Aye Muflisi Rahem Kar ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on April 27, 2010, 12:24:05 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 30, 2010, 06:49:07 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Qadeer ji.bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #16 on: April 30, 2010, 11:09:47 AM »
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Wah Abdul Qadeer bhai bahot khoobsurat creation hai ye aapki. Marhaba.
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«Reply #17 on: April 30, 2010, 07:17:09 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 30, 2010, 11:02:58 AM
Bhai Qadeer Aadab...
Sabse Pahle To Mafi Chahta Hun Deri Ke Liye
Umeed Karta Hun Aap Khairiyat Se Honge...
Aur Bhai Kya Hi Khub Peshkash Hai
Waqai Mein Tabiyat Mast Ho Gayi Parhke
Dil Se Nikli Dad Hazir Hai Kabul Farmaye...!

Yun Hi Apne Pyar Bhare Andaz Se Mehfil Ko
Roshan Karte Rahiyega....

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

bhai shihab walekum adaab ,,

hausla afzai ke liye shukriya .. apki mahubbath hai jo likhna ko hausla ata karti hain .. dad ke liye mumno hon .. khush rahen hamesha ..


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«Reply #18 on: April 30, 2010, 10:46:01 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on April 30, 2010, 06:05:10 AM
Qadeer Sahab Jawab nahi aapka...... Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut khoob..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

dad ke liye mumno hun ,,Allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #19 on: April 30, 2010, 11:57:02 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 11:09:47 AM
Wah Abdul Qadeer bhai bahot khoobsurat creation hai ye aapki. Marhaba.

janab a mann riyaz saheb ,,karam nawazi ke liye behad shukriya sarkar ,, yunhi hausla afzai karte rahe to likhne ko himmat ata ho ,, allah apkjo khush rakhe ..

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«Reply #20 on: May 01, 2010, 05:52:26 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 30, 2010, 06:49:07 AM
Wah bahut khoob Qadeer ji.bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

thanks a lot madhu ..


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«Reply #21 on: May 02, 2010, 06:10:11 PM »
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Quote from: cara on April 27, 2010, 12:54:59 PM
Wah kya baat hai     Qadeer_junaid ji.....


Ya mallik ab toh rahem kar
bitiya jawan hogayi hai
samajhdar hogayi hai
kaheti kuch bhi nahi hai par
khamoshi uski sab bayan kar rahi hai
ab toh jaana hi padega mujhko apne ghar.....

dad ke liye mamno hon ,, apne bhi qoob kaha hai ,, allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #22 on: May 02, 2010, 06:16:31 PM »
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qadeer bhai aap toh chha gaye
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«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2010, 06:47:40 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on May 02, 2010, 06:16:31 PM
qadeer bhai aap toh chha gaye

arre bhai sub apki mahubbath hai jigar ,, mai kahan kaanch ki kaani yaara , bus yunhi hausla dete rahiye ..likhne ko himmat mile..

allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #24 on: May 02, 2010, 08:42:26 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 27, 2010, 12:24:05 PM
kal raath khuch ajeeb se qayalon me gum tha ,na jane kyun khuch qayal umadd aye ..khuch ashar ussi pasmanzar me eak dam naye qayal liye howe .. pasand aye to nawaz dena ..

arzh kiya hai ke ,,,


Jane kya suncha tha kal raath sote howe !!
Khuch qaub mile hain bistar pe tote howe !!

Beti ki qamushi ne aqri kahe diya mujhe se !!
Muddath howi abbu ko ghar laute howe !!

Aye muflisi ab to rahem kar mujh per !!
Dekh meri beti ke sub kapde chute howe !!

samander pe nahi khuda pe bharosa hai qadeer !!
Mai pahonch jaunga kinare tak bahete howe !!

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lajawaab qadeer sahab...awesome...!!
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«Reply #25 on: May 06, 2010, 02:38:48 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on May 02, 2010, 08:42:26 PM
lajawaab qadeer sahab...awesome...!!

bhaijaan inayath ke liye shukriya hausla dete rahiyega .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #26 on: May 06, 2010, 02:45:07 PM »
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wah wah wah! bohat umda bohat khoob likha hai aapne qadeer ji..
  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: May 06, 2010, 02:59:15 PM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on May 06, 2010, 02:45:07 PM
wah wah wah! bohat umda bohat khoob likha hai aapne qadeer ji..
  Applause Applause Applause Applause

bhai saurab sahab aadaab..

sub apki mahubbath hai yara , apki nazron ka kamal hai baaqi hamari kya bisath .. behad mashkoor hon bhai .. yunhi hausla dete rahen .. allah apko khush rahe ..

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