Aaj Ki Duniya,.

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Hai Doston, Kaafi Waqt Ke BaadKuch Apna Likha Yoindia Mein Pesh Karne Ka Iraada Kiya, Jo Ab Ke Mahaul Par Nazar Kar Raha Hoon,.

Umeed Hai Aapko Meri Koshish Pasand Aayegi,.

Ab Kahaan Hai Mohabbat Logon KO, Un Deewaanon Jaisi,.
Wo Daur Majnu, Farhaad, Ranjhon Ka Guzar Gaya,.

Ab Ashiqui Bhi Badalti Hai Mausam Ki Taraah,.
Sab Samajhte Hain, Yahaan Ke Zamaana Sudhar Gaya,.

Sukoon Tha, Doston, Jab JHopdiyon Mein Basera Tha,.
Mehlon Mein Zara Karaar Paane, Na Jaane Kidhar Kidhar Gaya,.

Wo Karta Raha Mujhe Barbaad, Badi Saadgi Ke Saath,.
Main Samajhta Hi Raha, Ke Wo Aabaad Kar Gaya,.

Bachchon Ke Paas Bhi KHilone Hain Hatyaaron Ki Taraah,.
Dekhkar Is Mahaul Ko, Main To Behad Dar Gaya,.

Bhalaai Bankar Reh Gayi, Ek Khissa Puraana "Azeem,.
Jhoot Makkari Hi Dekhta Raha, Main Jidhar Gaya,.

Hain Haath KHoon Se Lat-pat Sab Siyaasat Daaron Ke,.
Wohi Sabse Aage Hain, Jo Kisi Ka Kuch Bigaard Gaya,.

Karke Is Duar Mein Bhalaai Bhi, Main Umr Bhar Sharminda Raha,.
Ek Do Dhoke Dete Hi, Main To Kasam Se Sawar Gaya,.

_-Azeem-_
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2009, 05:54:53 PM »
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Wah...Bahut bahut khuuuuuuub Ajeem ji......har lafj sachai byaan kar rah hai.....har alfaaz sach k dhaage me piroya hai aapne.....bahut khub
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2009, 06:27:53 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on August 27, 2009, 01:23:37 PM
Hai Doston, Kaafi Waqt Ke BaadKuch Apna Likha Yoindia Mein Pesh Karne Ka Iraada Kiya, Jo Ab Ke Mahaul Par Nazar Kar Raha Hoon,.

Umeed Hai Aapko Meri Koshish Pasand Aayegi,.

Ab Kahaan Hai Mohabbat Logon KO, Un Deewaanon Jaisi,.
Wo Daur Majnu, Farhaad, Ranjhon Ka Guzar Gaya,.

Ab Ashiqui Bhi Badalti Hai Mausam Ki Taraah,.
Sab Samajhte Hain, Yahaan Ke Zamaana Sudhar Gaya,.

Sukoon Tha, Doston, Jab JHopdiyon Mein Basera Tha,.
Mehlon Mein Zara Karaar Paane, Na Jaane Kidhar Kidhar Gaya,.

Wo Karta Raha Mujhe Barbaad, Badi Saadgi Ke Saath,.
Main Samajhta Hi Raha, Ke Wo Aabaad Kar Gaya,.

Bachchon Ke Paas Bhi KHilone Hain Hatyaaron Ki Taraah,.
Dekhkar Is Mahaul Ko, Main To Behad Dar Gaya,.

Bhalaai Bankar Reh Gayi, Ek Khissa Puraana "Azeem,.
Jhoot Makkari Hi Dekhta Raha, Main Jidhar Gaya,.

Hain Haath KHoon Se Lat-pat Sab Siyaasat Daaron Ke,.
Wohi Sabse Aage Hain, Jo Kisi Ka Kuch Bigaard Gaya,.

Karke Is Duar Mein Bhalaai Bhi, Main Umr Bhar Sharminda Raha,.
Ek Do Dhoke Dete Hi, Main To Kasam Se Sawar Gaya,.

