Ajj Ki Dunia Main -Panna 3:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Pooja

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«Reply #30 on: February 12, 2009, 05:08:44 PM »

Quote from: salma786 on February 10, 2009, 09:56:19 AM

Bahoot hi achi soch hai apki pooja!

Thanks Salma!!

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on February 11, 2009, 09:35:15 AM

wonder creation pooja ji

Thanks Bhawna!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #31 on: February 12, 2009, 05:11:39 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on February 11, 2009, 10:53:38 AM

Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 01:11:53 AM

Baitha ho sabse piche chahe, sir per Kafan rakhta ho
Chal main na ho chahe shokhi, kadamo main Tufaan rakhta ho

wonderful didi
i like these two lines a lot..............

Mujhe bahoot acha lagta hai, jab koi meri likhi kavita ko parr kar, yah batata hai ki use kon si lines behad pasand aai... Thanks Salil bro...


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #32 on: February 12, 2009, 05:13:01 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 11, 2009, 12:27:02 PM

Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 01:11:53 AM

Chehra ho sheetal sa, man main Agan rakhta ho
Nayan ho pyar se bharpoor, nigah main Manjil rakhta ho

Baitha ho sabse piche chahe, sir per Kafan rakhta ho
Chal main na ho chahe shokhi, kadamo main Tufaan rakhta ho

Dil main raj, karmo main janoon, aisa Porush rakhta ho
Ek hath main Kangan-Bindia, doosre main Shamshan rakhta ho

Her roop main, her morr per, insaan ka jo maan rakhta ho
Jhuk jaaye jis ke samne sir, Ajj Ki Dunia Main koi to yah Samman rakhta ho!!

Bohot Khoob Pooja

Thanks Celmira!!


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #33 on: February 13, 2009, 07:29:37 PM »

AAJ KI DUNIYA MEH HUM JI TOH RAHEY HAI
HAR LAMHA GUM SEY DIL KOH SI RAHEY HAI
KISI ANJAAN TASVIR KOH DIL MEH BASAYE BAITHEY HAI
EK BEWAFA SEY WAFA KI UMEED KAR RAHEY HAI

JASBIR SINGH


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #34 on: February 13, 2009, 07:34:26 PM »

nice lines Jas ji


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #35 on: February 13, 2009, 07:36:42 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 13, 2009, 07:34:26 PM

nice lines Jas ji

THANKS JI

JASBIR SINGH


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #36 on: February 13, 2009, 08:36:04 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 13, 2009, 07:29:37 PM

AAJ KI DUNIYA MEH HUM JI TOH RAHEY HAI
HAR LAMHA GUM SEY DIL KOH SI RAHEY HAI
KISI ANJAAN TASVIR KOH DIL MEH BASAYE BAITHEY HAI
EK BEWAFA SEY WAFA KI UMEED KAR RAHEY HAI

JASBIR SINGH

Yeh duniya hi aisi hai

Nice one Jasbir Ji


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chitralsony

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #37 on: February 14, 2009, 07:29:05 PM »

nice feelings


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #38 on: February 15, 2009, 11:44:30 AM »

pooja ji...bahut sundar rachna.aachi lay ke saath,acche shabdon ke meljol ek behtareen peshkash bun gayi aapki. aapne dil se likhi hai yeh kavita, aapko is rachna pur meri bhee badhai!!

( yeh jo aapki khoj hai is kavita mein-itni saari qualities....ek hi shaks mein dhoond rahi aap?.....jo bhee aisa vyakti hoga...itna perfect...usey imperferction ka anand kaise haasil hoga!!)


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honeyrose

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #39 on: February 16, 2009, 09:04:50 AM »

Bohat khoob Pooja...


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harishsharmapilot

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #40 on: February 16, 2009, 03:35:12 PM »

"Aaj Ki Dunia Mai Bhi, Maan Ko Samman Milta Hai
Sochoo Chahey Kuch Bhi, Per Acchey Issano ko
Hamesa Hi Samman Milta hai, Aaj Ki Dunia main bhi.."


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rani mahrani

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #41 on: February 18, 2009, 12:36:38 AM »

wowwww....i have nth to sayy
i am in love with your poem...
girl you have talent..
you will go farr in live,,
your poem had really inspired me..
keep on writting like that..


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pandit

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #42 on: February 18, 2009, 12:41:36 AM »

nice lines jassi....


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pandit

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #43 on: February 18, 2009, 12:47:19 AM »

Aaj ki duniya ki tasweer dihkaaun tumhe,
Hakikat k jaha se ru-b-ru karaun tumhe,
Mili hai thokaron se bhari har raah,
Kis-kis musafir ki baat bataun tumhe..


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #44 on: February 23, 2009, 05:06:08 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 13, 2009, 07:29:37 PM

AAJ KI DUNIYA MEH HUM JI TOH RAHEY HAI
HAR LAMHA GUM SEY DIL KOH SI RAHEY HAI
KISI ANJAAN TASVIR KOH DIL MEH BASAYE BAITHEY HAI
EK BEWAFA SEY WAFA KI UMEED KAR RAHEY HAI

JASBIR SINGH

Nice lines Jas ji!!


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