AAJ KI AURAT

by Kagaj_Kamal on May 02, 2009, 06:05:13 AM
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KAISE-KAISE WASTRA PEHAN RAHI DEKHO AAJ KI AURAT|
KAM KAPDE PEHANNE MEIN HI SAMJHE DEKHO APNI SHORAT||
SOCHE NA YE AAR PAAR KI CHOD BAITHI SAB LAAJ SHARAM|
POOJA-PAATH SAB HAI BOOLHI JAANE NA KYA DHARAM-KARAM||
LAGAKE CREAM-POWDER BADAL KE APNI CHAAL|
TAASH KE PATTO MEIN AESI ULJHI KI UDA RAHI APNE PATI KA MAAL||
DISCO JAATI, BEAUTY PARLOUR JAATI, KARTI ULTE-SEEDHE FASHION|
BACHCHO KI KOI CHINTA NA KARTI BIGADE CHAHE UNKI CONDITION||
SUDHAAR LAO APNE TAUR-TAREEKE MEIN AUR KARO KUCH CHANGE KAAM|
TAAKI KAL BACHCHE BHI TUMKO IZZAT DEVE AUR NA PUKARE TUMKO LEKAR TUMARAHA NAAM||

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Achchi Achchi Baate Kar Ari O Hindustan Ki Aurat Mat Bhool Tu Duniyadaari,
Teri Jaisi Hi Thi Wo Lakshmi Bai Jisne Desh Ke Khatir Kha Li Apne Seene Per Dushman Ki Katari.
 
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2009, 07:20:43 AM »
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Bohat khoob K. Kamal...
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2009, 10:53:29 AM »
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Good work KK
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2009, 12:21:57 PM »
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Yun to aapne acchha likha hai Kamal ji par aurton ke liye is tarah ke sabd.... Crying

kuch karte hain kaam..sabhi ho jaate hain badnaam,
Naari jaati tu dhanya hai..jeeti hai seh kar ghor apmaan
Bhala to kabhi kiya nahi in mardon ne kabhi aurat jaat ka
jehan me rakhte hain kare gulaami har aurat AADAMJAAT ka.....
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2009, 12:41:12 PM »
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Nice reply JJ...
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2009, 12:46:47 PM »
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Nice reply JJ...
Thanks Dear SG...
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2009, 01:08:06 PM »
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Bohat sahi Aur Bohat Achche Kaha Kamal Ji,.
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2009, 02:25:44 PM »
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Yun to aapne acchha likha hai Kamal ji par aurton ke liye is tarah ke sabd.... Crying

kuch karte hain kaam..sabhi ho jaate hain badnaam,
Naari jaati tu dhanya hai..jeeti hai seh kar ghor apmaan
Bhala to kabhi kiya nahi in mardon ne kabhi aurat jaat ka
jehan me rakhte hain kare gulaami har aurat AADAMJAAT ka.....

very very good dear kya jawab diya hai maza aagaya
very nice
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2009, 05:21:08 AM »
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very very good dear kya jawab diya hai maza aagaya
very nice
Thanks Dear...Chalo koi to hai jahan me jo hamari feelings ko samajhata hai.....
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2009, 05:03:56 AM »
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KAISE-KAISE WASTRA PEHAN RAHI DEKHO AAJ KI AURAT|
KAM KAPDE PEHANNE MEIN HI SAMJHE DEKHO APNI SHORAT||
SOCHE NA YE AAR PAAR KI CHOD BAITHI SAB LAAJ SHARAM|
POOJA-PAATH SAB HAI BOOLHI JAANE NA KYA DHARAM-KARAM||
LAGAKE CREAM-POWDER BADAL KE APNI CHAAL|
TAASH KE PATTO MEIN AESI ULJHI KI UDA RAHI APNE PATI KA MAAL||
DISCO JAATI, BEAUTY PARLOUR JAATI, KARTI ULTE-SEEDHE FASHION|
BACHCHO KI KOI CHINTA NA KARTI BIGADE CHAHE UNKI CONDITION||
SUDHAAR LAO APNE TAUR-TAREEKE MEIN AUR KARO KUCH CHANGE KAAM|
TAAKI KAL BACHCHE BHI TUMKO IZZAT DEVE AUR NA PUKARE TUMKO LEKAR TUMARAHA NAAM||

