Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: January 24, 2009, 05:30:51 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 24, 2009, 03:25:03 AM
kya baat hai ,,,khawish ji.....

kab tak hota hai, kuj bhi kiska,
jo paaya tha,wo hi toh khoya hai,
choti si toh baat hai,khoya aaj apna man ka meet hai.
......baaki sab theek hai......

yu toh kabhi nahin,haarta hun mein,
aaj mera beta,mujhko chod gaya hai,
aaj bete ke aage, haar gaya hun mein,
choti si toh baat hai,yeh duniya ki reet hai.
.......baaki sab theek hai........

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Caraji..Aap ne Bhi Khoob Likha Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: January 24, 2009, 07:06:38 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 23, 2009, 07:05:29 PM
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem Bro..Issi Soch Par Aap Bhi Kuch Likhte To Chaar Chand Lag Jaate Bro..

Are Bhai, Aap Kahaan, Hum Kahaan,.
Bas Azeem To Seekh raha Hai, Aap Jaise Bade Bhaiyon Ki Shayari Se,.
Aap Bas Hume Seekhne Ka Maukha Dete Rahiye,.
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«Reply #17 on: January 25, 2009, 06:32:38 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 24, 2009, 04:29:50 AM
Bahot Bahoth Khoob Aur umda Kalam Pesh kiya apne Zindagi ki Haqiqath ko asaan se lafzoon rakh diya tumne Maza Agaya mere bhai !! Allah tumhe Khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Qadeer Saheb..Aapne itna kuch keh diya ke kya kahoon!! Sach to yeh hai ke ,Hum Khud Aap se seekh Rahe hai..Teh Dil Se Shukaguzaar Hoon main aapka..
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«Reply #18 on: January 25, 2009, 06:40:27 AM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

Tarif ke liye alfaz nahi... ek behtareen peshkash... Thumbs UP

Kwaish ji.. bahut umda likha hai aapne.... aur

Ab Baki Sab Teek Hai Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: January 25, 2009, 06:45:35 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 23, 2009, 04:30:42 PM
Aaj Se Do Din Pehle,Mere Ek Bahut Kareebi Dost Se Phone Par Meri Baat Ho Rahi Thi,Uss Baatcheet Ke Dauraan,unhone apni Zindagi ke Kuch Mushkile,Pareshaaniyaon Ke Baare Mein Mujhe Bataya..Jis Daur se Woh Guzre hai,Jo Imtehaan Unhone Zindagi Mein diye hai,yeh Kehte-Kehte,Phone Rakhte Waqt,Uss Dost Ne Aakhir Mein Yeh Baat Kahin Kahi Thi Ke,
"Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai.."
Yeh Line mere Dil Mein Reh Gayi,Yeh Line Bahut Inspire Karti Hai, ke Insaan Chahe Kitna Bhi Pareshaan Kyon Naa Ho,Usse Waqt Ke Mutaabik,Zindagi Mein Chalte Rehne Ke Liye,Yeh Baat Kehni Hi Padhti Hai Ke Haan, Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

Issi Soch Par,Kuch Likh Raha Hoon..

Neend Ka Kuch Pata Nahi Inn Aankhon Ko,
Neend Se Pehle Inn Aankhon Mein Aansu Aa Jaate Hai,
Waqt-Bewaqt Yeh Palkon Ko Bhiga Jaate Hai,
Sochta Hoon, Kyon Nahi Pahunchti Khuda Tak Yeh Meri Cheek Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Main Jab Hasta Hoon To Duniya Saath-Saath Hasti Hai,
Main Jab Rota Hoon To Koi Parchai Aas-Paas Bhi Nahi Dikhti Hai,
Khushiyon Mein Har Koi Mere Saath Hai,
Gham Mein Sirf Main Aur Mere Jazbaat Hai,
Duniya Ki Yeh Ajeeb Se Reet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Zimmedariyon Ka Bhoj Mujhe Ab Uthaana Hai,
Chal Raha Hoon, Chalna Hai, Aur Chalte Hi jaana Hai,
Teri Hi Kuch Nishaniyaan Ab Mere Meet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai...

