**Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

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Pata nahin kya likhna chah raha tha aur likh gaya Rahim..Hmm mere dil main iss duniya ke prati bahaut shikayatein hai...Aj kal yeh duniya main jo hota hai, sahi nahin hota...Corruption se leke bewaffai tak, chori se leke balatkar tak aur loot mar se leke atangwad tak...Bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe...Khair, dil jo kehta gaya, main likta gaya..Umeed hai pasand ayegi...

This is my third poem in the series of 'Bahaut hai..'...

Khushion ki kami hai mager sitam bahaut hai,
Sachi mohobat ki kami hai mager jism bahaut hai…

Gharibon ki ehmiat iss duniya main ret ke barabar hai,
Insaniyat ki kami hai mager paisa bahaut hai…

“I love you” kehdete hai woh jab unhe zarurat hoti hai humari,
Dil main basane walon ki kami hai mager haath thamne wale bahaut hai…

Itni tanhai pheli hai yahan ke jeeya nahin jata ‘Khamosh’,
Pyaar ke suraj ki kami hai mager ghum ka andhera bahaut hai…

Ab kya bataye ‘Khamosh’ ke kya likhna chahta tha aur kya likh baitha hai,
Bas itna kehna chahta hai sabse doston,
Paa sake aisi manzilon ki kami hai mager raastein bahaut hai,
Apnon ke liye mohobat ki kami hai mager ghairon ke liye bahaut hai,
Khushion ki kami hai mager sitam bahaut hai,
Sachi mohobat ki kami hai mager jism bahaut hai…

~Rahim~


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2010, 04:32:15 AM »

aankhon me hain anshu bhare huye
par hontho pare hanshi bahoot hai,

har koi chupta hai asliyat apni
or kahte h ki aankhon me sachchayi bahoot hai,

har koi pahle number par aana chahta hai
par aankhe kholo to zindgi ki dhoud me bheed bahoot hai,

in aanshuon ko pochne ke liye koi hath to badaye
aankhon me pani dene wale to bahoot hai,

dil me khooshiyon ke liye jagah hi nhi hai
kyonki dil me gum ke badal bahut hai,

sochta hun ki kabhi koi aayega hamara bankar
par kya kren is duniya me dhokhebaj bhi bahoot hai !!!

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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2010, 06:34:22 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on May 16, 2010, 08:37:52 PM

~Rahim~

Bahut Khoob Rahim Ji


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2010, 06:35:08 AM »

Quote from: likemaddy on May 17, 2010, 04:32:15 AM

Nice response Maddy Ji


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2010, 06:41:55 AM »

shukriya shukriya shukriya shukriya shukriya

hello


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2010, 07:52:00 AM »

Wah wah Rahim bhai,too good,heart touching and excellent creation.great lines by L.Maddy ji. icon_salut


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2010, 09:00:33 AM »

shukriya madhuwesh jee


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2010, 09:27:12 AM »

GUM KE SAMUNDER ME KHUSHIYA NAZER NAHI AATI
JISE CHAHATA HAI DIL,WOHAME SAMJH NAHI PAATI


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2010, 09:31:41 AM »

JIS DIL NE CHAHA TU KHUS RAHE HER GUM CHOD KAR
TUNE KHUSI BHI MANAI MANOJ TO USI DIL KO TOD KAR


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2010, 09:50:28 AM »

Bahut khoob Manoj ji very touching lines. icon_thumleft


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2010, 12:57:10 PM »

Shukriya Madhu di aur Rajesh jee..


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2010, 01:23:38 PM »

Manoj jee aur Maddy jee...Very nice lines... Applause


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2010, 05:15:35 PM »

afsos nahi mere sher ko unhone galib ka kah diya
ye to shukar hai unhone accha hai to kah diya


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2010, 05:24:25 PM »

for rahim,madhu,maddy

kabhi dard ko hum sahte hai
kabhi dard ko hum kahte hai
shayer jitne bhi hai yaha manoj
dard de duniya mei sab rahte hai


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Re: **Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2010, 05:28:00 PM »

for rahim
gum se apne dost tum bahut larte ho
shayeri rahim tum bakhub karte ho


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