_-Azeem-_



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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2009, 08:14:47 PM »
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bahut badhiya azeem ji...Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2009, 09:27:07 PM »
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Wah wah Azeem bhai,bahut khoob,really touching and mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2009, 12:35:00 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on August 27, 2009, 05:54:53 PM
Wah...Bahut bahut khuuuuuuub Ajeem ji......har lafj sachai byaan kar rah hai.....har alfaaz sach k dhaage me piroya hai aapne.....bahut khub
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Shukriya Nikhaar Ji, Izzat Bakhshne Ke Liye, Aur Hamaari Koshish Ko Sarhaane Ke Liye,.
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2009, 03:56:15 AM »
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baht badhiya janab_-a-ala
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2009, 01:37:22 PM »
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...bahut hi achha likha hai Azeem bhai...really loved reading it...keep writing...in ghazalo ko/shero ko padhkar bahut kuchh sikhne ko milta hai hame...thanks...
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2009, 04:50:14 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on August 27, 2009, 01:23:37 PM
Hai Doston, Kaafi Waqt Ke BaadKuch Apna Likha Yoindia Mein Pesh Karne Ka Iraada Kiya, Jo Ab Ke Mahaul Par Nazar Kar Raha Hoon,.

Umeed Hai Aapko Meri Koshish Pasand Aayegi,.

Ab Kahaan Hai Mohabbat Logon KO, Un Deewaanon Jaisi,.
Wo Daur Majnu, Farhaad, Ranjhon Ka Guzar Gaya,.

Ab Ashiqui Bhi Badalti Hai Mausam Ki Taraah,.
Sab Samajhte Hain, Yahaan Ke Zamaana Sudhar Gaya,.

Sukoon Tha, Doston, Jab JHopdiyon Mein Basera Tha,.
Mehlon Mein Zara Karaar Paane, Na Jaane Kidhar Kidhar Gaya,.

Wo Karta Raha Mujhe Barbaad, Badi Saadgi Ke Saath,.
Main Samajhta Hi Raha, Ke Wo Aabaad Kar Gaya,.

Bachchon Ke Paas Bhi KHilone Hain Hatyaaron Ki Taraah,.
Dekhkar Is Mahaul Ko, Main To Behad Dar Gaya,.

Bhalaai Bankar Reh Gayi, Ek Khissa Puraana "Azeem,.
Jhoot Makkari Hi Dekhta Raha, Main Jidhar Gaya,.

Hain Haath KHoon Se Lat-pat Sab Siyaasat Daaron Ke,.
Wohi Sabse Aage Hain, Jo Kisi Ka Kuch Bigaard Gaya,.

Karke Is Duar Mein Bhalaai Bhi, Main Umr Bhar Sharminda Raha,.
Ek Do Dhoke Dete Hi, Main To Kasam Se Sawar Gaya,.

_-Azeem-_



bahut Bahut Khoooob Azeem...

Har Ek lafz Behtereen..bahut Ache mere Bhai..

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Iss Baat Ka Mujhe Afsos Hai Ke Itni behtereen Poetry Par Sirf 6 Logon ka Comment Aaya Hai....Plz Iss Baat Par Sab Dhyaan Dijiyega..
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Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on October 06, 2009, 01:37:22 PM
...bahut hi achha likha hai Azeem bhai...really loved reading it...keep writing...in ghazalo ko/shero ko padhkar bahut kuchh sikhne ko milta hai hame...thanks...

Shukriya JHL Bhai,.
KHushi Hui Ke JHamaari Koshish Ko Aapne Saraaha,./
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2009, 08:44:09 AM »
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bahut Bahut Khoooob Azeem...

Har Ek lafz Behtereen..bahut Ache mere Bhai..

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Iss Baat Ka Mujhe Afsos Hai Ke Itni behtereen Poetry Par Sirf 6 Logon ka Comment Aaya Hai....Plz Iss Baat Par Sab Dhyaan Dijiyega..

Shukriya KHwaish Bhai.
Shayad Doston Ki Nazar Nahi Aayi Hogi Ye post Koi Baat Nahi,.

Aa Jaayegi,.

And Thank U,.
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2009, 04:37:33 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 08, 2009, 09:43:07 AM
Arey Wah Re Azeem Ustad Kya Baat Hai
Aajkal To Kamaal Pe Kamaal Kiye Ja Rahe Ho...
Ek Dum Suljhe Hue Shayaron Wala Andaaz Hai Janab.
Good Job....Ab Hum Bhala Iske Aage Kya Likhen

Khush Raho Yaar....

Shukriya Bhai,.
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2009, 04:40:26 PM »
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Wah Azeem brother.. bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #13 on: October 09, 2009, 04:43:07 PM »
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Shukriya Sis,.
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