Ajj Ki Dunia Main -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: February 07, 2009, 07:12:07 AM »

Thanks Nehak ji


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k.shael

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #16 on: February 07, 2009, 07:13:58 AM »

Bahut Khoob didi,

Aapki iss peshkash me hilaa ke rakh diya dil ko,

Bahut bhadiyaa aur umda likha hai,

Keep it up...

Shally


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #17 on: February 07, 2009, 07:16:02 AM »

Thanks Shally!


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #18 on: February 08, 2009, 06:27:00 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 01:11:53 AM

Chehra ho sheetal sa, man main Agan rakhta ho
Nayan ho pyar se bharpoor, nigah main Manjil rakhta ho

Baitha ho sabse piche chahe, sir per Kafan rakhta ho
Chal main na ho chahe shokhi, kadamo main Tufaan rakhta ho

Dil main raj, karmo main janoon, aisa Porush rakhta ho
Ek hath main Kangan-Bindia, doosre main Shamshan rakhta ho

Her roop main, her morr per, insaan ka jo maan rakhta ho
Jhuk jaaye jis ke samne sir, Ajj Ki Dunia Main koi to yah Samman rakhta ho!!

Pooja ji, bahut gehri baat keh rahey ho
aap. Dil koh bahut hi choo gayi aaap ki
yeh poem.

Jasbir Singh


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #19 on: February 08, 2009, 06:52:23 PM »

bahoot bahoot shukaria Jas ji, acha laga jaan kar ki apne is kavita ki gahraai ko samjha...


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #20 on: February 08, 2009, 06:59:21 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 08, 2009, 06:52:23 PM

bahoot bahoot shukaria Jas ji, acha laga jaan kar ki apne is kavita ki gahraai ko samjha...

welcome pooja ji par aap ney sach meh bahut hi gehri baat kahi hai ...

Her roop main, her morr per, insaan ka jo maan rakhta ho
Jhuk jaaye jis ke samne sir, Ajj Ki Dunia Main koi to yah Samman rakhta ho!!

yeh lines bahut dil koh chooo gayi

jasbir singh


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Affy

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #21 on: February 10, 2009, 07:39:45 AM »

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
pooja
how r u ?
u hav Good Collections yaar


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abdulqadeer

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #22 on: February 10, 2009, 08:44:19 AM »

Bahoth qoob pooja bahen aur bahoth Umda aur asardar hai apki ye kalpana !! wonderful work sister !!


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salma786

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #23 on: February 10, 2009, 09:56:19 AM »

Bahoot hi achi soch hai apki pooja!


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #24 on: February 11, 2009, 09:35:15 AM »

wonder creation pooja ji


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salil2002

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #25 on: February 11, 2009, 10:53:38 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 01:11:53 AM

Baitha ho sabse piche chahe, sir per Kafan rakhta ho
Chal main na ho chahe shokhi, kadamo main Tufaan rakhta ho

wonderful didi
i like these two lines a lot..............


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Talat

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #26 on: February 11, 2009, 12:27:02 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 01:11:53 AM

Bohot Khoob Pooja


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #27 on: February 12, 2009, 05:04:09 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 08, 2009, 06:59:21 PM

Shukaria Jas ji.. yah do line baki lines ka saar hai... likhne ke baad mujhe bhi mehsoos hua ki yah lines achi likhi gai... Shukaria samjhne ka aor saraahne ka...


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #28 on: February 12, 2009, 05:04:44 PM »

Quote from: Affy on February 10, 2009, 07:39:45 AM

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
pooja
how r u ?
u hav Good Collections yaar

Shukaria Affy ji, Apka Yoindia main sawagat hai!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #29 on: February 12, 2009, 05:07:54 PM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 10, 2009, 08:44:19 AM

Bahoth qoob pooja bahen aur bahoth Umda aur asardar hai apki ye kalpana !! wonderful work sister !!

SAHI KAHA QADEER BHAI JI... Kalpna hai... dil se nikali hui kalpna... yah sab ban.na mushkil nahi hai.. bas nek iraadein chahiye!!


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