Kaanton Ki Parwaah Karta Raha,
Khabar Na Thi Ke Phool Bhi Chot De Jaate Hai,
Par Kisi Ne Sach Hi Kahan Tha Ke,
Kehne walo Ka Kuch nahi Jaata,
Dard Sehne wale Hi Kamaal Kar Jaate Hai,
Tujhe Khokar Main Sab Kuch Haar Gaya Hoon,
Par Ab Mehsoos Hota Hai,
Uss Haar Mein Bhi Shayad  Meri Jeet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

                ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~


aapki is nihayat hi umda rachna ne dil ko choo liya ....ek anoothi si pankti aur anokhi rachna.....bahoot khoob khwahish bro...hats of to you .. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: January 26, 2009, 10:44:48 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 25, 2009, 06:40:27 AM
Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

Tarif ke liye alfaz nahi... ek behtareen peshkash... Thumbs UP

Kwaish ji.. bahut umda likha hai aapne.... aur

Ab Baki Sab Teek Hai Ji Usual Smile

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Roja Aapka..Aap Ko Yeh Kavita Pasand Aayi,jaankar bahut Khushi Hui..

Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai...
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«Reply #21 on: January 26, 2009, 10:58:26 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 23, 2009, 04:30:42 PM
Aaj Se Do Din Pehle,Mere Ek Bahut Kareebi Dost Se Phone Par Meri Baat Ho Rahi Thi,Uss Baatcheet Ke Dauraan,unhone apni Zindagi ke Kuch Mushkile,Pareshaaniyaon Ke Baare Mein Mujhe Bataya..Jis Daur se Woh Guzre hai,Jo Imtehaan Unhone Zindagi Mein diye hai,yeh Kehte-Kehte,Phone Rakhte Waqt,Uss Dost Ne Aakhir Mein Yeh Baat Kahin Kahi Thi Ke,
"Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai.."
Yeh Line mere Dil Mein Reh Gayi,Yeh Line Bahut Inspire Karti Hai, ke Insaan Chahe Kitna Bhi Pareshaan Kyon Naa Ho,Usse Waqt Ke Mutaabik,Zindagi Mein Chalte Rehne Ke Liye,Yeh Baat Kehni Hi Padhti Hai Ke Haan, Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

Issi Soch Par,Kuch Likh Raha Hoon..

Neend Ka Kuch Pata Nahi Inn Aankhon Ko,
Neend Se Pehle Inn Aankhon Mein Aansu Aa Jaate Hai,
Waqt-Bewaqt Yeh Palkon Ko Bhiga Jaate Hai,
Sochta Hoon, Kyon Nahi Pahunchti Khuda Tak Yeh Meri Cheek Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Main Jab Hasta Hoon To Duniya Saath-Saath Hasti Hai,
Main Jab Rota Hoon To Koi Parchai Aas-Paas Bhi Nahi Dikhti Hai,
Khushiyon Mein Har Koi Mere Saath Hai,
Gham Mein Sirf Main Aur Mere Jazbaat Hai,
Duniya Ki Yeh Ajeeb Se Reet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Zimmedariyon Ka Bhoj Mujhe Ab Uthaana Hai,
Chal Raha Hoon, Chalna Hai, Aur Chalte Hi jaana Hai,
Teri Hi Kuch Nishaniyaan Ab Mere Meet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai...

Kaanton Ki Parwaah Karta Raha,
Khabar Na Thi Ke Phool Bhi Chot De Jaate Hai,
Par Kisi Ne Sach Hi Kahan Tha Ke,
Kehne walo Ka Kuch nahi Jaata,
Dard Sehne wale Hi Kamaal Kar Jaate Hai,
Tujhe Khokar Main Sab Kuch Haar Gaya Hoon,
Par Ab Mehsoos Hota Hai,
Uss Haar Mein Bhi Shayad  Meri Jeet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

                ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~


Waah waah...bohot bohot bohot khoob Khwaish.....bohot hi achcha likha hai aapne !
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«Reply #22 on: January 26, 2009, 10:59:26 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 25, 2009, 06:45:35 AM
aapki is nihayat hi umda rachna ne dil ko choo liya ....ek anoothi si pankti aur anokhi rachna.....bahoot khoob khwahish bro...hats of to you .. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro..Aap ne iss kavita ko saraha,ss baat ki mujhe Behad Khushi Hai..Shukriya icon_salut
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«Reply #23 on: January 31, 2009, 04:04:22 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on January 26, 2009, 10:58:26 AM
Waah waah...bohot bohot bohot khoob Khwaish.....bohot hi achcha likha hai aapne !

