Aye Muflisi Rahem Kar ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on April 27, 2010, 12:24:05 PM
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kal raath khuch ajeeb se qayalon me gum tha ,na jane kyun khuch qayal umadd aye ..khuch ashar ussi pasmanzar me eak dam naye qayal liye howe .. pasand aye to nawaz dena ..

arzh kiya hai ke ,,,


Jane kya suncha tha kal raath sote howe !!
Khuch qaub mile hain bistar pe tote howe !!

Beti ki qamushi ne aqri kahe diya mujhe se !!
Muddath howi abbu ko ghar laute howe !!

Aye muflisi ab to rahem kar mujh per !!
Dekh meri beti ke sub kapde chute howe !!

samander pe nahi khuda pe bharosa hai qadeer !!
Mai pahonch jaunga kinare tak bahete howe !!

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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2010, 12:54:59 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai     Qadeer_junaid ji.....


Ya mallik ab toh rahem kar
bitiya jawan hogayi hai
samajhdar hogayi hai
kaheti kuch bhi nahi hai par
khamoshi uski sab bayan kar rahi hai
ab toh jaana hi padega mujhko apne ghar.....
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2010, 02:01:44 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob mere Bhai..

Doosre Aur teesre Ashaar Ne To Aankhon Ko Shabnami Kar diya..

Dil Ki Jhanjod Dene wale jazbaat pesh kiye hai aapne..Jo Log pardes mein apne Bachon se door rehte hai woh aur kareeb se iss Jazbaat Ko samaj paayenge..Bahut hi khoobsurat Peshkah icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2010, 02:57:31 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne Qadeer ji... bahut dard hai isme... bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2010, 03:53:52 PM »
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Marhaba Marhaba Marhaba..............apni to itni hasiyat bhi nahi Abdul Qadeer Saheb jo hum aapki is peshkash ke bare me kuch kahe...........bas aapke teesre sher sara wajood mano hila ke rakh diya........is nacheeze ki daad kabool kare mere bhai.

Makhta bhi khoob raha yu laga mano bohat bade daiee ne din ki dawat di ho sach hain saheb uparwale ki zaat se insaan ko kabhi naummeed nahi hona chahiye.....

Bas aapse yeh guzarish hai aap Roman Urdu par thodi mehnat kare, doosra sher intehaiee khoobsurat hone ke bavjood spelling error ki wajah se bemaza ho raha hai.
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2010, 09:25:05 PM »
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Wah Wah Kya baat keh di aap ne

Bhut hi khoob !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2010, 10:52:23 PM »
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Qadeer bhai jawaab nahi hai aapki is takhleeq ka matla aur uske baad ka sher bhut hi khoob rahe mashallah se jab khwaabo.n mai is bala ka sher keh rahe hain to haqeeqat mai kya hashr barpa karnge?? aapke is matle pe ek shayr azm behzaad sahab ka sher yaad aa rha hai apki nazr

bistar se karwat ka rishta toot gaya ek yaad ke saath
khaab sarhaane se uth baitha takiye ko sarkaane mai

likhte rahiye aur mehfil ki shan badhaate rahiye, dua mai yaad rakhiyega


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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2010, 10:13:28 AM »
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Aslam bhai jab apne kaha hai to acha hi hoga ,, apki dad hamare liye kissi tabaruk se kamm nahi .. ap jaisa shayar jo ke mushaire suna chuka ho eak adna si koshish ko is tarhan nawaze to waqai me hum jaise talib a ilm ke liye faqar ki baath hai bhai .. ye apka badtpan hai aslam sahab jo is tarhan se nawazte ho .. allah apko khush rakhe .. yun hi hausla afzai karte rahen to likhne ko himmat  o hausla ata ho ..

Apka bhai
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2010, 10:15:57 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 27, 2010, 02:01:44 PM
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob mere Bhai..

Doosre Aur teesre Ashaar Ne To Aankhon Ko Shabnami Kar diya..

Dil Ki Jhanjod Dene wale jazbaat pesh kiye hai aapne..Jo Log pardes mein apne Bachon se door rehte hai woh aur kareeb se iss Jazbaat Ko samaj paayenge..Bahut hi khoobsurat Peshkah icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut

bhai khawish sahab sab apki mahobbath hai bhai ,, apki faraq dili jo is tarhan se nawazte ho .. hausla afzai ka shukriya ..allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2010, 10:16:21 AM »
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wah bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower qadeer ji.
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2010, 12:51:24 PM »
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qadeer bhai bbbbbbbbbbbehtreen Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2010, 02:37:27 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 28, 2010, 12:51:24 PM
qadeer bhai bbbbbbbbbbbehtreen Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

karam nawazi hai bhai apki .. shukriya huzoor.. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2010, 01:04:50 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on April 27, 2010, 03:53:52 PM
Marhaba Marhaba Marhaba..............apni to itni hasiyat bhi nahi Abdul Qadeer Saheb jo hum aapki is peshkash ke bare me kuch kahe...........bas aapke teesre sher sara wajood mano hila ke rakh diya........is nacheeze ki daad kabool kare mere bhai.

Makhta bhi khoob raha yu laga mano bohat bade daiee ne din ki dawat di ho sach hain saheb uparwale ki zaat se insaan ko kabhi naummeed nahi hona chahiye.....

Bas aapse yeh guzarish hai aap Roman Urdu par thodi mehnat kare, doosra sher intehaiee khoobsurat hone ke bavjood spelling error ki wajah se bemaza ho raha hai.



bahoth bahoth shukriya mere bhai .. allah tumhe khush rakhe..


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Quote from: neelgold on April 27, 2010, 09:25:05 PM
Wah Wah Kya baat keh di aap ne

Bhut hi khoob !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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bahoth bahoth shukria ..allah apko khush rakhe ,,


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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2010, 06:05:10 AM »
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Qadeer Sahab Jawab nahi aapka...... Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut khoob..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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