aasteen..........(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on June 18, 2011, 05:37:21 AM
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                  puchaa dost ne mujh se yeh ghabraa kar,
                  
                  aasteen kahaan hai kameez ki tere ,o! daanishwar..!

                  kahaa main ne bhi dhire se ye muskura kar..,

                  zaroorat kyaa hai aasteen ke abb tunn per.....,

                    rakh liya hai sabhi 'SAANP' ko  maine...,

                   apne ghar ke andar !! apne ghar ke andar!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2011, 04:08:59 PM »
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khamosh_aawaaz ji,

Nice thoughts..
Keep on writing..

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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2011, 08:06:18 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 18, 2011, 04:08:59 PM

khamosh_aawaaz ji,

Nice thoughts..
Keep on writing..

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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2011, 10:53:31 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 18, 2011, 05:37:21 AM

                  puchaa dost ne mujh se yeh ghabraa kar,
                 
                  aasteen kahaan hai kameez ki tere ,o! daanishwar..!

                  kahaa main ne bhi dhire se ye muskura kar..,

                  zaroorat kyaa hai aasteen ke abb tunn per.....,

                    rakh liya hai sabhi 'SAANP' ko  maine...,

                   apne ghar ke andar !! apne ghar ke andar!!!




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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2011, 11:09:25 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 18, 2011, 05:37:21 AM

                  puchaa dost ne mujh se yeh ghabraa kar,
                 
                  aasteen kahaan hai kameez ki tere ,o! daanishwar..!

                  kahaa main ne bhi dhire se ye muskura kar..,

                  zaroorat kyaa hai aasteen ke abb tunn per.....,

                    rakh liya hai sabhi 'SAANP' ko  maine...,

                   apne ghar ke andar !! apne ghar ke andar!!!



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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2011, 09:42:56 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 21, 2011, 10:53:31 AM


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THANX
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Quote from: qalb on July 13, 2011, 11:09:25 AM

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Quote from: Rajah rohan on August 24, 2011, 08:50:05 AM
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