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Prateek Mardia

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«Reply #60 on: March 03, 2009, 02:43:55 AM »

Quote from: pandit on March 02, 2009, 10:02:46 PM

Agai, bahut he accha likha hai aapne..

prashansa ke liye dhanyawaad,pandit ji.


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salma786

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #61 on: March 03, 2009, 03:46:47 AM »

Bahot khoob Prateek ji Applause


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #62 on: March 03, 2009, 05:26:32 PM »

Quote from: salma786 on March 03, 2009, 03:46:47 AM

Bahot khoob Prateek ji Applause

shukriya salma ji,aapne pasand kiya.


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #63 on: March 03, 2009, 05:29:50 PM »

Quote from: smardia on February 23, 2009, 06:25:35 PM

Ek shandaar rachna....PAURUSH KO chamkane wali sabhi qualities ka jikra kar diya hai aapne..... Applause

Is yug k purush se kuchh jayada he apeksha kar li hai aapna....
Etihaas mai ek chehra nazar aata hai..."PRITHVIRAJ CHAUHAAN"
Jis mai ye sab gun thye...
Ab wo nasal kahan....wo DNA BACHA HE NAHI lagta hai...

DNA bhi hai aor Insaan bhi... magar Kismat bhi chaiye unhe paane ke liye... bas yahi per akar baat thehar jaati hai !!!

bahoot bahoot Shukaria smardia ji apko meri kavita pasand aai!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #64 on: March 03, 2009, 07:00:14 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on February 28, 2009, 02:56:08 PM

Likhe aksharon ko mita dene se haal-e-dil kabhi badalta nahi
Kuch sehma sehma hoga zaroor, pur aisa nahi ki machalta nahi.

Dimaagi fitraton ko chhodd kabhi dil ki tarango se kaam le dekho
Dekhe kaun woh shaksh hoga fir,paav jiska fisalta nahi.

Fir kabhi ki ummed se e dost aaj ki haqeeqatein behtar
Raaz jo gehra hota hai, aksar pehlu mein sambhalta nahi

Sawaalon ke jawaabon ki yahan hai khwaishein kisko
Baatein uthata hu mehaz parakhne ko,yaar woh kaun sa hoga jo pighalta nahi

Samundar ke ishaaron ko maajhee ne khoob hai jaana
Chaar toofaan kya dekhe, lehron ki hulchalon se dil ub behalta nahi

Prateek ji, bahoot he khoob likha hai apne... apki kavita ki ek ek line laker kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai... apke jawab ka intzaar rahega,. Khumar-e-Ishaq ki tarah attka na dijiyega.. waha ajj bhi apke jawab ka intzaar ho raha hai...

Machlte hai bahoot shabd, magar lubo per simat jaate hai
Milati nahi hai wo Nigah, khud he khud main seham jaate hai

Deeamgi fidrat se nikal kar, dil talak chale ate hai
Kare kaise bayan, jab kisi ko iske layak nahi paate hai

Fislate hai khud he khud ke armmano main
Aor samjha khud ko, khud he sambhal jaate hai

Na jaane kitne raj bane khud he khud main
Aor armaan, ansuo main chalak jaate hai

Sawalo ke jawab dhunda kare kab tak koi dunia main
Jab pahle sawal main hum khud bhatak jaate hai

Pighalne ko to pathar bhi pidhal jaate the dunia main
Per wo madhur sangeet, kaha ab is dunia main hum paate hai

Samunder ke isharo ko khoob samjh kar manjhi chalta hai
Samunder phir bhi dekhon ushe duboye jaate hai

Machlte hai bahoot shabd, magar lubo per simat jaate hai
Milati nahi hai wo Nigah, khud he khud main seham jaate hai…


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #65 on: March 03, 2009, 07:05:35 PM »

Quote from: Roja on February 28, 2009, 03:01:46 PM

Wah wah kya baat hai. Bahut acche

Thanks Roja!!

Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 28, 2009, 03:24:55 PM

Bohat Achche Prateek Mardia Ji,.

Thanks Li bro


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #66 on: March 03, 2009, 07:20:35 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on March 03, 2009, 07:00:14 PM

wah wah, kya baat hai JI, wah

jasbir singh


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Pooja

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Re: Ajj Ki Dunia Main

«Reply #67 on: March 04, 2009, 05:42:17 AM »

Shukaria Jasbir ji


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