Adhure kadam

by Tosha on June 30, 2006, 12:17:23 PM
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Ek baar kadam uthaya hai
adhura wapas nahi le sakte aab

kabhi ek khuwab sajaya tha
usse mita nahi sakte aab


adhuti hai ... i'll come back to complete it!
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2006, 02:11:06 PM »
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Nice start Tosha...complete it soon !!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2006, 12:17:05 AM »
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pyarikudi1983
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2006, 01:57:37 PM »
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Very Nice!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2006, 04:49:34 PM »
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Wah ji Wah AnuTosha tu theek toh hai na aaj kal...harr Jagah Tosha Chayie hai.....Superb
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2006, 09:37:24 PM »
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yeh me fine ... thanx any ways .. per lagta hai aab fine nahi hun Winking


Thanx pankhudi
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vikas2210
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2006, 09:59:34 AM »
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a nice one Tosha.

How are you?

anything new to share?

haina?Huh??
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2006, 10:50:20 AM »
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wah !!! kya baat hai Tosha dear...chhaa gaye aap badal ban ke..... :D

yahan raho ya wahana raho ek baat yaad rakhna
jindagi ke rango mein bas hamko yaad rakhana

har khawab jo tumne saajaye hain woh pure honge
bas is tarah apni umeed ka daaman tum thaame rakhana
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Anushka
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2006, 08:37:15 AM »
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Wahbahut khub Tosha and Ranjan januu lovely indeed
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Shikha12
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2006, 12:13:14 PM »
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VERY NICE TOSHA....[/b]
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Tosha
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2006, 06:06:45 PM »
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Vikas , Ranju ji, Anu, Sikkha ... Thanx a lot :D
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2006, 09:39:00 PM »
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moti tu itna accha kaise likh leten hai ,ujhe jalan hone lagi hai..........
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Tosha
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2006, 12:06:24 PM »
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sine main bulandiya, aakhon mian hai khuwab
nikal pade hain bin raha ke samunder main aab
jis ore le jaye hawayen usse ore bahete jaana hai
jis zamee(n) pe tham jaye rahe usse manzil banana hai
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Tosha
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2006, 06:26:08 AM »
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Quote from: "ranjana"
wah !!! kya baat hai Tosha dear...chhaa gaye aap badal ban ke..... :D

yahan raho ya wahana raho ek baat yaad rakhna
jindagi ke rango mein bas hamko yaad rakhana

har khawab jo tumne saajaye hain woh pure honge
bas is tarah apni umeed ka daaman tum thaame rakhana


Duae doston ke jo saath hogi
har mushkil pal main aasan hogi
duniya aab kadmo ke lang pe hai
is duniya main hamari koi pahechan hogi

nikal chale hai umeed ka dia jalaye
kabhi to shital shaam hogi
jee rahe hai zakhmo pe marham lagaye
manzil ek din hamari bhi gulam hogi
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2006, 10:46:47 AM »
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Good ones Tosha !!
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