Teh Dil Se Shukarguzaar Hoon Celmira Main aapka ki aapne is Nazm ko Padha Aur Saraha..Shukriya  icon_salut
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«Reply #24 on: January 31, 2009, 06:42:26 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 23, 2009, 04:30:42 PM
Aaj Se Do Din Pehle,Mere Ek Bahut Kareebi Dost Se Phone Par Meri Baat Ho Rahi Thi,Uss Baatcheet Ke Dauraan,unhone apni Zindagi ke Kuch Mushkile,Pareshaaniyaon Ke Baare Mein Mujhe Bataya..Jis Daur se Woh Guzre hai,Jo Imtehaan Unhone Zindagi Mein diye hai,yeh Kehte-Kehte,Phone Rakhte Waqt,Uss Dost Ne Aakhir Mein Yeh Baat Kahin Kahi Thi Ke,
"Aur Baaki Sab Theek Hai.."
Yeh Line mere Dil Mein Reh Gayi,Yeh Line Bahut Inspire Karti Hai, ke Insaan Chahe Kitna Bhi Pareshaan Kyon Naa Ho,Usse Waqt Ke Mutaabik,Zindagi Mein Chalte Rehne Ke Liye,Yeh Baat Kehni Hi Padhti Hai Ke Haan, Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

Issi Soch Par,Kuch Likh Raha Hoon..

Neend Ka Kuch Pata Nahi Inn Aankhon Ko,
Neend Se Pehle Inn Aankhon Mein Aansu Aa Jaate Hai,
Waqt-Bewaqt Yeh Palkon Ko Bhiga Jaate Hai,
Sochta Hoon, Kyon Nahi Pahunchti Khuda Tak Yeh Meri Cheek Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Main Jab Hasta Hoon To Duniya Saath-Saath Hasti Hai,
Main Jab Rota Hoon To Koi Parchai Aas-Paas Bhi Nahi Dikhti Hai,
Khushiyon Mein Har Koi Mere Saath Hai,
Gham Mein Sirf Main Aur Mere Jazbaat Hai,
Duniya Ki Yeh Ajeeb Se Reet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai....

Zimmedariyon Ka Bhoj Mujhe Ab Uthaana Hai,
Chal Raha Hoon, Chalna Hai, Aur Chalte Hi jaana Hai,
Teri Hi Kuch Nishaniyaan Ab Mere Meet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai...

Kaanton Ki Parwaah Karta Raha,
Khabar Na Thi Ke Phool Bhi Chot De Jaate Hai,
Par Kisi Ne Sach Hi Kahan Tha Ke,
Kehne walo Ka Kuch nahi Jaata,
Dard Sehne wale Hi Kamaal Kar Jaate Hai,
Tujhe Khokar Main Sab Kuch Haar Gaya Hoon,
Par Ab Mehsoos Hota Hai,
Uss Haar Mein Bhi Shayad  Meri Jeet Hai,
Kuch Gham Hai Paas Mere Par Baaki Sab Theek Hai.....

                ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~



 Applause Applause Applause

bohat khoob khwaish ji .... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #25 on: January 31, 2009, 06:44:22 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bohat khoob khwaish ji .... Thumbs UP

Thankyou So Much Honeyrose For Appreciating!!
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«Reply #26 on: January 31, 2009, 06:46:49 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 31, 2009, 06:44:22 PM
Thankyou So Much Honeyrose For Appreciating!!

Shukriya Khwaish ji aapki har ghazal aur kavita dil ko chou leti hai
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«Reply #27 on: February 09, 2009, 01:59:56 PM »
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wa wah wah wah khwahish ji maine ye kam se kam 10 baar parha bahut hi achha laga abhi khuch soojg nahin raha magar main apni dairy main likh kar baad main yahaan submit jarur karungaaa wah ji wah.
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«Reply #28 on: February 12, 2009, 06:05:08 PM »
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Shukriya Khwaish ji aapki har ghazal aur kavita dil ko chou leti hai
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Aapne Itni Izzat Bakhsi Hai Honey!! Phir se Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aapka..
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«Reply #29 on: February 12, 2009, 06:10:23 PM »
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Quote from: rawattanha on February 09, 2009, 01:59:56 PM
wa wah wah wah khwahish ji maine ye kam se kam 10 baar parha bahut hi achha laga abhi khuch soojg nahin raha magar main apni dairy main likh kar baad main yahaan submit jarur karungaaa wah ji wah.

Rawattanha Ji,Agar Koi Kavita Itni Baar Padhi Jaaye,To Yeh Uss Kavita Ke Liye Sabse Bada Inaam Hoga..Teh Dil se shukarguzaar Hoon,Jo aapne iss Kavita ko apna itna samay diya..Aur Aapke Kavita ka Besabri se Intezaar hai..Zaroor Kuch Likheyega.. Shukriya
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