Aakhri Safar,.

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Is Duniya Se Rishte Naate Tord Kar Chale,.
Apno Ko Begaano Ko, Sab Ko Chord Kar Chale,.

Nehlaa Rahe Hain Sab Milkar Meri Laash Ko,.
Pehnaa Rahe Hain Kafan Sab Meri Laash Ko,.

Ab Kuch Hi Dair Mein Janaaze Pe Daal Denge Mujhe,.
Mere Ghar Waale, Ab Ghar Se Nikaal Denge Mujhe,.

Phir Hoga Safar Mera, Bas Sawaari Badli Hui Hogi,.
Janaaza Wohi Hoga Masjid Ka,Laash Badli Hui Hogi,.

Pardhenge Sab Milkar Namaaz, Mujhe Widaa Karne Ki,.
Rishtedaar Padhenge Fateha Mujhpar,.
Darkhwast Karenge Maulvi Se Mere Liye Duaa Karne Ki,.

Ab Janaaza Uthaaya Jaayega Mera, Udaasi Ka Manzar Hoga..
Khabar Hi Meri Manzi Hogi, Khabar Hi Mera Ghar Hoga..

Phir Daal Denge Kabar Me Mujhe, Aur Mitti Mein Sulaa Denge,.
Aise Honge Chahne Waale Mere, Aakhri Waqt Pe Ye Silaa Denge,.

Sab Rishte Duniya Tak Ke Hi Hain, Koi Saath Nibhaata Nahi,.
Bhool Jaate Hain Kuch Hi Dino Mein, Baad Koi Milne Bhi Aata Nahi..

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2009, 04:11:43 AM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai lil bro..... hamesha khush raho.. kamal ka likha hai... sahi kaha.. bahoot khoob

Jeete je bhooljaati hai dunia, marne per kon yaad kare
matlab ke hai yah sari dunia, be-matlab kaise yaad kare
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2009, 04:17:58 AM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah Subhan Allah Azeem Kya likha hai mere bhai ,Ajj tune is haqeeq shayar ko jhinjood diya ,Maut ka manzar dekha diya tone ajj is bade bhai ko !! Wah wah "Arif Rizwi Sahab bhi Eak baar sunlen ye Ghazal to tujhe Galle se laga lenge ..Ajj Tumne is Bade bhai ka dil jeet liye Azeem "Tumhari is Ghazal ke ye sher to sare riste natoon se parde uthate nazar ata hai azeem !! Ankh me pani la diya tone ajj ..

"Ab khuch hi der me mujhe Janaze pe daaldenge"
"Mere Ghar wale mujhe ghar se Nikal Denge "'

-----------------Azeem Bangalori..............

Allah Tumhe Khush Rakhe Azeem Ajj Dil se Ye duwa nikal ti hai !!

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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2009, 04:29:45 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 24, 2009, 04:27:39 PM
Is Duniya Se Rishte Naate Tord Kar Chale,.
Apno Ko Begaano Ko, Sab Ko Chord Kar Chale,.

Nehlaa Rahe Hain Sab Milkar Meri Laash Ko,.
Pehnaa Rahe Hain Kafan Sab Meri Laash Ko,.

Ab Kuch Hi Dair Mein Janaaze Pe Daal Denge Mujhe,.
Mere Ghar Waale, Ab Ghar Se Nikaal Denge Mujhe,.

Phir Hoga Safar Mera, Bas Sawaari Badli Hui Hogi,.
Janaaza Wohi Hoga Masjid Ka,Laash Badli Hui Hogi,.

Pardhenge Sab Milkar Namaaz, Mujhe Widaa Karne Ki,.
Rishtedaar Padhenge Fateha Mujhpar,.
Darkhwast Karenge Maulvi Se Mere Liye Duaa Karne Ki,.

Ab Janaaza Uthaaya Jaayega Mera, Udaasi Ka Manzar Hoga..
Khabar Hi Meri Manzi Hogi, Khabar Hi Mera Ghar Hoga..

Phir Daal Denge Kabar Me Mujhe, Aur Mitti Mein Sulaa Denge,.
Aise Honge Chahne Waale Mere, Aakhri Waqt Pe Ye Silaa Denge,.

Sab Rishte Duniya Tak Ke Hi Hain, Koi Saath Nibhaata Nahi,.
Bhool Jaate Hain Kuch Hi Dino Mein, Baad Koi Milne Bhi Aata Nahi..

