamaam ghazal me radeef ko bahut khoobsurti se nibhaaya hai ...
very nice creation ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Applause Applause Applause Applause

aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !



Naresh Jee Aadaab O Tasleemaat..!

Naresh Jee Yeh to aapka badaapan hai jo aap humari kalaam par apna waqt dete hai...

Aapke is housla afzai ke tahe dil se mashkoor O mamnoon hai..
Aage bhi apna saath dete rahiye...
khush O aabaad rahiye..
khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile           
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«Reply #18 on: February 05, 2011, 12:46:51 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 25, 2010, 06:21:18 PM
Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O Tasleem.......

YahaaN ka mousam hi itna shayarana hai ke hum shyari doo rahkar bhi
YahaaN aane ke bad kalam chalana sikh gaye.... Usual Smile

Aise hi baithe baithe kuch tanziyaa khayaal zahen meiN ban gaye..
SO aapki nazar kar raheN hai.... Ummid hai aapko pasnd aayeNge... Usual Smile           






Kalyug hi yeH ghor hai kis kis se boleN
Aaj kal ka yeH dour hai kis kis se boleN

Haath uthao unke dar wo de ya na deN
Ummid ki yehi bhor hai kis kis se boleN

Dil ke rishte haiN yeH ehtemad ki dor par
Badi nazuk yeH dor hai kis kis se boleN

Naa karo sitam ke dil ke tukde ho chale
Dil yeH bada kamzor hai kis kis se boleN

Mujhko na dekho youN hairat se aye logoN
Dilbar unka koi aur hai kis kis se boleN
         


BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB JANAB PARWAAZ SB
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«Reply #19 on: March 25, 2011, 09:34:25 AM »
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wah parwazji kamal ka kalaam hai..... bahut khub......

kis kis se bolen.........?

 Applause Applause
khub
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«Reply #20 on: April 06, 2011, 06:43:15 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: April 14, 2011, 02:15:32 AM »
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Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Dili Dad
Bohat Bohat Khoob Parwaaz Ji Applause
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«Reply #22 on: April 19, 2011, 03:54:20 PM »
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«Reply #23 on: April 20, 2011, 08:49:59 AM »
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Bada Pyara Likha Hai Aapney
Makta Khasa Pasand Aaya Humey
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«Reply #24 on: December 13, 2011, 11:57:02 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 25, 2010, 06:21:18 PM
Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O Tasleem.......

YahaaN ka mousam hi itna shayarana hai ke hum shyari doo rahkar bhi
YahaaN aane ke bad kalam chalana sikh gaye.... Usual Smile

Aise hi baithe baithe kuch tanziyaa khayaal zahen meiN ban gaye..
SO aapki nazar kar raheN hai.... Ummid hai aapko pasnd aayeNge... Usual Smile          






Kalyug hi yeH ghor hai kis kis se boleN
Aaj kal ka yeH dour hai kis kis se boleN

Haath uthao unke dar wo de ya na deN
Ummid ki yehi bhor hai kis kis se boleN

Dil ke rishte haiN yeH ehtemad ki dor par
Badi nazuk yeH dor hai kis kis se boleN

Naa karo sitam ke dil ke tukde ho chale
Dil yeH bada kamzor hai kis kis se boleN

Mujhko na dekho youN hairat se aye logoN
Dilbar unka koi aur hai kis kis se boleN
          



                      daulat aawaam ki karein kis ke hawaale ab,
                      haakim hi ab chor hai kis kis se bolein.

                     

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«Reply #25 on: December 13, 2011, 12:00:51 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

bahut bahut Khooooob parwaaz Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan!!!!!

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parwaaz Ji Aapse bhi Huemsha Yehi Shikayat rahegi ke Aap Bahut Kam Likhte Ho..Aapse bhi yehi Guzaarish Hai ke Plz Humein Aapko padhne Ka Aur mauka Dete rahe... icon_flower
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