Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on January 23, 2009, 04:30:42 PM
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Aaj Se Do Din Pehle,Mere Ek Bahut Kareebi Dost Se,
 Phone Par Meri Baat Ho Rahi Thi,Uss Baatcheet Ke Dauraan,
unhone apni Zindagi ke Kuch Mushkile,Pareshaaniyaon Ke Baare Mein Mujhe Bataya..Jis Daur se Woh Guzre hai,Jo Imtehaan Unhone Zindagi Mein diye hai,
yeh Kehte-Kehte,Phone Rakhte Waqt,
Uss Dost Ne Aakhir Mein Yeh Baat Kahin Kahi Thi Ke,
"Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai.."

Yeh Line mere Dil Mein Reh Gayi,Yeh Line Bahut Inspire Karti Hai, ke Insaan Chahe Kitna Bhi Pareshaan Kyon Naa Ho,Usse Waqt Ke Mutaabik,Zindagi Mein Chalte Rehne Ke Liye,Yeh Baat Kehni Hi Padhti Hai Ke Haan, Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

Issi Soch Par,Kuch Likh Raha Hoon..

Neend Ka Kuch Pata Nahi Inn Aankhon Ko,
Neend Se Pehle Inn Aankhon Mein Aansu Aa Jaate Hai,
Waqt-Bewaqt Yeh Palkon Ko Bhiga Jaate Hai,
Sochta Hoon, Kyon Nahi Pahunchti Khuda Tak Yeh Meri Cheek Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Main Jab Hasta Hoon To Duniya Saath-Saath Hasti Hai,
Main Jab Rota Hoon To Koi Parchai Aas-Paas Bhi Nahi Dikhti Hai,
Khushiyon Mein Har Koi Mere Saath Hai,
Gham Mein Sirf Main Aur Mere Jazbaat Hai,
Duniya Ki Yeh Ajeeb Se Reet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Zimmedariyon Ka Bhoj Mujhe Ab Uthaana Hai,
Chal Raha Hoon, Chalna Hai, Aur Chalte Hi jaana Hai,
Teri Hi Kuch Nishaniyaan Ab Mere Meet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai...

Kaanton Ki Parwaah Karta Raha,
Khabar Na Thi Ke Phool Bhi Chot De Jaate Hai,
Par Kisi Ne Sach Hi Kahan Tha Ke,
Kehne walo Ka Kuch nahi Jaata,
Dard Sehne wale Hi Kamaal Kar Jaate Hai,
Tujhe Khokar Main Sab Kuch Haar Gaya Hoon,
Par Ab Mehsoos Hota Hai,
Uss Haar Mein Bhi Shayad  Meri Jeet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2009, 04:32:57 PM »
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KHWAISH JI...Kaya likhu apki is kavita ko parr kar.... kai baar parri.. ek ek line zindagi ki kadvi suchai bayan kar rahi hai.... Ajj abhi bahoot busy hu.. magar jaise he waqat mila main yaha jaroor kuch likhugi...

bahoot ache se aapne apne dost ki bhawnao ko gahrai tak samjhte hue, yah sab likha hai.... Good work, Good creation...
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2009, 04:54:22 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya KHoob Likha Hai Mere Bhai,.
Bohat Hi Badhiya Nice One,.
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2009, 05:17:35 PM »
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KHWAISH, BAHUT HI BADIYA BAAT AAP NEY KAHI HAI AUR BAHUT HI PYARE ANDAAZ MEH KAHI HAI .... WAH WAH WAH ... VERY VERY NICE


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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2009, 05:28:53 PM »
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Baaki sub theek hai!! kitna sadhaaran sa vakya,roz prayog mein aata hai...us vaakya pur aapka prayog!!...waah,laazawab.
kuch panktiyaan to itni saral hote huey bhee itni khoobsurti se laybadh hai yaahan....maano jata rahe ho...ki sarlta se bhee kitni gambhir aur arthpoorn baatein kari ja sakti hai.
baaki sub to theek hai...pur yeh rachna theek nahi...shreshth hai, aur vaakai padhne yogya.itni suruchipoorn rachna ke liye,aapko haardik shubhkaamnaaye.
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2009, 05:47:36 PM »
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Bahut Khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2009, 07:02:01 PM »
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KHWAISH JI...Kaya likhu apki is kavita ko parr kar.... kai baar parri.. ek ek line zindagi ki kadvi suchai bayan kar rahi hai.... Ajj abhi bahoot busy hu.. magar jaise he waqat mila main yaha jaroor kuch likhugi...

bahoot ache se aapne apne dost ki bhawnao ko gahrai tak samjhte hue, yah sab likha hai.... Good work, Good creation...


Teh Dil Se Shukriya pooja Aapka..Aapne isse Baarikhi se Padha Samjha Aur Phir Saraha,Yeh Jaankar mujhe Behad Khushi Hui..Pata Nahi Kyon yeh Ek Line,Mujhe Bahut Chu Gayi aur main likhta chala gaya..
Aapke Likhi Hui Kavita Ka Intezaar Rahega..
Bahut Bahut Shukriya aapke Hausle-afsaai Ka..
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2009, 07:05:29 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya KHoob Likha Hai Mere Bhai,.
Bohat Hi Badhiya Nice One,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem Bro..Issi Soch Par Aap Bhi Kuch Likhte To Chaar Chand Lag Jaate Bro..
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2009, 07:44:51 PM »
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KHWAISH, BAHUT HI BADIYA BAAT AAP NEY KAHI HAI AUR BAHUT HI PYARE ANDAAZ MEH KAHI HAI .... WAH WAH WAH ... VERY VERY NICE