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Achchi Achchi Baate Kar Ari O Hindustan Ki Aurat Mat Bhool Tu Duniyadaari,
Teri Jaisi Hi Thi Wo Lakshmi Bai Jisne Desh Ke Khatir Kha Li Apne Seene Per Dushman Ki Katari.
 


mard pahne kam kapre to shaan hai
aourat pahne kam kapre to dunia preshan hai
mardo ki ankho main na dekhein bhookhi najar koi
aourat ke sir per he, her ek ilzaam hai
Cream powder bindi to rahe hamesha he aourt ke ang sung
magar ajj bhare hai beauty saloon mardo se, us per na koi sawal hai
Pooja - path kare ya kare baher jakar kaam
na dekhein koi kitne list main uske kaam hai
mard jaaye disco to yah unche khandaan ki nishani
aourat jaaye disco, to ho gai badnaam hai
sudhar le e samaj apni is dohari najar-e-nigaah ko
kar aourat ka samman, baki baato main na koi jaan hai
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2009, 08:49:58 AM »
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mard pahne kam kapre to shaan hai
aourat pahne kam kapre to dunia preshan hai
mardo ki ankho main na dekhein bhookhi najar koi
aourat ke sir per he, her ek ilzaam hai
Cream powder bindi to rahe hamesha he aourt ke ang sung
magar ajj bhare hai beauty saloon mardo se, us per na koi sawal hai
Pooja - path kare ya kare baher jakar kaam
na dekhein koi kitne list main uske kaam hai
mard jaaye disco to yah unche khandaan ki nishani
aourat jaaye disco, to ho gai badnaam hai
sudhar le e samaj apni is dohari najar-e-nigaah ko
kar aourat ka samman, baki baato main na koi jaan hai
Waah pooja ji Dil khus kar diya aapne Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2009, 09:17:33 AM »
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mard pahne kam kapre to shaan hai
aourat pahne kam kapre to dunia preshan hai
mardo ki ankho main na dekhein bhookhi najar koi
aourat ke sir per he, her ek ilzaam hai
Cream powder bindi to rahe hamesha he aourt ke ang sung
magar ajj bhare hai beauty saloon mardo se, us per na koi sawal hai
Pooja - path kare ya kare baher jakar kaam
na dekhein koi kitne list main uske kaam hai
mard jaaye disco to yah unche khandaan ki nishani
aourat jaaye disco, to ho gai badnaam hai
sudhar le e samaj apni is dohari najar-e-nigaah ko
kar aourat ka samman, baki baato main na koi jaan hai

Bohat Achche Didi, Aur Sachchi kaha Hai, Nice One,.
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2009, 03:05:47 PM »
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Kamal Ji aapne ek pehlu par hi likha ! achcha likha, par adhoora !

Very nice replies Jannat and Pooja Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2009, 03:18:37 PM »
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boht achhe Jannat, Kamal n Pooja g:)
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«Reply #14 on: May 08, 2009, 05:41:58 PM »
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Waah pooja ji Dil khus kar diya aapne Applause Applause

Thanks Jannatjahan!!

Bohat Achche Didi, Aur Sachchi kaha Hai, Nice One,.

Thanks LIL BRO..

Kamal Ji aapne ek pehlu par hi likha ! achcha likha, par adhoora !

Very nice replies Jannat and Pooja Applause Applause Applause

THANKS CELMIRA!!!

boht achhe Jannat, Kamal n Pooja g:)

Thanks Sadia!!!
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