"amal karo" -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

ParwaaZ

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«Reply #15 on: August 08, 2011, 09:52:50 PM »

Aslam Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab taweel arse bad aapki kisi kalaam par nazar padi
to khud ko iski tareef karne se nahi rok paaye..

Behad pur asar khayaalaat aur umdaa ashaar kahe hai
janab... Sabhi ashaaroN meiN Masha Allah gazab ka yakeen
bharaa hai...

Is umdaa taqleeq par dil ki gehraai se hazaaroN daad
kabul farmaiye janab

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez

Quote from: aaina on July 02, 2009, 05:25:13 AM

Amal karo alambardaari nahi
Abhi bisaat choti hai abhi se fojdari nahi

Kia kahne janab behad pukhta baat kahi hai..
badi gehri geraaH lagaayi hai janab daad

Is duniya ko badal doge theek hai mana
Ye akele tumhari to zimmedari nahi

Waah janab Bahut khoob bahut umdaa

Jo kaho usi ko dil mai rakho
Chehra padlia jata hai karo adakari nahi

Kia kahne Aslam Sahaab bahut umdaa

Khoobsurat hai zara nazr utha kar daikho
Ye dunaiya uski hai hamari tumhari nahi

Subhan Allah is sher ke kia kahne..
HazaaroN daad bhi kam hai is umdaa sher par

Bura kehne se behtar hai meetha bol kar daikho
Ada karni koi tumhay uski udari nahi

Oye hoye kia kaheN janab aapke husn e andaaz ko
bahut umdaa janab behad aalaa kaha hai daad

Gazab ki Gazal par hazaaroN daad hazir hai
janab...

Phir se kaheNge ke likhte rahiye.. Aur is bazm ko bhi apna
thoda sa kimti waqt dekar .. Hum jaise adna kadardaano par
meharbaani kijiye..

Allah kare zor e kalam aur zyaada
Khuda Hafez


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sbechain

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Re: "amal karo"

«Reply #16 on: August 08, 2011, 09:56:55 PM »

Quote from: aaina on July 02, 2009, 05:25:13 AM

Amal karo alambardaari nahi
Abhi bisaat choti hai abhi se fojdari nahi

Is duniya ko badal doge theek hai mana
Ye akele tumhari to zimmedari nahi

Jo kaho usi ko dil mai rakho
Chehra padlia jata hai karo adakari nahi

Khoobsurat hai zara nazr utha kar daikho
Ye dunaiya uski hai hamari tumhari nahi

Bura kehne se behtar hai meetha bol kar daikho
Ada karni koi tumhay uski udari nahi

ek khoobsurat ghazal se bazm ko nawaza hai aaina ji

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