Ab Sochte Kya Ho,.

by Jaanasheen on April 16, 2010, 07:51:45 PM
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As Salaam Walaikum,.

Bohat Dino Baad Tanz Pe Likh Raha Hoon, Umeed Hai Aapko Pasand Aaye,.
Bas Duaa Ki Darkhwast Karoonga,.


Milaake Haath, Ab Sochte Kya Ho,.
Is Kadar Hume Tum Dekhte Kya Ho,.

Humne Mitaa Di Hain Ranjeeshein Saari,.
Tum Bhi Ab Dil Mein, Kuch Rakhte Kya Ho,.

Labon Ki Hasi, Dil Ka Haal Rab Hi Jaane,.
Hume Kya Malum,.
Hamare Baare Mein Tum Samajhte Kya Ho,.

Ye Aadat Apni, Ke Har Ranj Bhool Jaate Hain,.
Tum Hume Is Kadar Parakhte Kya Ho,.

Kisko Mili Hayaat, Sab KO Jaana Hai "Azeem,.
Duniya Kiski Hui, Ise Tum Samait-te Kya Ho,.

-Azeem-

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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2010, 08:28:22 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai apne Azeem ji...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2010, 09:18:53 PM »
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Wah wah Azeem bhai.bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.great work.keep it up.excellent.meri dua aapke saath hai.be blessed. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause :hatsoff:hve faith in God.
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2010, 01:10:25 AM »
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Good creation but not a tanz. Thanx.
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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2010, 09:05:23 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem Bhai !!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2010, 09:29:09 AM »
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Walaikum As Salaam ,.
Chote Bhai Jaan

Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2010, 07:19:19 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause                                                                                                                    walakum salam  mera bhai , bohut khub...
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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2010, 12:23:24 PM »
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Walaikum As Salaam Azeem Mere Bhai.
Aur Kya Kahun..Bahut Hi Achcha Likha Hai Mere Bhai
Yun Hi Apni Kalam Chalate Raho.
Aur Mehfil Ki Raunaq Afzaai Karte Raho...

ALLAH Pak Aapko Har Ranj o Gham Se Mahfuz Rakhe Aameen


Khush Raho...


~Shihab~


Shukriya Mere Bhai,.
Hausla Afzaai Ka,.

Rab Khair Kare,.

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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2010, 05:21:30 PM »
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Walekum Assalaam Azeem Bhai, bahot hi khoobsurat creation hai aapki. Hazaron daad quobool farmayen.
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2010, 03:11:50 PM »
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Masha-Allah

Bahot ahchcha lihkka hai aapne. very beautifully phrased "ji"


~SA (Anjaan Dharkan)
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2010, 06:16:00 AM »
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Bhut hi khoob Azeem waah..........


aslam
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2010, 06:39:40 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeembhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2010, 01:58:38 AM »
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Bahut Khoab... Janab Janasheen...
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