JASBIR SINGH

Thanks A Lot Jasbir Paaji..
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2009, 07:55:01 PM »
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Khwaish bro,

Kya feelings hain ! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause

Behtareen ! Excellent ! Superb ! Wah ! Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP

Aur baaki Sab Theek Hai....
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2009, 03:25:03 AM »
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kya baat hai ,,,khawish ji.....

kab tak hota hai, kuj bhi kiska,
jo paaya tha,wo hi toh khoya hai,
choti si toh baat hai,khoya aaj apna man ka meet hai.
......baaki sab theek hai......

yu toh kabhi nahin,haarta hun mein,
aaj mera beta,mujhko chod gaya hai,
aaj bete ke aage, haar gaya hun mein,
choti si toh baat hai,yeh duniya ki reet hai.
.......baaki sab theek hai........
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2009, 04:22:59 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 23, 2009, 05:28:53 PM
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Baaki sub theek hai!! kitna sadhaaran sa vakya,roz prayog mein aata hai...us vaakya pur aapka prayog!!...waah,laazawab.
kuch panktiyaan to itni saral hote huey bhee itni khoobsurti se laybadh hai yaahan....maano jata rahe ho...ki sarlta se bhee kitni gambhir aur arthpoorn baatein kari ja sakti hai.
baaki sub to theek hai...pur yeh rachna theek nahi...shreshth hai, aur vaakai padhne yogya.itni suruchipoorn rachna ke liye,aapko haardik shubhkaamnaaye.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Prateekji...Aapne Iss Kavita ke liye itna kuch keh diya ke mann Nihaal ho gaya..aap ne sach hi kaha hai.yeh ek sadhaaran vakya,naa jaane kitne par prayog hota Rozaana Ki Zindagi..par Kabhi-Kabhi Choti-Choti Baatein Bahut Kuch Sikha Jaati Hai..aur mujhe Yeh vyaaka apne aap mein bahut gehra aur Inspire sa Kar Gaya..
aur upar se jis kavita ko aapke Comments Mil Jaaye,phir Uss Kavita Ke shabd Sadhaaran Nahi Reh Jaate..Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad Prateekji Aapka jo aapne iss padha aur saraha..
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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2009, 04:25:41 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 23, 2009, 05:47:36 PM
Bahut Khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish Ji

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajesh Ji Aapka...
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2009, 04:29:50 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 23, 2009, 04:30:42 PM
Aaj Se Do Din Pehle,Mere Ek Bahut Kareebi Dost Se Phone Par Meri Baat Ho Rahi Thi,Uss Baatcheet Ke Dauraan,unhone apni Zindagi ke Kuch Mushkile,Pareshaaniyaon Ke Baare Mein Mujhe Bataya..Jis Daur se Woh Guzre hai,Jo Imtehaan Unhone Zindagi Mein diye hai,yeh Kehte-Kehte,Phone Rakhte Waqt,Uss Dost Ne Aakhir Mein Yeh Baat Kahin Kahi Thi Ke,
"Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai.."
Yeh Line mere Dil Mein Reh Gayi,Yeh Line Bahut Inspire Karti Hai, ke Insaan Chahe Kitna Bhi Pareshaan Kyon Naa Ho,Usse Waqt Ke Mutaabik,Zindagi Mein Chalte Rehne Ke Liye,Yeh Baat Kehni Hi Padhti Hai Ke Haan, Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

Issi Soch Par,Kuch Likh Raha Hoon..

Neend Ka Kuch Pata Nahi Inn Aankhon Ko,
Neend Se Pehle Inn Aankhon Mein Aansu Aa Jaate Hai,
Waqt-Bewaqt Yeh Palkon Ko Bhiga Jaate Hai,
Sochta Hoon, Kyon Nahi Pahunchti Khuda Tak Yeh Meri Cheek Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Main Jab Hasta Hoon To Duniya Saath-Saath Hasti Hai,
Main Jab Rota Hoon To Koi Parchai Aas-Paas Bhi Nahi Dikhti Hai,
Khushiyon Mein Har Koi Mere Saath Hai,
Gham Mein Sirf Main Aur Mere Jazbaat Hai,
Duniya Ki Yeh Ajeeb Se Reet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Zimmedariyon Ka Bhoj Mujhe Ab Uthaana Hai,
Chal Raha Hoon, Chalna Hai, Aur Chalte Hi jaana Hai,
Teri Hi Kuch Nishaniyaan Ab Mere Meet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai...

Kaanton Ki Parwaah Karta Raha,
Khabar Na Thi Ke Phool Bhi Chot De Jaate Hai,
Par Kisi Ne Sach Hi Kahan Tha Ke,
Kehne walo Ka Kuch nahi Jaata,
Dard Sehne wale Hi Kamaal Kar Jaate Hai,
Tujhe Khokar Main Sab Kuch Haar Gaya Hoon,
Par Ab Mehsoos Hota Hai,
Uss Haar Mein Bhi Shayad  Meri Jeet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

                ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~


Bahot Bahoth Khoob Aur umda Kalam Pesh kiya apne Zindagi ki Haqiqath ko asaan se lafzoon rakh diya tumne Maza Agaya mere bhai !! Allah tumhe Khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2009, 04:47:22 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on January 23, 2009, 07:55:01 PM
Khwaish bro,

Kya feelings hain ! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause

Behtareen ! Excellent ! Superb ! Wah ! Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP

Aur baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Thanx A million Paaji..
aapko Iss Thread Mein Dekh kar behad Khushi Hui...
Aapko Yeh Kavita pasand aayi,
yeh jaankar mujhe bahut khushi mili hai..

  Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai..... icon_salut
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