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-


Eak Ashar Tumhari Nazar karta hon Azeem "Tawajo Chahonga"

"YE badshahaun aur tawangaroon ki jhoti shaan hai "
Zara dekh qabarastan ki taraf Azeem sub eak saman hai"

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2009, 04:48:59 AM »
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Wah wah Jaanasheen brother... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Wah wah ji...
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2009, 04:53:40 AM »
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Eak Ashar Tumhari Nazar karta hon Azeem "Tawajo Chahonga"

"YE badshahaun aur tawangaroon ki jhoti shaan hai "
Zara dekh qabarastan ki taraf Azeem sub eak saman hai"

Qadeer Toopchi

 Applause Bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2009, 05:27:10 AM »
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"Sab Rishte Duniya Tak Hi Hai,Koi Saath Nibhata nahi
Bhool Jate hai Kuch hi Dino mein,Bvaad Milne koi aata nahi.."

Wah Wah..Bahut Khoob Azeem Bro..Zindagi Ki Kadwi Haqeeqat se Rubaroo Karwaya Hai Aapne..
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Quote from: Pooja on January 25, 2009, 04:11:43 AM
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai lil bro..... hamesha khush raho.. kamal ka likha hai... sahi kaha.. bahoot khoob

Jeete je bhooljaati hai dunia, marne per kon yaad kare
matlab ke hai yah sari dunia, be-matlab kaise yaad kare

Shukriya Didijaan,.
Aameen,.
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2009, 10:22:49 AM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah Subhan Allah Azeem Kya likha hai mere bhai ,Ajj tune is haqeeq shayar ko jhinjood diya ,Maut ka manzar dekha diya tone ajj is bade bhai ko !! Wah wah "Arif Rizwi Sahab bhi Eak baar sunlen ye Ghazal to tujhe Galle se laga lenge ..Ajj Tumne is Bade bhai ka dil jeet liye Azeem "Tumhari is Ghazal ke ye sher to sare riste natoon se parde uthate nazar ata hai azeem !! Ankh me pani la diya tone ajj ..

"Ab khuch hi der me mujhe Janaze pe daaldenge"
"Mere Ghar wale mujhe ghar se Nikal Denge "'

-----------------Azeem Bangalori..............

Allah Tumhe Khush Rakhe Azeem Ajj Dil se Ye duwa nikal ti hai !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Abdul Qadeer Bhaiya,.
Bas Bhai, Aap Yun Hi Apna Haath Hamare Sar pe Rakhe,.
Shukriya Bhaijaan,.

May Allah Bless You Too,.
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Wah wah Jaanasheen brother... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Wah wah ji...


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"Sab Rishte Duniya Tak Hi Hai,Koi Saath Nibhata nahi
Bhool Jate hai Kuch hi Dino mein,Bvaad Milne koi aata nahi.."

Wah Wah..Bahut Khoob Azeem Bro..Zindagi Ki Kadwi Haqeeqat se Rubaroo Karwaya Hai Aapne..

Shukriya Khwaish Bhaiya,.
Bas Yaar Aap Bhi Kuch Likh Kar Jaate, To Achcha Lagta,.
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 25, 2009, 04:29:45 AM
Eak Ashar Tumhari Nazar karta hon Azeem "Tawajo Chahonga"

"YE badshahaun aur tawangaroon ki jhoti shaan hai "
Zara dekh qabarastan ki taraf Azeem sub eak saman hai"

Qadeer Toopchi

Waah Bhai, Kya Kahoon,.
Maine Pardha Ise, Magar Comments Na De Saka,.

Waise Bohat Achche Hai,.
Bas Main Bhi Yahan Do Lines Share Karna Chahoonga, Jo Mere Nanajaan ke Dost ne Banaai hai,.

Hazaaron Bastiyaan Aakar Bas Gayi Tujhme,.
Phir Bhi Aye, Khamosh-e-Jagaah Teri Viraani Nahi Jaati,.

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«Reply #14 on: January 27, 2009, 04:09:43 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Azeem,

Sorry Par sach kahoo isse padkar dil me dard bahut hua,

Shayad tumne jo likha wo shabd Waheed bhai ke dil
nikle honge aakhri waqt pe...

Khuda unhe jannat me ghar de...

Shally.
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