Aaj Ke Daur Mein Usse Hi Aadmi Ka Naam Do.......

by khwaish on June 14, 2009, 08:52:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 22, 2009, 06:01:38 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah bas iske aage aur kuch kaha nahi jaega....
bahut khub Khwaish ji..ek ek Aashar sachai bayan karte hue hai..
Gud work Khwaish ji..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: June 22, 2009, 06:33:02 AM »
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Mindblowing.. fantastic.. Bahoot hi khoob likha hai. ak ak sher ka jawab nahi.. Its really too Good!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sophi..

It's Always Great To have A Comment By you..Thankyou Sooooo Much!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: June 22, 2009, 08:02:05 AM »
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bahut khoob khwaish ji
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«Reply #18 on: June 22, 2009, 08:12:31 AM »
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Very Very nice yaar...
Specially the 2nd stanza... Applause

Dil jeet liya yaar...
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«Reply #19 on: June 24, 2009, 05:41:15 AM »
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Waah Waah KYa KHoob Kaha Hai, Khwaish Bhai,.

Dusra Ashaar To Dil Ko Bohat Achcha Laga,.

Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..

Aap Ne Iss Kalam Ko Apna Waqt Diya..Teh dil Se Shukriya..
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«Reply #20 on: June 28, 2009, 05:14:45 PM »
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khudgarj he duniya khudgarji k liye kuch to bayaan do,
gum ki kami nahi zindagime, sukun k liye koi to saam do,
gairo k bhid me ho sake to kisi ko apno ka naam do,
ho sake to do pal k liye v gairon k dil ko aaram do,

aap k alfajo me kuch lafz jodne ki ghustakhi maaf ho.
khwaish ji kuch galat likha ho to nadan samhj kar maaf kardena.



Bahut bahut Bahut Khoob Metroji...Aapne Bahut Khoob Likha Aur Guusataki Kis Baat Ki..Balki Main Aapse Request karta hoon ke Aap Aur bhi likhte Rhaiye..Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: June 28, 2009, 05:21:17 PM »
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Gham Mile Hai jitne Bhi  khushi Ka Naam Do,
KyUN  Naa?? Ab Dard Ko Hi Zindagi Ka Naam Do....

Sirf Apne Matlab ke Liye Hi, Khuda Ke Aage Sar Jhukata Hai Woh shaks!!
Matlab-Parasti ko Kabhi Naa Bandagi Ka Naam Do....

Woh Ek Junoon-Tha, Ek Daur Tha,
Jab Insaan Dard Sehkar Bhi Muskurata Tha!!!
Uske Iss Jazbe Ko Naa Yuh Deewangi Ka Naam Do....

Kuch Shaks Aise Bhi Hote Hai,
Jo Mehfil mein Apne Sher Par Wah-Wah To Looth The Hai,
Par Kisi Ke Jazbaaat Ko Samajhte Tak Nahi!!!!!

Shayar To khoob Hai Par Uss Insaan Ka Pata Nahi,
Kabhi Uski Iss Ada ko Naa Insaaniyat Ka Naam Do....

Main Chuup Hoon, kyonki Mujhme Kuch samaj hai!!
Meri Iss Khamoshi ko Naa Kabhi Laaparwahi Ka Naam Do....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai, Auron Ke Gham mein Ro Pade Jiski Aankh!!!
Aaj Ke Daur Mein, Usse Hi Aadmi Ka Naam Do....

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut achhe Khwaish Ji... no words to express ke padhke kaisa laga... but it was fantastic...
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«Reply #22 on: June 28, 2009, 05:21:30 PM »
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"Khwaish" Kehta Hai, Auron Ke Gham mein Ro Pade Jiski Aankh!!!
Aaj Ke Daur Mein, Usse Hi Aadmi Ka Naam Do....

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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bahut sundar panktiyaan....hamesha ki tarah...aapki rachnaaye ek prerna dena waala geet bankar mehkti hai mehfil mein...isi tarah nagme lootate rahe...bahut khoob.
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 06:19:03 AM »
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subhan allah mere bhai kya sher kaha hai ''matlab parasti ko  kabhi na bandagi ka naam do ,,,,wah bhai wah itni masrufiyath ke bajood bhi daad dene se khud ko ruk nahi paya mai allah tumhe khush rskhe

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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Qadeer Bhai..
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